Mìsha wrote:Image/Description:
xXxName: Mothflight
Gender: Female
Clan: Windclan
Rank: Medicine cat
Personality/Skills: Mothflight is a young and outgoing she-cat who excels in hunting and gathering rather then fighting. She's very gentle and passionate about her work, and can talk about it for hours and hours on end without even blinking. She's a pacifist and tends to stay out of the warriors ways, and tries to keep as an extremely close relationship with Starclan as she possibly can. She adores nature and working. She finds kits extremely tiresome and tends to stay away from them unless they need her assistance. Mothflight doesn't snap or argue easily, and is rarely mad. When she's stressed she tends to makes many mistakes, which is a huge flaw that she can't seem to correct.
Important Notes: N/A. I probably missed flight being reviewed,
Image/Description: Fluffy light brown tom with green/yellow eyes, he has a scar along his back.
Name: Bearstar (I'm unsure of a suitable name for him when he was a warrior.)
Gender: male
Clan: Streamclan
Rank: Leader
Personality/Skills: Tends to be angered easily, and is usually quite devious side. He's proud, and not the least bit respectful of his elders or any other cat for that matter. He's narcissistic and self centered, considering himself to be better then anyone else. He's a fighter, and when he became leader he did it in a way that would be unforgivable if anyone knew. He's an 'I don't care what you think' type of cat, who's personality wont change for the next female who walks nearby. He's unforgiving, ruthless, and doesn't give second chances.
Important Notes: He used to be a rogue, with a much more hidden devious side. The deputy of a clan fell in love with him, and because of that they allowed him into the clan. She soon became the leader, and named him deputy. He waited a few moons until she had settled in, and planned an attack that would happen on the patrol. He was a trusted member of the clan, and had a few followers that knew his true self. After his plan succeeded, he was deemed the leader of the clan, and allowed other rogues into it. It quickly became a clan with no code, and was a force to be reckoned with.
I get bored of goody-goody cats, so I thought I'd create a kind of ruthless cat. I can't think of a good name for him, so I'm hoping you can help me out with that once again! I'm also still working out his past and personality, so it's not all that good right now.
MothflightName Rating: 6/10
Name Type: Canonical/Lyrical
Name Reasoning: I could have sworn I put something up about -flight. I guess not. The basics follow -wing: it's something cats can't really do, and if it wanted to say a fast cat or agile climber, it's covered by -foot and -tail. That's really all that needs to be said on the suffix.
For the prefix, Moth- is a traditional name, but she's too dark for it. Moth- cats are a grey-brown or a tortoiseshell with a large amount of ginger and brown on them.
Alternative Name: Mudwhisker/Swiftwhisker. Mud- and Swift- (not the adjective, the noun) cover a dark brown cat, and -whisker indicates her hunting skills.
Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: I think the only question I'd have is why a medicine cat's excelling at hunting, but that can be handwaved with an interest in helping her Clan in more ways than just collecting herbs.
I GET TO REVIEW A VILLAIN CAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT [sound of guitar riffs and explosions]
BearstarName Rating: 5/10
Name Type: Canonical
Name Reasoning: The problem with Bear- is that bears aren't really in the UK. The UK, fortunately for them, has foxes and badgers as the worst threat. (Here in America we have to deal with mountain lions and wolves, plus their smaller cousins.) So, Bear- doesn't really work if he's in the UK. Then again, it probably wouldn't work too many other places, because bears tend to be a darker brown (like Grizzlies or Spectacles).
As for his suffix as a warrior, I see that he's a fighter, but I can't tell if he's a good fighter. If he is, he's a -claw, and if he isn't, I would assign -storm, because he's clearly a very...thunderous cat (Eh? Eh? Anyone? Whatever.).
Alternative Name: Martenclaw/Martenstorm/Rabbitclaw/Rabbitstorm. Marten- and Rabbit- are for a brown cat, and -storm and -claw are explained above.
Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: This is a fantastically sinister cat. The first villain I've gotten, and what a good start!
