rey skywalker wrote:i def think you can add in the mud slide happening, i don't think my writing will do justice to introduce that event, but i more than trust it in your creative hands. if you do end up adding it to your post, ill follow suit! either works for me personally. i think the apprentices swinging into action to save their mentors is great
wonpil wrote:oh crap i forgot they were gna be hit by a mudslide XD so we can either have it happen while they are about to delve into their own respective parties, orrrr the first group can be hit with it and then the other group hears them yowling and the trees breaking and come to help them? all the while getting swept up as well. i dunno!! its late >.< let me know what you guys think
Lights.Out wrote:Correct me if Iโm wrong, but I thought the original plan was to have Stormpaw and Patchpaw get caught up in the mudslide while the others save them?
It doesnโt matter much to me either way but I just want to understand exactly whatโs gonna happen ๐
I do still think I would like Stormpaw to be involved either way tho, because I believe it was previously discussed that it could possibly make Gullsplash feel a little guilty about not being there to help his apprentice
Iโm not too picky about what the plan is, I just want to be certain before it happens so Iโm not writing things incorrectly!
selasphorys wrote:@Paledapple's patrol
What do you all think about Stormpaw and Patchpaw getting buried in the mudslide? They'd have enough room to breathe but the other cats would have to dig them out before the thick muck solidifies. I think the apprentices-in-danger angle could be really interesting to play out, especially since Stormpaw's mentor isn't around to save her. (+extra guilt on Gullsplash lol)
Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 4 guests