Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

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Name: Mistyblaze
Description: All gray she cat with blue eyes and tabby markings
Important Notes: she is a sweet and kind she cat but can be really stubborn and sometimes rude but she is also a great hunter

[Arcaii]

Name: Mistyblaze
Description: All gray she cat with blue eyes and tabby markings
Important Notes: she is a sweet and kind she cat but can be really stubborn and sometimes rude but she is also a great hunter

And my bad habit of forgetting posts are there continues! Sorry.

Name Type: Lyrical
Name Reasoning: You reminded me to put up the "adjective" names on the front page. The basic reason that I don't support names like Misty-, Running- or Stony- is because, in my mind, a prefix should describe the cat's pelt. A prefix basically means "this cat looks like a _____" or "this cat is the color of _____", for identification purposes (it's easier to find a black cat named Night- than a black cat named Song-, especially if you don't know them).
I don't exactly know what a misty looks like - or is she being called misty? Personality names are also a miss, since there's no way of knowing that a cat will be sweet or mean or wild when they're born, and no mother is going to wait for their personality to be revealed (that will take up to 3 weeks) just for a simple name.
As for her suffix, I don't know what it could mean. She doesn't have a blaze marking, nor is she particularly fiery (which is covered up front).
Alternate Name: Cranewhisker/Ashwhisker. Both prefixes define a grey tabby, and -whisker is for her hunting abilities.
Notes: I should note that blue eyes are hard to justify on a grey cat. If she's pale enough, it could work. Also, she's got some of the "x but y" going on, which is also on the front page.

[sweet tooth]

Hey- is it ok if I use a digital cat? I promise you shes a realistic color. I just wanted to know if you would accept them.

[Arcaii]

Oh, definitely! Any picture can be used, so long as it's got enough of the body of the cat that I can get an accurate summary of their appearance without a description. (You would be amazed at how many people think just sending in a picture of a face is fine...)

[sweet tooth]

Image/Description:
Name:Dasiytail(I hope this qualifies as a Dasiy-. If not, then it will be Poplar-)
Gender:Molly(ugh I hate she-cat)
Clan:fanclan
Rank:Warrioir
Personality/Skills:
Personality:
She believes in disipline, but Dasiytail does it a bit much, often doing harsh punishment for something small like yelling at a cat elder to them. In her eyes, all crimes are very serious and must be dealt with very serious consequences. Dasiytail also believes she does no wrong; so when she gets punished, she will be determined to show her innocence, which normally ends up with her in even more serious trouble. Along with that, she is a kind molly that will give anything for her loved ones. She will sit down with you and listen if you have a problem , and will talk until all problems are done. Dasiytail is even known for staying up all night just to help a cat get over a love from another clan.
Important Notes: Great at climbing trees

[hqmary]

Image/Description: She's a very, very dark brown tabby with green eyes.
Name: Nightclaw
Gender: she-cat
Clan: Moonclan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Nightclaw is a rather cold, grumpy, strict, sharp-tounged cat, but she can take a joke sometimes and knows which cats are hurt easily, not ribbing them as much.
Important Notes: She used to be a loner, and had kits, but gave them away because she couldn't care for them. This made her a little sadder, but she had all the above listed traits before that. She's also a good hunter and fighter.

[Arcaii]

Image/Description:
Name:Dasiytail(I hope this qualifies as a Dasiy-. If not, then it will be Poplar-)
Gender:Molly(ugh I hate she-cat)
Clan:fanclan
Rank:Warrioir
Personality/Skills:
Personality:
She believes in disipline, but Dasiytail does it a bit much, often doing harsh punishment for something small like yelling at a cat elder to them. In her eyes, all crimes are very serious and must be dealt with very serious consequences. Dasiytail also believes she does no wrong; so when she gets punished, she will be determined to show her innocence, which normally ends up with her in even more serious trouble. Along with that, she is a kind molly that will give anything for her loved ones. She will sit down with you and listen if you have a problem , and will talk until all problems are done. Dasiytail is even known for staying up all night just to help a cat get over a love from another clan.
Important Notes: Great at climbing trees

Whoops, some trouble there for a sec. I'm back and ready to review.

Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Daisy- is better suited on a light golden or white cat, and I don't really recommend using solid prefixes for patched cats. Her other possible prefix fits her better.
Alternate Name: Poplartail, for the reasons above.

Character Assessment: I don't have much to say! She's a solid character, and certainly a very interesting one. She seems like someone who would be a nightmare of a mentor.
Character Suggestions: None!

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: She's a very, very dark brown tabby with green eyes.
Name: Nightclaw
Gender: she-cat
Clan: Moonclan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Nightclaw is a rather cold, grumpy, strict, sharp-tounged cat, but she can take a joke sometimes and knows which cats are hurt easily, not ribbing them as much.
Important Notes: She used to be a loner, and had kits, but gave them away because she couldn't care for them. This made her a little sadder, but she had all the above listed traits before that. She's also a good hunter and fighter.

Name Type: Misplaced Traditional
Name Reasoning: There's two main issues with her name: Night- is better used on a genuinely black cat (and, as you've noted, she isn't black, just incredibly dark-colored), and -claw is for a cat who solely excels in fighting. It seems like she does pretty well at both fighting and hunting. However, if she's merely a little above par and not notably talented, I wouldn't name her for either.
Alternate Name: Beetlefang/Spiderpelt/Ratfur (-pelt and -fur interchangeable). All three prefixes describe a very dark brown cat, and -fang is for if she is talented equally in fighting and hunting. If she's only pretty good, then stick with -fur or -pelt.

Character Assessment: I don't know if I have a lot to say here, honestly. There isn't too much to this character, but just enough that I can get a feel for what she's like.
Character Suggestions: I recommend delving further into her personality - her fears, hates, passions, favorite weather and why, whether she feels a special appreciation for plants or insects, etc.

[hqmary]

Thank you, Arcaii. One more character and I'll be out of your hair for now.
Image/Description: A white cat with watery blue eyes.
Name: Angelpaw
Gender: female
Clan: Mossclan
Rank: Apprentice
Personality/Skills:She's shy, but not cripplingly so. She likes kits, and hangs around the nursery. She's bad in hunting, fighting, organizational skills and balance.
Important Notes: I'm debating whether or not to make Angelpaw deaf.

[Arcaii]

Thank you, Arcaii. One more character and I'll be out of your hair for now.
Image/Description: A white cat with watery blue eyes.
Name: Angelpaw
Gender: female
Clan: Mossclan
Rank: Apprentice
Personality/Skills:She's shy, but not cripplingly so. She likes kits, and hangs around the nursery. She's bad in hunting, fighting, organizational skills and balance.
Important Notes: I'm debating whether or not to make Angelpaw deaf.

Sorry for the wait.


Name Suggestion: Cloverflower/Whiteflower.
Name Reasoning: I feel like Angel- would be right up there with Spirit- and Soul-. Whether or not you believe in angels/God, both of those things are human-centered, and a cat would have no idea what an angel is. They never refer to any helpers of StarClan (although the idea of angelic-messanger-servants-of-StarClan beings is quite frankly awesome and I'd read a fic about that), just StarClan itself.
For that reason, I recommend Frost- or White-, since they specifically describe a white cat, and -flower for her attention to kits. Please note that -flower means a cat has a personality for nurturing young, is rather skilled at it, and plans to raise their own children. If she doesn't have one of these qualities, then stick with the default suffixes.

Character Assessment: She needs some work, truthfully. I mean, shy and sweet are kinda defaults (I think they're up on the front page?), and her utter lack of coordination is questionable, especially in a Clan. There isn't too much about her personality, either, save her love of kits.
Character Suggestions: Making her deaf would be ideal, if you plan to keep the eye color. Also, give her some coordinative ability - as she is now, she sounds like a kittypet, or at the very least unsound. find a good personality for her - if you're stuck, try this generatorand see what you get.