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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Comettail76 » Fri Jan 02, 2015 5:26 pm

Arcaii wrote:
Comettail76 wrote:Expect more cats from me for now on, since I opened a thread where you adopt character concepts.

Image/Description: Slightly small silver tabby she-cat with pale green eyes
Name: Minnowheart
Gender: She-cat
Clan: None currently (Depends on adopter)
Rank: Warrior or Deputy
Personality/Skills: Minnowheart is not one to let her opinion go unheard. She'll challenge the leader in the middle of a meeting if she feels what they are doing is wrong. She believes that is is best not to start a fight, but if the clan is attacked, she believes that the clan should launch an attack of their own. She also challenges the warrior code and believes that cats do sometimes deserve to die, and that death should be a punishment for murder or attempted murder.
Important Notes: Her personality partially developed from one time, when a warrior tried to kill the deputy. The traitor was only exiled, and didn't even seem to mind that much, which infuriated Minnowheart, who was Minnowpaw at the time.

Image/Description: Tall, fluffy, pure white cat with amber colored eyes
Name: Iceclaw
Gender: Tom
Clan: None currently (Depends on adopter)
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Iceclaw is scared of battles, making his excellent skill in fighting lacking use. He is at ease during battle training and shows his talent there, but when it comes to a real fight, he runs away quickly, unless he is cornered and has no choice. He is friendly and enjoys chatting with his clanmates.
Important Notes: Iceclaw's fear of battles comes from his parents' deaths. There was a rouge to be driven out of clan borders, and his parents went with the patrol to help, being talented at fighting themselves. However, it turned out to be an ambush, and his father died in the battle and his mother died of injuries later.


Ohh boy. I'll have to be prepared, then.

Minnowheart
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Her name fits her just fine!
Alternate Name: None!

Character Assessment: There isn't a whole lot to say here. Her personality is fine, and I can see an instance like that affecting her, especially compiled by the life she lives as a feral cat.
Character Suggestions: None!



Iceclaw
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Nothing to say! His name's fine.
Alternate Name: None!

Character Assessment: If he's uncomfortable fighting, that's fine, but a cat cannot be named for their skill if they don't use it regularly to help their Clan. A cat would not be given the -claw suffix if they never use their fighting abilities.
Character Suggestions: I would remove the fear of fighting. Also, I think that having his parents' death affect his feelings towards battle could be removed. Cats tend to die. That's a regular part of Clan life. He could just be pretty uncomfortable with the sight and (what's more important to a cat) smell of the blood of his kin, or just plain doesn't like having to hurt other cats.


Okay, thank you for the tips on Iceclaw.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Fri Jan 02, 2015 5:39 pm

Wolvine wrote:Image/Description:
A large golden tabby with brown-green eyes.
Name: Waspheart
Gender: Tom
Clan: Firclan (potentially a lame fic-clan idk yet)
Rank: Deputy
Personality/Skills:
Waspheart is a cat who believes wholeheartedly in honour. He is an idealist and always looks for the best in others, and is determined to never give up on anyone. His honest belief inspires his clanmates to do better, and he seems to have a natural leadership about him, capable of rallying even the most apathetic of clancats with speeches and words. His ideals often coincide with the Warrior Code, and as such he has somehow become the old stereotypical rule-follower. In fact, many older clanmates remember the days when young Wasp-paw constantly picked fights with rival clancats three times his size for disagreeing with his views or coming just that little bit too close to the border. Thankfully he has mellowed with age, though that spark of fire still is present and shows itself form time to time. He is stubborn beyond all belief, especially when his morals are called into question, and he sees the world very much in black and white; he struggles with the concept of grey morality, and would let the world burn so to speak before lowering himself to what he deems unforgivable. He is a good though not exceptional fighter, average in hunting and tracking, but slightly on the slow side.
Important Notes:
[shrrugs] im not very good with righteous characters tbh im much better with more ambiguous and sleezy sorts

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An unusually tall and long-limbed black cat with green eyes, a long, pronounced snout and large ears. His somewhat abnormal appearance is considered appealing and a pleasant curiosity.
Name: Starlingface
Gender: Tom
Clan: Firclan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills:
Starlingface is an interesting bundle of contradictions. Born in Leafbare, his mother died from a bought of greencough spreading through camp, which never bothered him too much as he hardly remembered her. His father, though never unkind, was distant and took little interest in his only son's progress. Starlingface himself always strove to try and impress his father, which through a combination of his own mediocrity and his father's disinterest never worked out too well. Eventually Stalingface gave up and moved on to better things, though apparently the episode led him to believe that he had little value as a fighter or hunter. He has pretty much always been aware of his attractiveness and he is very smart, capable of thinking up battle plans and ideas on the spot, and in this he is very confident, to the point of arrogance. He is very charming and has a silvertongue, tending to talk and flirt his way out of situations rather than to fight. He often works with Waspheart to formulate strategies, acting as his balance. Starlingface is every bit as stubborn as the deputy, but sees the importance of compromise and having to bloody paws occasionally, though the warrior perhaps too easily resorts to these measures. He is the cynic to Waspheart's idealist, grounding him when he begins to float. Though there is obviously a lot of bickering and differing viewpoints, the two are close friends, and work well together. Though he flirts thoughtlessly with most cats, it has become evident to most of the clan (apart from the deputy himself) that Starlingface's interest in Waspheart may not be purely platonic.

Important Notes: ech the name fits but it seems really clunky to me idk. firclan is in a rather secluded area where kittypets are pretty much non-existent. Starling has asian-cat heritage, which i dont quite know how to explain in words but i see a lot irl. im a sucker for the cynic loving the idealist trope im sorry i am trash


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A small reddish-brown tabby with yellow eyes and white muzzle and throat.
Name: Grousefang
Gender: Molly
Clan:Firclan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills:
Grousefang is a tough cat. She is by far one of the most ruthless and fierce fighters in the clan, and a level-headed and talented hunter. When out of camp she takes no nonsense and is entirely goal-focused, a contrast with the loud and boisterous cat she is when not on patrol. She loves to laugh and makes jokes, and is most certainly not your prim and proper blushing queen. She is frequently somewhat vulgar in her jokes, but her clanmates have learnt to just let her be for fear of incurring her wrath. Despite her apparent disregard, Grousefang is extremely religious. As an apprentice she was involved in an accident that was feared would cost her life, or at least leave her seriously crippled. When she made a miraculous recovery with almost no side-effects, she became convinced it was the will of Starclan. She takes nothing more seriously than her ancestors and is highly superstitious, believing any 'omens' that may be presented to her, even if interpreted by a kit.
Important Notes: idk more boring


Wolvine, I don't know what it is, but your way of talking and characters charm me every time I come across them. I have no idea why. I'm always cracking up (both in amusement and just general "this is rad") at your notes and some character descriptions.

That...probably sounded really weird and out of left field. I'm sorry. Anyway...

Waspheart
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Why does the name Waspheart resonate with me so much? Maybe because it just sounds super cool, or like a superhero/supervillain name. Whatever it is, I love it.
Anyway, his name is perfect for him!
Alternate Name: None!

Character Assessment: This guy's awesome! I can definitely see him being chosen as a deputy, and he's got an interesting history and personality. No complaints!
Also, ambiguous and sleazy characters are excellent. As are ambiguously sleazy characters.
Character Suggestions: None.



Starlingface
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Not much to say! It's a good name. If you're having trouble with the prefix, I can recommend some others to you.
Alternate Name: Shadeface/Sloeface. Both prefixes describe a black cat, and his suffix stays as it is.

Character Assessment: I believe the term you're looking for is Oriental, which is a general breed description that refers to cats who are built like the siamese. My particular favorite (and just all around favorite breed) is the Oriental Shorthair.
Anyways, he's neat! I have to wonder how he ended up looking like he did (perhaps some kittypet ancestry), so an explanation for that wouldn't be amiss, but either way, I like him.
AND DONT WORRY...ITS A GOOD TROPE...(Arcaii confession time: hates romance, but loves the cynic/idealist trope. Loves it. But only if it's done well.)
Character Suggestions: None!



Grousefang
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Three in a row on solid names! Well done.
Alternate Name: None!

Character Assessment: Oh, my God, I love her. I feel like we would get along extremely well when off the clock.
This sounds like an all around entertaining cat to read about, to write, or just to listen to, and I extremely like the religious aspect, especially when juxtaposed with her personality. What else can I say here? Tenouttaten.
Character Suggestions: None!
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Wolvine » Sat Jan 03, 2015 12:54 am

[sweats nervously] im also really eh towards most romance but i absolutely fall for the cynic/idealist trope every single time its so frustrating and im sick of falling into the same trap. uhh yeah starling was meant to have kittypet ancestry but apparently i forgot to mention it bc im a dummy sorry. Oriental might be the term, I was thinking about shorthair kind of build but headshape like my own kitty, who is a burmese-y type thai cat with what is almost but not quite an applehead. i'll try and get a picture for you soon. also i am v hapyp with waspheart's name. i love the wasp/hornet prefixes and it just fit with heart so well hee

aahhh my ooc typing is so messy and bad and full of typos and my characters are all loser nerds thank you so much tho it means a lot you are amazing sorry
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby .kestral » Sat Jan 03, 2015 5:55 am

Image/Description:
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He also has a large scar on his back left leg, the leg is twisted with very little fur. The paw is mangled.
Name:
Harepaw
Gender:
Tom
Clan:
None yet. Something in very thick woods.
Rank:
Apprentice / Elder
*Honorary elder, he was made an elder at 10 moons. See below. (He's only 20 moons now)
Personality/Skills:
Calm, friendly, he's the kind of cat everyone likes to go too. The apprentices love to go to him for advice as he was a very skilled cat when he was an actual apprentice. When his leg isn't hurting as much he can still show them basic crouches and other moves but not struggles with anything more advanced. He was definitely a -claw cat before the accident and loved the thrill of the fight. Now he worries about his clan in battles and such, he often feels guilty about not being able to fight beside his clanmates. He feels like he is a burden as the other elders all served there clan and earned there rest, he feels like he hasn't given enough and doesn't deserve a life of relaxing.

*I need more, I know this, I'm just not sure where to go with his character.
Important Notes:
Harepaws mentor fell pregnant while training him. Her mate became his new mentor. While out hunting they heard reports of foxes in the camp and raced back. A fox was attacking his old mentor and her mate was prepared to get in the way. Harepaw got there first, as a kit he had never known his father and didn't want more kits to experiance that. The fox broke his leg twisting it and shredding his paw. The wound and break were not fixable and so now he lives in the elders den.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby TheSaestar » Sat Jan 03, 2015 6:16 am

Thanks for the reveiw! I guess Silvermoon wasn't too bad. Can you review this cat too?

Name: Cloudfrost
Gender: She-cat
Clan and Role: Thunder clan warrior
Image/Description: White and grey patched short fur (mostly white), dark green eyes, grey-pink nose, short whiskers
Notes: She is quite reserved, and when she talks to others it's usually brisk or her telling someone to get back on task. She is not mean though, and is usually thinking of others when she takes action.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Sat Jan 03, 2015 6:59 am

Wolvine wrote:[sweats nervously] im also really eh towards most romance but i absolutely fall for the cynic/idealist trope every single time its so frustrating and im sick of falling into the same trap. uhh yeah starling was meant to have kittypet ancestry but apparently i forgot to mention it bc im a dummy sorry. Oriental might be the term, I was thinking about shorthair kind of build but headshape like my own kitty, who is a burmese-y type thai cat with what is almost but not quite an applehead. i'll try and get a picture for you soon. also i am v hapyp with waspheart's name. i love the wasp/hornet prefixes and it just fit with heart so well hee

aahhh my ooc typing is so messy and bad and full of typos and my characters are all loser nerds thank you so much tho it means a lot you are amazing sorry


Please do get a picture, I'm really curious about this cat of yours.

DONT EVEN STRESS FRIEND, ALL OF US ARE LOSER NERDS
WE WELCOME YOU AND YOUR OCS
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Sat Jan 03, 2015 7:00 am

.kestral wrote:Image/Description:
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He also has a large scar on his back left leg, the leg is twisted with very little fur. The paw is mangled.
Name: Harepaw
Gender: Tom
Clan: None yet. Something in very thick woods.
Rank: Apprentice / Elder
*Honorary elder, he was made an elder at 10 moons. See below. (He's only 20 moons now)
Personality/Skills:
Calm, friendly, he's the kind of cat everyone likes to go too. The apprentices love to go to him for advice as he was a very skilled cat when he was an actual apprentice. When his leg isn't hurting as much he can still show them basic crouches and other moves but not struggles with anything more advanced. He was definitely a -claw cat before the accident and loved the thrill of the fight. Now he worries about his clan in battles and such, he often feels guilty about not being able to fight beside his clanmates. He feels like he is a burden as the other elders all served there clan and earned there rest, he feels like he hasn't given enough and doesn't deserve a life of relaxing.

*I need more, I know this, I'm just not sure where to go with his character.
Important Notes:
Harepaws mentor fell pregnant while training him. Her mate became his new mentor. While out hunting they heard reports of foxes in the camp and raced back. A fox was attacking his old mentor and her mate was prepared to get in the way. Harepaw got there first, as a kit he had never known his father and didn't want more kits to experiance that. The fox broke his leg twisting it and shredding his paw. The wound and break were not fixable and so now he lives in the elders den.


For some reason the picture isn't coming up for me (I'm starting to think there's something wrong with my computer...). Do you think you can grab another one?
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Sat Jan 03, 2015 7:04 am

TheSaestar wrote:Thanks for the reveiw! I guess Silvermoon wasn't too bad. Can you review this cat too?

Name: Cloudfrost
Gender: She-cat
Clan and Role: Thunder clan warrior
Image/Description: White and grey patched short fur (mostly white), dark green eyes, grey-pink nose, short whiskers
Notes: She is quite reserved, and when she talks to others it's usually brisk or her telling someone to get back on task. She is not mean though, and is usually thinking of others when she takes action.


Name Type: Canonical
Name Reasoning: As long as she isn't really notably patched (like, if she's patched about this much), her prefix fits her just fine.
-frost is covered on the front page, but basically I consider it a negative suffix. At best, it implies the cat is cold and distant, and my firm belief is that a suffix should note only the most positive traits of a cat.
Alternate Name: Cloudpelt/Cloudfur. Defaults again (my apologies), but if you want other suffixes, I have a list of them around here somewhere, and what they entail.

Character Assessment: I think she's just fine! I don't have much to say here.
Character Suggestions: None!
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby .kestral » Sat Jan 03, 2015 7:24 am

Uh his picture is one I used before. A few pages back. Let me try and find it.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby .kestral » Sat Jan 03, 2015 7:25 am

.kestral wrote:Hey Arcaii
What sort of names would fit these three?
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His picture is the second one here.
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