Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[Arcaii]

MERRY CHRISTMAS YA FILTHY ANIMALS

[Arcaii]

Hi Arcaii! Just thought I'd drop in and say 'Merry Christmas!' because here, in Poland, we have all the main celebrations today [beetroot soup, 'pigeons', that's a dish, that cheesecake I baked and Mass at midnight] including the presents! I thought you may also want to know, I set up a Warrior Cats Name and Character Review on another site.

SPREAD THE CHRISTMAS MINT
ENJOY ALL THE FOOD AND THE WHATNOT (i hope you dont actually eat pigeons, goodness)

ALSO GOOD LUCK ON THAT REVIEW THREAD
I BELIEVE IN YOU

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Name: WinterKit,WinterPaw, WinterWind?
Description: White cat with blue eyes and a little gray on her tail
Important Notes: WinterKit is very Shy but yet very nice!

[Arcaii]

image ;; view
name ;; honeystream.
gender ;; tom.
clan ;; mehclan.
age range ;; 21 - 23 moons.
rank ;; warrior.
personality / skills ;; when she was younger, honeystream was the kit that managed to get under every cats skin ; she thought she was always right, with a nosey attitude she managed to always put her paw in it. as she grew from apprentice to warrior she matured. honeystream is stubborn, even if there's no hope this optimistic she-cat rarely gives up. her stubbornness matched with her patient nature is what led her to be the excellent swimmer she is today. she's a bit of hopeless romantic, she tends to fall head-over-tail a little too easily. while she loves kits and can often be found playing around with the young ones in the nursery, she was not motherly enough to earn the suffix -flower. a generally cheery she-cat with a kind heart - which may lie as the root of the problems at her below-par fighting skills - and an open ear matched with a shoulder to cry on ; however, every cat has their demons and honeyleaf has self-esteem issues. she has a stutter and was often teased as a kit because of it, made worse by absent-mindedness and being one of the clumsiest cats in her clan. she doesn't often have bad days with her own problems, she enjoys being happy and "keeping up the spirits of her clanmates." [ honeystream is an excellent swimmer and an above-average hunter and tracker. she is not notably skilled with fighting nor with kits. ]
important notes ;; none.
she's a new character so could use some work ^^

also, if you could spare a moment, what colour is this cat? i can't figure it out.

Hello and Merry Christmas! I would consider that cat to be a dark torbie (there's ginger amongst the grey). This, of course, means that this particular cat is a molly.

Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Her name fits her perfectly, so I've got no complaints here!
Alternate Name: None!

Character Assessment: I do have one small issue in this section, and that's the combination of her clumsiness and her skill in swimming and above average abilities in hunting. Both of these things require grace and coordination, so to attach them to a clumsy cat is never a good idea (plus, I have no idea if cats can even be clumsy. As long as they have their tails, I mean...).
Character Suggestions: Remove the clumsiness.

[Arcaii]

Haha, I actually based Lionfoot and his mate Dapplecloud off of two real-life cats and the first thing I noticed about the cat was that he looked like a lion, so that's what I called him X3 he was handsome. Actually some of the cats are based off real cats...which I think is cool.

I'll just need to work out a few kinks with Patchclaw and she should look better...so a red and white kitten wouldn't be likely? I think I'll do the golden and white kitten ^^ not sure what I'll call it yet, but I'll work on that, thanks!

Let me know if you need more help. Happy Holidays!

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Name: WinterKit,WinterPaw, WinterWind?
Description: White cat with blue eyes and a little gray on her tail
Important Notes: WinterKit is very Shy but yet very nice!

I don't know if you saw this....

[Arcaii]

I saw it. Please try to be patient.

Name: WinterKit,WinterPaw, WinterWind?
Description: White cat with blue eyes and a little gray on her tail
Important Notes: WinterKit is very Shy but yet very nice!

Name Type: Lyrical
Name Reasoning: There's one massive issue with the name right off the bat - warriors do not have "winter". They have leaf-bare and no-leaf, but they don't have winter. I'm also not very sure what -wind would imply for her, since she isn't described as fast or anything.
Alternate Name: Snowpelt/Frostfur. Both prefixes describe a majority white cat, and as she has no nameable skills or personality traits, she receives the defaults.
Notes: I suggest adding just a little more grey on her (maybe her tail completely and some grey on her head), since a white cat with blue eyes and no other markings is usually deaf. Also, merry christmas! (Or happy Hanukkah, whichever you celebrate.)

[sweet tooth]

Image/Description:White, long furred cat with a few ginger patches and green eyes
Name:Dasiytail
Gender:She-cat
Clan:Fandomclan(MeadowClan/Hollowclan)
Rank:Warrior
Personality/Skills:Strong-willed she cat who is ready to do what it takes to get a lesson through, though, if there's no way its possible, she won't even try.However, don't take that a as serious cat; most of time shes friendly, she just wants her point across if she can.
She is very patient and will listen to everything you say before saying her thoughts. To her, a clan is family, and if one cat doesn't do the work, the whole clan falls apart. A single warrior can feed the clan during leaf-bare, a queen can care for not just her kits, but for every generation afterwards.
Important Notes: She is an excellent climber

[Arcaii]

Image/Description:White, long furred cat with a few ginger patches and green eyes
Name:Dasiytail
Gender:She-cat
Clan:Fandomclan(MeadowClan/Hollowclan)
Rank:Warrior
Personality/Skills:Strong-willed she cat who is ready to do what it takes to get a lesson through, though, if there's no way its possible, she won't even try.However, don't take that a as serious cat; most of time shes friendly, she just wants her point across if she can.
She is very patient and will listen to everything you say before saying her thoughts. To her, a clan is family, and if one cat doesn't do the work, the whole clan falls apart. A single warrior can feed the clan during leaf-bare, a queen can care for not just her kits, but for every generation afterwards.
Important Notes: She is an excellent climber

Did I miss this somehow? I feel like I did. I'm not sure why.

Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: This is important: how significant are those patches? If they're very minimal (like so), then her name fits her perfectly. But if she's genuinely patched (as such), then she needs a different prefix.
Alternate Name: Bright-tail/Poplartail, if she's significantly patched. If not, keep her name.

Character Assessment: There's two issues here: the first being that her determination to do what needs to be done no matter what sharply contradicts with the addition of her not even trying if she doesn't see a way for something to be possible. A properly determined person will stop and nothing, even the insurmountable, just to get things done.
The second is that her beliefs (that a Clan cat should dedicate themselves fully and use their complete potential for the Clan that a Clan is a family, and that any warrior can serve their Clan well) aren't just beliefs. They're fact. A Clan must work in the way you described it, otherwise the Clan system is incomplete. It's sort of like calling her "loyal to the Clan". It's not a necessary addition - she should be loyal, just as she should hold those beliefs, and a Clan should adhere to them.
Other than that, she seems solid.
Character Suggestions: Just fix the two things above.

[sweet tooth]

Image/Description:White, long furred cat with a few ginger patches and green eyes
Name:Dasiytail
Gender:She-cat
Clan:Fandomclan(MeadowClan/Hollowclan)
Rank:Warrior
Personality/Skills:Strong-willed she cat who is ready to do what it takes to get a lesson through, though, if there's no way its possible, she won't even try.However, don't take that a as serious cat; most of time shes friendly, she just wants her point across if she can.
She is very patient and will listen to everything you say before saying her thoughts. To her, a clan is family, and if one cat doesn't do the work, the whole clan falls apart. A single warrior can feed the clan during leaf-bare, a queen can care for not just her kits, but for every generation afterwards.
Important Notes: She is an excellent climber

Did I miss this somehow? I feel like I did. I'm not sure why.

Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: This is important: how significant are those patches? If they're very minimal (like so), then her name fits her perfectly. But if she's genuinely patched (as such), then she needs a different prefix.
Alternate Name: Bright-tail/Poplartail, if she's significantly patched. If not, keep her name.

Character Assessment: There's two issues here: the first being that her determination to do what needs to be done no matter what sharply contradicts with the addition of her not even trying if she doesn't see a way for something to be possible. A properly determined person will stop and nothing, even the insurmountable, just to get things done.
The second is that her beliefs (that a Clan cat should dedicate themselves fully and use their complete potential for the Clan that a Clan is a family, and that any warrior can serve their Clan well) aren't just beliefs. They're fact. A Clan must work in the way you described it, otherwise the Clan system is incomplete. It's sort of like calling her "loyal to the Clan". It's not a necessary addition - she should be loyal, just as she should hold those beliefs, and a Clan should adhere to them.
Other than that, she seems solid.
Character Suggestions: Just fix the two things above.

Thanks:P
Yea shes significantly, just how the sencond cat looks, so Poplartail is good
And about the clan thing-never really thought about that. Its true though.