Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[.kestral]

Altias would you be willing to review a clan idea? Over pm if possible.

[WilloweWolf]

Name: Rabbitfur
Description: I don't have a picture, but she's mostly white with a black and white tail and a small ginger patch on the point of each shoulder bone. Her fur is very soft.
Important Notes:Okay, Rabbitfur is actually my cat Glitch in real life, but I wanted to see what you thought of the name. My sister and I like to give our cats Warriors' names.

EDIT:OMG. I found a random warriors name generator, and one of the names was Antstar.

[luvarien]

Image/Description:
Here~
Name: Sootwhisker {this is just a temporary name, suggestions for a new one would be appreciated!}
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: -- {no specific clan, actually, I use her in a lot of different roleplays}
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Sootwhisker is a pretty mysterious cat, in all honesty. She does like to sneak around, and was practically built for stealth. She is a very good hunter, that earning her the suffix she now has. She has only rarely ever scared away prey by making noises. If she wanted to, she could stalk you for half an hour without you even knowing she was there. She is a fairly sweet cat when you catch her in a good mood, even if that isn't too often, though she does have those moments where she can be pretty grouchy. She isn't the strongest of cats in the clan, but she makes up for that with her hunting skills. She is very stubborn and very protective, sometimes getting slightly too attached to things that she shouldn't.
Important Notes: Nothing really, except that she is an excellent hunter, but that is mentioned above ^^

[Altias]

Altias would you be willing to review a clan idea? Over pm if possible.

Absolutely! I might not get to it right away, so sorry in advance for that, ehehe.

[.kestral]

Altias would you be willing to review a clan idea? Over pm if possible.

Absolutely! I might not get to it right away, so sorry in advance for that, ehehe.

That's okay. Will send it over tomorrow. It has extra ranks and all sorts.

[Altias]

Name: Rabbitfur
Description: I don't have a picture, but she's mostly white with a black and white tail and a small ginger patch on the point of each shoulder bone. Her fur is very soft.
Important Notes:Okay, Rabbitfur is actually my cat Glitch in real life, but I wanted to see what you thought of the name. My sister and I like to give our cats Warriors' names.

EDIT:OMG. I found a random warriors name generator, and one of the names was Antstar.

Hello!

Name Suggestion: Ravenfur.[/b]
Name Reasoning: As this cat's mostly black-furred, she gets a black-implying prefix. When you say 'white tail', I'm assuming you just mean the tip! Rabbit- does not apply to a black-furred cat (and would be infinitely more suitable for a cat that has brown fur). If her tortoiseshell bits were more notable I'd suggest a different prefix. -fur stays because she's got no notable traits.

Antstar is a perfectly fine name for a cat, traditionally! Ant- would be for a small, black-furred cat.

[Altias]

Image/Description:
Here~
Name: Sootwhisker {this is just a temporary name, suggestions for a new one would be appreciated!}
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: -- {no specific clan, actually, I use her in a lot of different roleplays}
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Sootwhisker is a pretty mysterious cat, in all honesty. She does like to sneak around, and was practically built for stealth. She is a very good hunter, that earning her the suffix she now has. She has only rarely ever scared away prey by making noises. If she wanted to, she could stalk you for half an hour without you even knowing she was there. She is a fairly sweet cat when you catch her in a good mood, even if that isn't too often, though she does have those moments where she can be pretty grouchy. She isn't the strongest of cats in the clan, but she makes up for that with her hunting skills. She is very stubborn and very protective, sometimes getting slightly too attached to things that she shouldn't.
Important Notes: Nothing really, except that she is an excellent hunter, but that is mentioned above ^^

Hello! Thanks for posting.

Sootwhisker

Name Suggestion: Starlingwhisker.
Name Reasoning: Soot- is more for a dark gray cat. Starling- better implies black fur and white bits! -whisker fits her just fine, though.

Character Rating: 8/10
Character Reasoning: It's not really good to note things that are infrequent in a bio; for example, if she's mostly just grumpy, you shouldn't note that "she can be really sweet when she's not!!" because, while that might be true, it's not something one would notice - she's grumpy, more often than not, and should stay that way. I'd suggest making her a cat who's stubborn, set in her ways, and often ignorant to alternative opinions; she may hate being criticized because she feels she's always right.

[Altias]

Altias would you be willing to review a clan idea? Over pm if possible.

Absolutely! I might not get to it right away, so sorry in advance for that, ehehe.

That's okay. Will send it over tomorrow. It has extra ranks and all sorts.

Ooh, sounds wonderful! I'll look forward to it, then.

[WilloweWolf]

Name: Rabbitfur
Description: I don't have a picture, but she's mostly white with a black and white tail and a small ginger patch on the point of each shoulder bone. Her fur is very soft.
Important Notes:Okay, Rabbitfur is actually my cat Glitch in real life, but I wanted to see what you thought of the name. My sister and I like to give our cats Warriors' names.

EDIT:OMG. I found a random warriors name generator, and one of the names was Antstar.

Hello!

Name Suggestion: Ravenfur.[/b]
Name Reasoning: As this cat's mostly black-furred, she gets a black-implying prefix. When you say 'white tail', I'm assuming you just mean the tip! Rabbit- does not apply to a black-furred cat (and would be infinitely more suitable for a cat that has brown fur). If her tortoiseshell bits were more notable I'd suggest a different prefix. -fur stays because she's got no notable traits.

Antstar is a perfectly fine name for a cat, traditionally! Ant- would be for a small, black-furred cat.

Actually, she's mostly white. And I suppose I should say her tail is black, ginger, and white.

[Altias]

Actually, she's mostly white. And I suppose I should say her tail is black, ginger, and white.

Ah, alright, sorry for misreading. In that case, use a white-implying prefix, such as Laurel-, Swan-, or Garlic-.