Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer (ENDED)

[Arcaii]

Clan Name:
Scarletclan
Territory:
The Forest is their hunting grounds. The forest is their territory.


A River runs through the territory


A Herb Garden is in the south-east part of the territory. Herbs grow there. It is pretty small and many different herbs grow there.

Notable History:
A rouge gang lived near the clans. When the clans left to go to the lake, the gang took over their territory. Cats disliked the territories combined, like where the moonstone was (currently a hunting ground for the moor) and where the marsh was. Many cats became enemies with other cats from the gang. The gang split in two; one side took the forest and the other took the moor. Rouges claimed the marsh and the river. The gangs became clans, the forest cats became Scarletclan, the moor became Wolfclan, the river became Creekclan and the marsh became Shadeclan.
Unique Skills:
Skilled climbers, great at hiding in the undergrowth
Reputation/Personality:
They are the Thunderclan of clans. They are the clan that watches out for other cats, taking loners and kittypets in. Most clans dislike them because of that. Scarletclan doesn't get into arguments or battles easily.
Average Clan Member:
They are swift and normally small and have thin fur. They have strong legs and long claws for climbing trees.
Important Notes:
None

Name Rating: 5/10
Name Reasoning: Scarlet is a nice word, but it doesn't really have anything to do with these cats and the place they live in. They do have a big, beautiful forest to work with, so they ought to be named for that.
Alternative Name: ForestClan/WoodClan.

Clan Rating: 10/10
Clan Reasoning: There isn't much that I don't agree with here. The cats have skills that fit with their territory, they have a good set of traits and regular appearances (that also fit with their territory), and the territory itself is pretty good.
Suggestions: None!

[Arcaii]

Clan Name: IceClan
Territory:

This is there main territory in Leaf-Bare:



This is it in Green-leaf:




Important Notes:
It is a cold part of the world, so it is cold almost all year.

Clan Rating: 9/10
Clan Reasoning: The name is nice an accurate, and I imagine that there would still be a little snow here and there throughout the year, so I have no quarrels with this name! The territory is nice, too.
Suggestions: None!

[Mogwai]

Clan Name: Aquaclan.
Territory: A pine forest. The camp is a small meadow area which has a small waterfall and a pond at the bottom (A river also weaves away.
Notable History: Splashfeather, a warrior in Spiritclan (Not the spiritclan seen in earlier reviews, it's my friend's clan c: )left the clan, after being threatened several times by the warriors there. Swiftclaw left for the same reason, going with Splashfeather to a small area, far away from Spiritclan. Swiftclaw suggested that they should make a clan on their own. Splashfeather agreed to this idea, and thus became Splashstar, with her deputy, Swiftclaw, by her side. (Two other cats from Spiritclan also came to Aquaclan later on, a male and a female. Babies everywhere!)
Unique Skills: They swim very well. Hunting fish isn't a problem for them, they aren't afraid to get their paws wet. They are decent tree climbers.
Reputation/Personality: They are sometimes very shy and timid, but when threatened to a battle, they are vicious and brave.
Average Clan Member: Short/medium fur. Sweet and kind to other clan members. Shy when in a clan gathering.
Important Notes: They don't believe in Starclan. And the warrior code is more like "guidelines" to them.

[Arcaii]

Clan Name: Aquaclan.
Territory: A pine forest. The camp is a small meadow area which has a small waterfall and a pond at the bottom (A river also weaves away.
Notable History: Splashfeather, a warrior in Spiritclan (Not the spiritclan seen in earlier reviews, it's my friend's clan c: )left the clan, after being threatened several times by the warriors there. Swiftclaw left for the same reason, going with Splashfeather to a small area, far away from Spiritclan. Swiftclaw suggested that they should make a clan on their own. Splashfeather agreed to this idea, and thus became Splashstar, with her deputy, Swiftclaw, by her side. (Two other cats from Spiritclan also came to Aquaclan later on, a male and a female. Babies everywhere!)
Unique Skills: They swim very well. Hunting fish isn't a problem for them, they aren't afraid to get their paws wet. They are decent tree climbers.
Reputation/Personality: They are sometimes very shy and timid, but when threatened to a battle, they are vicious and brave.
Average Clan Member: Short/medium fur. Sweet and kind to other clan members. Shy when in a clan gathering.
Important Notes: They don't believe in Starclan. And the warrior code is more like "guidelines" to them.

Name Rating: 2/10
Name Reasoning: Aqua refers to the color blue that is mostly associated with blue. But here's the thing: Aqua comes from the Spanish word for water. The cats, who don't speak Spanish, would not have that word.
They do appear to have water, but they live in a forest, which I think is more important.
Alternative Name: PineClan/GroveClan.

Clan Rating: 3/10
Clan Reasoning: The cats don't really have a whole lot of water to go around swimming in. You've pretty much only described a forest with a stream or two. That's easily something that can be fixed, I think, but I want to address something more important.
Without the belief in StarClan, without the code to live by, these cats are nothing more than mere loners living together for support. They have to believe in StarClan, and the code is much more than "guidelines" to them. No group of cats who doesn't even register the basics of Clan life as important deserves to be called a Clan.
The Clan may be peaceful, but do not call them shy. A Clan that appears shy appears weak. The cats need to have some form of dignity and aloofness to the other Clans, to show that they are still kicking it in the free world.
Suggestions: Make their territory more marshy and with lots of streams (rename it StreamClan or MarshClan, if you care to). Make the cats less shy, and for the love of everything, restore their faithfulness to the Clan system.

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[.kestral]

Clan Name:
Waterclan
Territory:
Waterclans territory is mostly set in a large forest. One with a huge central lake, there camp is in this lake with a small line of land that leads to the shore. Two rivers and a series of streams meet the lake, one heading into it, one heading out. Due to this the territory is very waterlogged, almost always muddy with small trees and bushes that can get a grip in the territory and on the banks. The camp itself is very dry and sandy.
Notable History:
Waterclan developed when a large group of cats escaped the city. The city is a horrible place, ruled by families of cats, some just can't stay there. A Starclan warrior led the cats to the three territories, and showed them how to live as a clan. The cats developed into specific groups, those made for water, those made for grass, and those made for the harsher grounds.
Unique Skills:
Fishing, swimming, they are a lot like Riverclan, when kits reach a certain age they are taken to learn to swim in the gentler water, as they age they are taken to stronger and stronger streams and rivers so the skill grows with them.
Reputation/Personality:
Waterclan avoid dispute, when the clans are at war they take shelter on there Island, doing what they can to block the bridge and living off the fish that swim around the island as well as small voles. They don't fight for territory, they openly admit they are better of territory wise than the others, two legs aren't a threat due to the land.
Average Clan Member:
Stocky, well built with thick, waterproof fur. There fur is normally very sleek and white, grey and silver cats are common in the clan. They can vanish into the water easier with lighter pelts.
Important Notes:
They have two neighbouring clans, and a large city. War between the clans is rare as the city cats are a larger threat.

[Arcaii]

Clan Name:
Waterclan
Territory:
Waterclans territory is mostly set in a large forest. One with a huge central lake, there camp is in this lake with a small line of land that leads to the shore. Two rivers and a series of streams meet the lake, one heading into it, one heading out. Due to this the territory is very waterlogged, almost always muddy with small trees and bushes that can get a grip in the territory and on the banks. The camp itself is very dry and sandy.
Notable History:
Waterclan developed when a large group of cats escaped the city. The city is a horrible place, ruled by families of cats, some just can't stay there. A Starclan warrior led the cats to the three territories, and showed them how to live as a clan. The cats developed into specific groups, those made for water, those made for grass, and those made for the harsher grounds.
Unique Skills:
Fishing, swimming, they are a lot like Riverclan, when kits reach a certain age they are taken to learn to swim in the gentler water, as they age they are taken to stronger and stronger streams and rivers so the skill grows with them.
Reputation/Personality:
Waterclan avoid dispute, when the clans are at war they take shelter on there Island, doing what they can to block the bridge and living off the fish that swim around the island as well as small voles. They don't fight for territory, they openly admit they are better of territory wise than the others, two legs aren't a threat due to the land.
Average Clan Member:
Stocky, well built with thick, waterproof fur. There fur is normally very sleek and white, grey and silver cats are common in the clan. They can vanish into the water easier with lighter pelts.
Important Notes:
They have two neighbouring clans, and a large city. War between the clans is rare as the city cats are a larger threat.

Name Rating: 9/10
Name Reasoning: I think the only issue I have with the name is the broadness of it, but then again, they do have a large variety of water bodies. I'll suggest a few more specific names below!
Alternative Name: IsleClan/LakeClan. Their home is on an isle-esque piece of land, and they live in a lake.

Clan Rating: 10/10
Clan Reasoning: This is a very well developed Clan. Most Clans that are water based usually have a hard time justifying their names or their cats, but you've clearly put some thought into this. The behavior, looks, and territory are very good!
Suggestions: Absolutely none.

[.kestral]

Your Waterclan one made me very happy

Clan Name:
Rockclan
Territory:
Rocky, hilly, rough. The territory is littered with large, sharp rocks, it often has holes or hollows hidden under trees and bushes making it treacherous for anyone who doesn't know the land. The majority of the territory is under the trees, with a few small streams that create small rocky overhangs. The streams run down and combine into one of Waterclans rivers. The camp is well hidden, inside a clearing, roots and large pieces of slate make up most of the dens, moss, lichen and grass hang down to obscure the entrances making the camp hard to spot.
Notable History:
They began in the same way as Waterclan and Airclan. Cats who were sick of the city cats rule abandoned there homes and moved to the woods. Starclan led them to there home and Rockclan was born.
Unique Skills:
Art of disguise. Rockclan cats often mask themselves with mud, hiding there fur and there scent, become almost invisible in there home. There paw pads are firm, perfect for exploring there rocky, dangerous home. Years of survival have allowed them to adapt to the dangers and every apprentice learns the safest, or fastest routes through the trees. They are taught never to travel alone and instead hunt and fight in pairs.
Reputation/Personality:
They are the more volatile clan, they know many would be hesitant to step onto there territory. They know that Airclan and Waterclan cats won't make it to the camp without at least one cat being hurt, or without being spotted. This allowed them to take more risks and they are most likely to push for territory. Butt he city cats, again are there biggest worry.
Average Clan Member:
The cats are often very largely built, able to push there way through things to get into tunnels others don't know exists. There pelt colours vary but are often darker, browns and blacks with tabby being the most common. They often have very firm pawpads, allowing them to travel through there lands without worrying about cutting there selves on the rocks.
Important Notes:
None.