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by Starwindrider » Tue Dec 19, 2017 8:35 pm
Silent Wish wrote:@Kara,
I have a few issues with your form.
1. you need an image so that everyone knows the appearance of your horse.
2. the mib (most influential breeds) would most likely be a thoroughbred, because that's the most common horse used in modern day racing. (refer to @Scarlit's previous post for more info).
3. you don't need to write anything next to appearance. the categories below help everyone understand enough.
4. hazel is not a horse colour. the most likely colours you were thinking of were probably either chestnut, palomino, flaxen chestnut, liver chestnut, bay, buckskin, or dark bay. please note that a majority of these images aren't thoroughbreds. they are just coat examples. please find your own images.
5. 'white strip' isn't really much of a description. see here for facial markings. also here and here for leg markings.
6. horses are measured in hands. hands go up by threes. eg. 14.0, 14.1, 14.2, 14.3, 15.0, etc. thoroughbreds usually average from 15.2 to 17 hands.
7. I'm assuming medium weight means middle-weight.
8. again, in the form, I put a spot for her personality. you have somehow, whilst completing it, moved it up next to the words that say 'TRAITS/PERSONALITY'.
9. horses don't usually play with balls...unless they have a horse ball. besides, humans have been gone for approx. 2000 years, so horse balls (or any balls) would no longer exist.
10. she can't be looking to become a racer because, as I said just then, humans have been gone for about 2000 years.
11. (above: 2000 year message), so she couldn't even possibly know what it feels like to be petted, or combed, or washed.
12. as @Starwindrider said, no humans exist and cruz would have no clue what washington, texas, or even what a human is, let alone racing horses. please change that.
I request that you change these things. if you need any help, you know who to call. (GHOSTBUSTERS). sorry. inside joke. my friend is reading over my shoulder and insisted I write that. you can ask anyone here on the discussion thread and you can also pm me if you have any questions, or need help with anything. like I said in response to your earlier, I recommend that you read all the rules, even just skim read it (because it's very lengthy). I would also recommend for you to read the storyline as it contains some background info.
You should see Silentβs post.....
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by Ξlpha » Tue Dec 19, 2017 8:50 pm
Silent Wish wrote:@Kara,
I have a few issues with your form.
1. you need an image so that everyone knows the appearance of your horse.
2. the mib (most influential breeds) would most likely be a thoroughbred, because that's the most common horse used in modern day racing. (refer to @Scarlit's previous post for more info).
3. you don't need to write anything next to appearance. the categories below help everyone understand enough.
4. hazel is not a horse colour. the most likely colours you were thinking of were probably either chestnut, palomino, flaxen chestnut, liver chestnut, bay, buckskin, or dark bay. please note that a majority of these images aren't thoroughbreds. they are just coat examples. please find your own images.
5. 'white strip' isn't really much of a description. see here for facial markings. also here and here for leg markings.
6. horses are measured in hands. hands go up by threes. eg. 14.0, 14.1, 14.2, 14.3, 15.0, etc. thoroughbreds usually average from 15.2 to 17 hands.
7. I'm assuming medium weight means middle-weight.
8. again, in the form, I put a spot for her personality. you have somehow, whilst completing it, moved it up next to the words that say 'TRAITS/PERSONALITY'.
9. horses don't usually play with balls...unless they have a horse ball. besides, humans have been gone for approx. 2000 years, so horse balls (or any balls) would no longer exist.
10. she can't be looking to become a racer because, as I said just then, humans have been gone for about 2000 years.
11. (above: 2000 year message), so she couldn't even possibly know what it feels like to be petted, or combed, or washed.
12. as @Starwindrider said, no humans exist and cruz would have no clue what washington, texas, or even what a human is, let alone racing horses. please change that.
I request that you change these things. if you need any help, you know who to call. (GHOSTBUSTERS). sorry. inside joke. my friend is reading over my shoulder and insisted I write that. you can ask anyone here on the discussion thread and you can also pm me if you have any questions, or need help with anything. like I said in response to your earlier, I recommend that you read all the rules, even just skim read it (because it's very lengthy). I would also recommend for you to read the storyline as it contains some background info.
@Kara,
I think you missed my post regarding your form. your history still needs to be changed. again, I recommend you read the storyline and rules, as the horses have been traveling for many years, meaning that cruz would not have grown up in a barn/field, she would have grown up traveling (or a variation).
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by ethium » Wed Dec 20, 2017 5:03 am
Hah, I mean everyone at my school is pretty much like that and i tend to not pick it up as much as they do. Watching jack for 2 years tho has changed how i process things like. Every now and again some one will say something relating to Speed or something (happens in science a lot) and i tend to automatically think Speed it key. It does help me remember stuff though. Sometimes (Like I was doing with silent's post) i will skim read things and my brain just happens to read that wrong. w o o p s
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by MoralChaos » Wed Dec 20, 2017 6:22 am
I there! I hope itβs okay if I mark myself here, I would really like to join this RP but at the moment too busy to post my forum up yet. Itβll be up later tonight :3
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by MoralChaos » Wed Dec 20, 2017 1:40 pm
Okay! Thanks Silent, I do have one question, where did you all get your fancy text font from? Iv been looking around and can't seem to remember where you can do is at. :T
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And Sharks!
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"Yesterday is History, Tomorrow is a Mystery, and
Today is a Gift. That is why they call it the present."βββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ
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by MoralChaos » Wed Dec 20, 2017 1:58 pm
@Azuran
Thank you so much!
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And Sharks!
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"Yesterday is History, Tomorrow is a Mystery, and
Today is a Gift. That is why they call it the present."βββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ
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