Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[tikitiki6]

tikitiki6 wrote:
Image/Description:
Brown cat with short fur but long fur on tail

Name: Otterfang

Gender: Female

Clan: Riverclan

Rank: Warrior

Personality/Skills: She is a happy-go-lucky cat with tons of energy and bravery. Just being around her make the other cats feel happy and strong.

Important Notes: Her mother was a rouge, and after all except two of her kits died (otterfang and her brother) she gave them to riverclan (a lot like sasha) After a while Otterfang's brother (jettclaw) became leader. He led riverclan for a long time intill, in a huge battle with wolves (long story) they died side by side.


Name Rating: 9/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Otter- is a prefix for a dark brown cat like yours. I don't see anything wrong with it whatsoever!
I'm a little uneasier on -fang, but primarily it's because I'm not sure if she's a good hunter/fighter or not. From what I can estimate, she seems like she could be. -fang cats are skilled in both hunting and fighting; not particularly fantastic at either, but above average. If you boost that skill up a little, I think the name would be just right.
Alternative Name: None. My alternative is for her to be bumped up a little in both fighting and hunting, because this name's pretty good!

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: Just like her name, I don't have any complaints to administer. A bombastic, energetic cat who rallies others to do their best is a great candidate for leader/deputy, though, and I'm a little curious as to why her brother got the high ranks instead of her. Maybe she's just not someone who's good with leading the charge, but I think she could be.



The reason why her brother became leader/deputy was because the leader thought she was immature and her brother saved the leader from a fox too, and yes she is very good at hunting and fighting.
Thank you for rating!

[tikitiki6]

Image/Description:

Black cat with blue eyes

Name: Jetclaw/Jetstar

Gender: Male

Clan: River

Rank: Leader

Personality/Skills: Brave, Serious, Patient, Smart/Clever

Important Notes: (read Otterfang for some of the story) When Jetstar was an apprentice, the leader det out on a patrole to drive away a fox. The patrol was gone for many days and Jetpaw went after them secretly. He found them cornered on a cliff with a huge fox blocking the way. Jetpaw climbed on top of a cliff, and yelled at the cats to run, once they started to run, he pushed a boulder, causing it to hit the fox off the cliff. He was made a warrior soon after. When he became leader, every cat thought he would choose Otterfang as deputy, but instead he chose Tigerbounce, because secretly, he loved her.

[tikitiki6]

That is not suppost to say det, it is meant to say went

[Arcaii]

Image/Description:

Black cat with blue eyes

Name: Jetclaw/Jetstar

Gender: Male

Clan: River

Rank: Leader

Personality/Skills: Brave, Serious, Patient, Smart/Clever

Important Notes: (read Otterfang for some of the story) When Jetstar was an apprentice, the leader det out on a patrole to drive away a fox. The patrol was gone for many days and Jetpaw went after them secretly. He found them cornered on a cliff with a huge fox blocking the way. Jetpaw climbed on top of a cliff, and yelled at the cats to run, once they started to run, he pushed a boulder, causing it to hit the fox off the cliff. He was made a warrior soon after. When he became leader, every cat thought he would choose Otterfang as deputy, but instead he chose Tigerbounce, because secretly, he loved her.

Sorry, I was away for a bit contemplating food. I'll review this now.

Name Rating: 6/10
Name Type: Creative
Name Reasoning: I do know what Jet- alludes to (jet black). The origin of the phrase comes from a mineral known as jet, which is black, obviously. However, this mineral is made from fossilized trees, to my knowledge, which isn't really a thing around anywhere where these cats would be living. So, my deliberation is that while it could be accurate, it's just not in this area.
His suffix is just fine if he's a talented fighter (which I have no doubt he could be), but from what I read, I'd place him more on the -whisker end. -whisker cats tend to be highly intelligent and observant, able to use their environment to their advantage. They are also very good at hunting as a result of this nature.
Alternative Name: Nightwhisker. Night- describes his black coat, and -whisker is for a good hunter who's observant and wise.

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: Both he and his sister are pretty good characters. I can see that he earned his spot as deputy, and not just for the fox. I'm particularly interested in the fact that he let his emotions get the better of him and he chose his love interest as a deputy instead of his sister (who I would have picked myself). Does he feel guilty about this, or is this one spot he's happy to be blind about? Does his sister know why she was left out of the running?

[Joe Kerr]

:Image/Description:
Solid black she-cat with piercing green eyes.
Medium length fur, kink in tail.

:Name:
Ravencloud

:Gender:
She-cat

:Clan:
Pineclan

:Rank:
Medicine Cat

:Personality/Skills:
Social, easy to get along with. Loves taking care of her clan.
Very nurturing. If she wasn't a medicine cat, she would have kits.
She does not regret her decision of becoming a Medicine cat.

Hunting
{2/10}
{She rarely hunts, and when she does, she is clumsy and loud}

Battle
{5/10}
{She can fight as good as some warriors, but prefers healing
over violence}

Herbal
{10/10}
{From the beginning, she knew she was destined to be a
Medicine cat. She has a great Photogenic Memory, and has
created a few new remedies for common ailments.}

Strategic
{8/10}
{She is very wise for a cat of her young age. She would have
made a great clan leader, had her heart not led her to becoming
a Medicine cat.}

Nurture
{10/10}
{Her favorite thing to do is visit the kits. She dotes on the apprentices,
and nurtures even the oldest warrior.}

Important Notes:

*Clanborn

*Many think she would have made a great clan leader, but Ravencloud has
never second guessed her decision.

*Was born with the kink in her tail

[Arcaii]

:Image/Description:
Solid black she-cat with piercing green eyes.
Medium length fur, kink in tail.

:Name:
Ravencloud

:Gender:
She-cat

:Clan:
Pineclan

:Rank:
Medicine Cat

:Personality/Skills:
Social, easy to get along with. Loves taking care of her clan.
Very nurturing. If she wasn't a medicine cat, she would have kits.
She does not regret her decision of becoming a Medicine cat.

Hunting
{2/10}
{She rarely hunts, and when she does, she is clumsy and loud}

Battle
{5/10}
{She can fight as good as some warriors, but prefers healing
over violence}

Herbal
{10/10}
{From the beginning, she knew she was destined to be a
Medicine cat. She has a great Photogenic Memory, and has
created a few new remedies for common ailments.}

Strategic
{8/10}
{She is very wise for a cat of her young age. She would have
made a great clan leader, had her heart not led her to becoming
a Medicine cat.}

Nurture
{10/10}
{Her favorite thing to do is visit the kits. She dotes on the apprentices,
and nurtures even the oldest warrior.}

Important Notes:

*Clanborn

*Many think she would have made a great clan leader, but Ravencloud has
never second guessed her decision.

*Was born with the kink in her tail

Name Rating: 9/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Ravencloud is actually a very good name for her - as a medicine cat, the closest she can get to a -flower is by being a -cloud. She's a pure black cat, like Raven- cats are, and I don't think she requires a name notifying the crooked tail.
What I do think could be changed, though, is indeed her suffix. The reason is because she's incredibly skilled with herbs, beyond a doubt. I think that should be mentioned, because a talented cat taking care of the Clan is one of the most important possible things a Clan could have. With the addition of having created extra remedies, she'll probably be talked about when she is in StarClan, and assist the younger generation in their guidance.
Alternative Name: Ravenleaf. The -leaf suffix indicates an amazing medicine cat, and I think she's more than earned that.

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: I don't see too much that's wrong with her. She sounds like the ideal cat for any Clan, let alone medicine cat. I have nothing to complain about!

[~Moony~]

Name: Moonflare
Description: pale silver gray pelt with darker gray tabby stripes, white paws, belly fur and tail tip, emerald green eyes
Important Notes:she is bubbly, persistent, and energetic, but has a fiery passion to serve her clan

[border collies.]

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Name: Snowpaw
Gender: She-cat
Clan: SunClan
Rank: Apprentice
Personality/Skills: She's a daredevil and always wanted to be a warrior, but she would risk her life for the clan even though she's only 8 moons.
Important Notes: She died when fell off a cliff when fighting her brother, Jaypaw, her sister, Swallowpaw jumped after her and died aswell. She is also Ravenfeather's sister and Flowerstar's daughter.

[dietcokeluvr12]

Name: Arcticspirit
Description: All White She-cat with fluffy and bushy tail, she has blue-gray eyes and a gray marking on her nose.
Personality: A serious but worryful cat, shes a bit awkward but has a great spirit for learning new things. She's not afraid to stand up and the cold doesn't bother her so much
Age: 16 moons
Rank: Deputy
Clan: SpiritClan
History: Her mother died when she was 5 moons old because of a dog. Ever since then she is worried about everyone. Her father is now a loner. She was an only kit but she did have den mates. She loved a cat called Trouttail but he died when foxes over came the camp

[tikitiki6]

Image/Description:

Orange and red tabby

Name: Tigerbounce

Gender: Female

Clan: River

Rank: Deputy

Personality/Skills: High energy, fast, hasty, and a bit of a show-off

Important Notes: She was saved by Jetclaw from a fox,when she was an apprentice, but showed no emotion to him. Many cats belived she had Skyclan blood, because of the way she could jump. She trained the most high-energy apprentice, showing him how to put force and strength in that energy. when jetstar chose her to be deputy, she was confused because she thought he would choose otterfang. she later learned that when thay went out on a patrole, otterfang was scared to lead them. she told no one this. when she became leader, she cose her apprentice to be deputy. she knew that he would be an amazing deputy.