Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[mistywater]

Name: Minnowcloud.
Description: Sleek silver-gray tabby molly with blue eyes.
Important Notes: She's rather mellow, but confident too.

[Arcaii]

Name: Minnowcloud.
Description: Sleek silver-gray tabby molly with blue eyes.
Important Notes: She's rather mellow, but confident too.

Rate: 10/10
Type: Traditional
Reasoning: Minnow- is perhaps one of, if not the only prefix on the list that specifies the cat's fur texture. Others are suited to larger or smaller cats, but none say "this cat must be fluffy" or anything. Hm.
Anyways, the name fits her to a T! Mild-mannered but quietly confident people are the raddest.
Alternative Name: None!
Notes: None.

[Sameen_of_Nohr]

this is a cat I am working on she hasn'tbeen born yet..

Name: Amberkit
Description:http://mist3.webs.com/kitty_by_all4stars.jpg
Important Notes: fast runner and really good at climbing trees... also she is a prophecy cat

Name Suggestion: Poppyfoot/Rowantail (prefixes interchangeable)
Name Reasoning: Remind me to put up Amber- on the Names list. I've gotten it enough to add it.
The term "amber" comes from the ore itself - the frozen sap of long-gone trees that usually has a bug or two in it. The problem is that amber comes from rocks, and I don't think cats will be chiseling through rocks any time soon.
My suggested prefixes both describe a reddish cat, and her suffix will depend on what she's more skilled at. If she's a better climber than she is a runner, give her -tail. If she's a better sprinter than a scaler, give her -foot.

ok thanks I think i'll go with either ambertail or poppytail

[Arcaii]

I suggest Poppy-. Amber- was explained in that review, so you know my argument, but either way, it's your choice.

[prince.]

Constantly making new charries ^^' The personality needs fixed, I KNOW that XD Any warrior name suggestions? he's a prophecy cat with a power. (Electric whiskers)

>>Hi! I'm Lightpaw. <<


Proper Introductions

Warrior Name: Light___
Rank:Apprentice
Desired Rank:Deputy
Age:9 moons
Gender:Male

Let's Go Deeper

Personality:Snappy, quiet and reserved, Lightpaw is more tuned in to the natural world than he is of the cats around him.
History Born into the Clan, he was bullied and continually strived to be better. He knows now that power is not everything after a scuffle with a real warrior, he has found his heart, although this was tested a few times, really does belong with his clan.

Kits:Too young
Mother:Viperstar (dead)
Father:Finchflight (dead)
Brother(s):None
Sister(s):None

Who's That Lucky Tomcat/She-Cat?

Crush:I don't have any
Mate:Not yet

[Keriae]

Hey Arcaii, just wondering, what prefix would you suggest for my cat?
He's technically a brown tabby but the white glittering on the end of each and every hair makes him look grey, but he's not a black silver tabby.
btw he's called Smokey ^.^

[Arcaii]

Constantly making new charries ^^' The personality needs fixed, I KNOW that XD Any warrior name suggestions? he's a prophecy cat with a power. (Electric whiskers)

>>Hi! I'm Lightpaw. <<


Proper Introductions

Warrior Name: Light___
Rank:Apprentice
Desired Rank:Deputy
Age:9 moons
Gender:Male

Let's Go Deeper

Personality:Snappy, quiet and reserved, Lightpaw is more tuned in to the natural world than he is of the cats around him.
History Born into the Clan, he was bullied and continually strived to be better. He knows now that power is not everything after a scuffle with a real warrior, he has found his heart, although this was tested a few times, really does belong with his clan.

Kits:Too young
Mother:Viperstar (dead)
Father:Finchflight (dead)
Brother(s):None
Sister(s):None

Who's That Lucky Tomcat/She-Cat?

Crush:I don't have any
Mate:Not yet

Name Suggestion: Smokepelt/Thistlestripe (suffixes interchangeable, though Smoke- usually references a tabby, so using -stripe would be redundant).
Name Reasoning: Light- is a name reserved for, obviously, light colored cats (white, pale grey or gold, etc). Judging by the picture, he's just a regular grey tabby with dark stripes, which a Light- cat wouldn't have.
Thistle- describes a grey cat, Smoke- a grey tabby, and since he has no nameable traits or personality, he gets either -pelt, -fur, or -stripe.

Character Rating: 6/10
Character Reasoning: You already know that the character needs work, so I'll just say that a cat is going to have a hard time being reserved and snappy at the same time. I will also mention that I can't find a single reason why he would be bullied or why the Clan would tolerate it at all - the Clan is basically one big family, and looking out for each others' welfare and happiness is the core of being a warrior. Pointless bullying in any character's past is an irking thing for me, so I think I'll put it up on the problems post.
My suggestion is to make him a reserved cat who doesn't really socialize - he's in tune with the environment, so it could be assumed that he sees other cats as disrupting that. He might have sensitive hearing and the loudness of his Clanmates can overwhelm him, which makes him wander out into the territory by himself.
He sounds like he could be intelligent but with a mindset and way of thinking that's entirely different from his Clanmates, which could lead to him being frustrated and having a hard time reading social cues. For that reason, he could accidentally be rude when, to him, he's just making an observation. This could also make him impatient in dealing with others, and causes him to isolate or even wander off the territory on occasion, just so he can't be bothered.
There's a lot you could do with the minimal traits you've given, and those are just a few suggestions.

[Arcaii]

Hey Arcaii, just wondering, what prefix would you suggest for my cat?
He's technically a brown tabby but the white glittering on the end of each and every hair makes him look grey, but he's not a black silver tabby.
btw he's called Smokey ^.^

From the pictures he seems rather grey-ish, or at least a dark grey (technicalities never matter too much in a feral cat's eyes - the coat color is what they look like), so I would suggest Fir-, Evening-, or Pine-.

[dooze]

I have been in love with this post for a while now c: I've always adored the traditional names and lyrical named have rather annoyed me, so I'm glad that I'm not the only one trying to promote the style!

Image/Description: she is a larger, fluffy blue & white van bi color she-cat with blue eyes
Name: Daisyfur
(would consider -flower or -heart too, but Daisyheart and Daisyflower sounds very girly and singsongy. I'm not stuck to the name, and could change the prefix and/or the suffix. I'm just in love with this cat's appearance)
Gender: She-cat
Clan: I use her in all my roleplays, however, she is always in a clan which is similar to ThunderClan.
Rank: Usually roleplay her as senior warrior, deputy, and leader
Personality/Skills: She is loyal to her clan and does her best to protect it despite her clumsiness due to her size. She is a natural leader and is extremely bright and sharp-witted. She has a soft spot in her heart for the young cats in the clan.
Important Notes: She is deaf in her left ear

[Arcaii]

I have been in love with this post for a while now c: I've always adored the traditional names and lyrical named have rather annoyed me, so I'm glad that I'm not the only one trying to promote the style!

Image/Description: she is a larger, fluffy blue & white van bi color she-cat with blue eyes
Name: Daisyfur
(would consider -flower or -heart too, but Daisyheart and Daisyflower sounds very girly and singsongy. I'm not stuck to the name, and could change the prefix and/or the suffix. I'm just in love with this cat's appearance)
Gender: She-cat
Clan: I use her in all my roleplays, however, she is always in a clan which is similar to ThunderClan.
Rank: Usually roleplay her as senior warrior, deputy, and leader
Personality/Skills: She is loyal to her clan and does her best to protect it despite her clumsiness due to her size. She is a natural leader and is extremely bright and sharp-witted. She has a soft spot in her heart for the young cats in the clan.
Important Notes: She is deaf in her left ear

Rad, another traditionalist!

Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Daisyfur fits her just fine. -flower cats, as a rule, tend to be or have been mothers at some point, not just caring for little ones, but raising them. -heart is idealistic and stays on a singular moral path, even if that moral path is objectively wrong or extreme. She's a little of column A and a little of column B, but not swinging enough in either direction to really be placed in anything but -fur or -pelt.
Alternative Name: None!

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: Bless you for making a white blue-eyed cat with actual hearing problems. The picture makes it look like she has some yellow on the edges of her eyes, so she might be saved from total deafness, but at least she can't hear out of one ear. Mighty nice to see.
Anyway, the rest of her character checks out completely. I can see her being a fantastic leader with a good reputation throughout the other Clans. Well done to you!