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Re: Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Mon Mar 03, 2014 4:29 am

.kestral wrote:Fixed this clan up a little, basing them kind of in Canada?

Clan Name:
Snowclan
Territory:
Cold, icy, wet. This clans territory is full of thick, pine trees, three quarters of the year the territory is bathed in snow. The territory only thaws during Newleaf when they clan makes sure to eat and hunt enough to get them through the colder months. The territory has frozen rivers and frozen pools that need to be broken for fresh, running water. There camp is dug into a enclosed hollow, three high walls surround it and the dens are dug deep into the walls and roots of trees and branches. The walls prevent snow from coating the camp. There is lots of moss around the territory, but often it has to be dried during the Newleaf and then stored until needed. Prey includes Hares, Puffins, Beavers and Goose. The cats are often hunted by Lynx but they team up to take down the large predators.
Notable History:
Founded many years ago by a cat who left there clan due to conflict, the cat gathered others, building up a clan. They settled on the territory and just never left.
Unique Skills:
Thick fur, ready for the winter. These cats seem to have fur many times thicker than normal to protect against the snow. There paws are slightly bigger, helping them stay slightly on top of the snow. They are experts at hearing there prey, at sniffing out the slightest meal. They can get into tunnels to get to mice and other small animals.
Reputation/Personality:
They have no neighbors, but will always accept more cats to assist there clan.
Average Clan Member:
Huge and thick furred, these cats clearly have Norwegian Forest Cat, Maine Coon, Siberian Forest Cat and Rag-Doll blood making up there numbers. They are huge compared to normal cats, big enough to fight and even hunt the lynxs that prowl there territory.
Important Notes:
None


Name Rating: 10/10
Name Reasoning: The name fits them to a T, and I don't think there's much to say on that subject!
Alternative Name: None.

Clan Rating: 9/10
Clan Reasoning: Only two issues to pick on - the first being that if the cats are so huge, they probably won't be able to go into small tunnels and hunt down tiny prey. The second being that they wouldn't have to worry too badly about prey during the winter - even in the cold, there will always be hares and such. The cats are large enough to take down a lynx - I wouldn't be surprised if they decided one day to give the meat a try. Other than that, this Clan's superb.
Suggestions: Just work on the two things above!
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Re: Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer

Postby .kestral » Mon Mar 03, 2014 4:31 am

Works for me, I so plan on putting these cats into a story. Need to do more research on cats and cold and such tho.
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Re: Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Mon Mar 03, 2014 4:39 am

Awesome! I'm always thrilled when I don't have to remind people to do research, haha.
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Re: Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer

Postby .kestral » Mon Mar 03, 2014 4:39 am

Arcaii wrote:Awesome! I'm always thrilled when I don't have to remind people to do research, haha.


I always try to do research, but cause its a fanfic I stretch things a tiny bit if needed.
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Re: Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Mon Mar 03, 2014 5:29 am

Warriors is set in what's called high-fantasy, so some things can be stretched for the sake of a story, yes. Research is always important, of course.
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Re: Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer

Postby ravennn » Mon Mar 03, 2014 7:21 am

Clan Name: Streamclan
Territory: Streamclan lives in a oak tree forest. Their camp is located in a cave close to a large pond. The pond is surrounded by trees and brush.
Notable History: A loner named Moon was abandoned by her rogue pack. She traveled two moons trying to find a new home and a new pack. She reached a forest with a large pond in the middle. She called it home, then met a handsome tom named Maple. They had three kits named Fallow, Tree, and Pond. Pond grew up big and strong and met a tom also, by the name Hollow. They then made a pack called Streampack because of the stream that Moon found before she left her old pack. They had a happy life until a she-cat visited Tree in his dream and told him about the clan life. They changed Streampack to Streamclan after Tree told everyone about it. They then got the names, Moonsight, Maplefur, Fallowfern, Treetop, Pondtail and Hollowclaw. More rogues joined this clan and made it a real family.
Unique Skills: Streamclan can swim fast, not as fast as fish. But they can still swim. Most of the clan born cats are born with long tails so they can swim faster.
Reputation/Personality: This clan is known by a lot of cats/rogues and other clans. It is very kind and caring clan. They have a few personalities. They are kind, caring and helping, they always look for the bright side of things.
Average Clan Member: An average clan member can be born with long tails and be very slim. Their full grown weight can be up too seven pounds to eleven. They have very broad shoulder muscles and short legs. Their very swift and slick cats.
[b]Important Notes: None.
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Re: Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Mon Mar 03, 2014 11:02 am

♥*RaVeNpAw*♥ wrote:
Clan Name: Streamclan
Territory: Streamclan lives in a oak tree forest. Their camp is located in a cave close to a large pond. The pond is surrounded by trees and brush.
Notable History: A loner named Moon was abandoned by her rogue pack. She traveled two moons trying to find a new home and a new pack. She reached a forest with a large pond in the middle. She called it home, then met a handsome tom named Maple. They had three kits named Fallow, Tree, and Pond. Pond grew up big and strong and met a tom also, by the name Hollow. They then made a pack called Streampack because of the stream that Moon found before she left her old pack. They had a happy life until a she-cat visited Tree in his dream and told him about the clan life. They changed Streampack to Streamclan after Tree told everyone about it. They then got the names, Moonsight, Maplefur, Fallowfern, Treetop, Pondtail and Hollowclaw. More rogues joined this clan and made it a real family.
Unique Skills: Streamclan can swim fast, not as fast as fish. But they can still swim. Most of the clan born cats are born with long tails so they can swim faster.
Reputation/Personality: This clan is known by a lot of cats/rogues and other clans. It is very kind and caring clan. They have a few personalities. They are kind, caring and helping, they always look for the bright side of things.
Average Clan Member: An average clan member can be born with long tails and be very slim. Their full grown weight can be up too seven pounds to eleven. They have very broad shoulder muscles and short legs. Their very swift and slick cats.
[b]Important Notes: None.
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I completely forgot about this, so sorry for the wait!

Name Rating: 6/10
Name Reasoning: It doesn't really matter what the cat found on the journey, if it isn't on the territory it's going to be very confusing for other cats! And it appears that they only have one source of water, and it's a pond, so there's that. They should be named for the majority of their territory.
Alternative Name: OakClan, WoodsClan

Clan Rating: 6/10
Clan Reasoning: These cats only have a single body of water, and they've got an entire arsenal of trees and underbrush. They're built for a river-bound Clan, not ones that happen to have a single pond and then an entire forest.
Suggestions: Either shape up the cats to their actual territory or make it more of a marshy, pond-riddled area.
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