Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer V.2 [New owner!]

[satyrn.]

Image/Description:A tom who is a mix between a cream,ginger and brown cat,he resembles the same coloured coat as lionheart and lionblaze.Though in sunlight his fur has a ginger gleam at times.
Name:Lightningkit
Gender:Male
Clan:Thunderclan
Rank:Kit
Personality/Skills:Lightningkit isnt a very boastful kit,he tends to watch apprentices show off by their den and copy what they do,if he gets it right he mentions it once and never again,as not to show off.He can be anxious around cats that are alot bigger then him,it makes him feel small and unable to do anything,though bare in mind these cats would have to be much bigger,not a little.He is brave,but does what he's told and will not attempt to disobey his father or the leader. He is very broadly structured and his key skill at the moment is his strength and running,he isnt too good at being light on the foor yet.
Important Notes:
His mother died at his birth,along with his sister Rosekit who was stillborn but his father is still around and a queen who had just kitted looked after him until he was old enough to eat freshkill,he is very loyal to his father and doesnt like to disobey.
He is five moons old and has not had any issues with any other kits in the nursery before.

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Image/Description:A tom who is a mix between a cream,ginger and brown cat,he resembles the same coloured coat as lionheart and lionblaze.Though in sunlight his fur has a ginger gleam at times.
Name:Lightningkit
Gender:Male
Clan:Thunderclan
Rank:Kit
Personality/Skills:Lightningkit isnt a very boastful kit,he tends to watch apprentices show off by their den and copy what they do,if he gets it right he mentions it once and never again,as not to show off.He can be anxious around cats that are alot bigger then him,it makes him feel small and unable to do anything,though bare in mind these cats would have to be much bigger,not a little.He is brave,but does what he's told and will not attempt to disobey his father or the leader. He is very broadly structured and his key skill at the moment is his strength and running,he isnt too good at being light on the foor yet.
Important Notes:
His mother died at his birth,along with his sister Rosekit who was stillborn but his father is still around and a queen who had just kitted looked after him until he was old enough to eat freshkill,he is very loyal to his father and doesnt like to disobey.
He is five moons old and has not had any issues with any other kits in the nursery before.

Description suitable for chosen name: Unfortunately, Lightning- is a prefix reserved for white or very lightly-coloured golden cats. What you seem to be describing sounds more like a golden-brown cat. [As cat's cant be cream, ginger, and brown at the same time]
Suggested name[s]: Reedkit[fur/stripe/pelt]. It seems right now that he isn't exactly good at anything- no skill seems to stand out, but when older, if he seems to have a great talent with his speed, feel free to use the suffix -foot. Reed- is great for a golden-brown cat, but you can also go with the prefix Carp-.
Notes: If you plan on keeping the prefix Lghtning- and changing his colour, make sure to most likely not give him blue eyes, unless you want a deaf cat. [Only a very, very small percent of white cat's with blues aren't deaf.]

Overall character: I like how you didn't kill off the whole family, first off. I only really see a problem where you say he's brave, but also timid around large cats, and one who doesn't like to show off. [May only be my problem, not anyone else. Usually a brave cat would be one who isn't afraid to do very many things.]
Suggestions for character: Give him a little quirk or two- maybe a special skill that he's better in? Other then that, I think he's fine.

[Simonpet]

I have a bunch. So sorry!

Image/Description: Ginger mackerel tabby with a black spot over her left eye, a "locket" on her chest, and bright yellow eyes.
Name: Ginger | Gingerkit | Gingerpaw | Gingerstorm | Gingerstar
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Depends
Rank: Kittypet/Loner | Kit | Apprentice | Warrior | Deputy | Leader | Elder
Personality/Skills: Gingerstorm is worthy of her name with her wild mood swings. She can sometimes be seen as eerily calm or heartless, while trying to cover up her true feelings. She is often impatient if her apprentice (if any) isn't doing what is asked, though rewards compliments with ease, as long as there is something worth talking about. She has no notable skills, and would have been named Gingerfur had it not been for her personality.
Important Notes: Her mother was a tortoiseshell, Mottleflower (Patches) and her father was a ginger tabby, Fireclaw (Fire).

Image/Description: A fawn long-haired mackerel tabby with dark green eyes/Bright ginger long-haired tabby with dark green eyes.
Name: Cherry | Cherrykit | Cherrypaw | Cherryfang | Cherrystar
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Cherryclan
Rank: Kittypet/Loner | Kit | Apprentice | Warrior | Deputy | Leader | Elder
Personality/Skills: Cherryfang is of a fairly calm temperament. However, she often makes rash decisions, and isn't good with apprentices. She is equally good at fighting and hunting, and is a good tracker as a result. Climbing and swimming are mediocre, at best.
Important Notes: She is sister to Birchclaw and Pikepelt.

Image/Description: Silvery-white mackerel tabby with black stripes and "piercing" light green eyes.
Name: Raphael | Birchkit | Birchpaw | Birchclaw | Birchstar
Gender: Tom
Clan: Cherryclan
Rank: Kittypet/Loner | Kit | Apprentice | Warrior | Deputy | Leader | Elder
Personality/Skills: Birchclaw is of a calm and easy-going temperament, and is a good thinker and problem-solver. He is good deputy and mentor material, having worked with his siblings. His forte is fighting, and few in his clan match him in battle. However, unlike Cherryfang, he doesn't make rash decisions and waits for the right time to press his advantage.
Important Notes: He is brother to Cherryfang and Pikepelt.

Image/Description: Golden-brown mackerel tabby with grey-brown striping and amber eyes.
Name: Tori | Pikekit | Pikepaw | Pikepelt
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Cherryclan
Rank: Kittypet/Loner | Kit | (Medicine Cat) Apprentice | Warrior | Medicine Cat | Elder
Personality/Skills: The calmest one of her siblings, Pikepelt likes to spend her days alone. She is a good mentor, never failing to correct her apprentice if need be. However, she is impatient, and will snap or walk away if kept waiting too long. She is good all-round, and doesn't have a specific skill set.
Important Notes: She is sister to Cherryfang and Birchclaw

Image/Description: Light grey mackerel tabby with white socks and green eyes.
Name: Pebblekit | Pebblepaw | Pebblefang
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Stormclan
Rank: Kit | Apprentice | Warrior | Elder
Personality/Skills: Pebblefang is one who lives life to the fullest, feeling slightly guilty at the fact that her brothers didn't survive kithood. She lives for them and for herself, and tries to keep peace between sides. She is a great hunter and fighter, though prefers to hunt and will only unsheath her claws if her life is in danger.
Important Notes: She is sister to Goldenkit and Molekit, both of whom died.

Image/Description: A blue point with blue eyes.
Name: Laurelkit | Laurelpaw
Gender: She-cat
Clan: None yet
Rank: Kit | (Medicine Cat) Apprentice | Warrior/Medicine Cat | Elder
Personality/Skills: None please suggest base
Important Notes: She hasn't been developed beyond her name and appearance. Also, she is the daughter of Birchclaw and a kittypet.

Image/Description: A diluted tortoiseshell with black, grey, and white patches and dark green eyes.
Name: Lichenkit | Lichenpaw
Gender: She-cat
Clan: None yet
Rank: Kit | (Medicine Cat) Apprentice | Warrior/Medicine Cat | Elder
Personality/Skills: None please suggest base
Important Notes: She hasn't been developed beyond her name and appearance. Also, she is the daughter of Birchclaw and a kittypet.

[WilloweWolf]

Image/Description: so fluffy!
Name: Stormy/ Stormpaw/ Stormfoot
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Streamclan (was a loner)
Rank: Medicine cat
Personality/Skills: Stormfoot is a rather shy, quiet she-cat with a passion for healing. She refuses to kill, though will defend herself in necessary. She's very fast and agile, thus her suffix, -foot.
Important Notes: She was a loner, well, sort of. She lived in the mountains with some other 'loners' that got together for survival. I wouldn't say they were a clan, more like a motley crew that needed each other for support in the cold, barren landscape. When she was only two moons old, some cats that had decided the area was theirs killed everyone in the cave where the former loner band was living. It wasn't even a battle, it was a massacre. Stormy escaped, and was eventually found by Pinefur, a Streamclan warrior, who took her to Streamclan. There, she was raised by Willowheart, a kind tabby queen who had given birth to one live kit and one stillborn kit.

[I r o n.]

Image/Description: A small, dark gray tabby with a light gray underbelly.
Name: Ivywhisker
Gender: female
Clan:
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Ivywhisker is a quiet, shy, peaceful cat. She doesn't like speaking much, and is a pinch lazy, though she likes running and hunting, as those are her skills. She hates being talked about, espacilly when she finds out, and doesn't like team-work. She is indeed loyal, but you can't rely on her all the time.
Important Notes: She keeps to herself because of being made fun of as a kit, she stayed in the nursery for an extra two moons, and was picked on for being the runt.

[equin0x]

Image/Description: I was inspired for her character by this image:
Very pale silver cat with bold darker gray striping and a white underbelly. Light gray-blue eyes. Long back legs and fairly large frame.

Name: Snowkit - Snowpaw - Snowfeather/leap (I'm debating between the two, but open to suggestions)

Gender: She-Cat

Clan: Canon: ThunderClan; Fan-made: FrostClan

Rank: Kit - Apprentice - Warrior

Personality/Skills: Snow is a very boisterous and outgoing Warrior. She makes friends easily with the other clans, which was of slight concern to her own clanmates. She forges very deep friendships with those she cares for, and often thinks with her heart instead of her head, resulting in some poorly made decisions. She is very talkative and too often says or does things without thinking that she would regret later. As an apprentice, she was often told to "Grow up," by her mentor and other authority figures, so much so that her warrior ceremony was delayed a moon. Determined to do her best, she continued to train hard as the clan's oldest apprentice, and she developed a special skill for hunting birds. Her powerful hind-legs allowed her to leap into the air and bring down birds just as they were taking off, and her pale coat made her especially successful in the leaf-bare snowdrifts.

Important Notes: None, thanks! c;

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Sorry guys; I was pretty busy yesterday. I'll get right to reviewing in a little bit once I settle down, as I just got home.

[Simonpet]

I hope you don't mind my load of characters. If you'd like, I can give you a link to show you what each one looks like and why they are the way they are.

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@Simonpet - I haven't forgotten about you! I'm leaving you for last as you have the most cats.

Image/Description: so fluffy!
Name: Stormy/ Stormpaw/ Stormfoot
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Streamclan (was a loner)
Rank: Medicine cat
Personality/Skills: Stormfoot is a rather shy, quiet she-cat with a passion for healing. She refuses to kill, though will defend herself in necessary. She's very fast and agile, thus her suffix, -foot.
Important Notes: She was a loner, well, sort of. She lived in the mountains with some other 'loners' that got together for survival. I wouldn't say they were a clan, more like a motley crew that needed each other for support in the cold, barren landscape. When she was only two moons old, some cats that had decided the area was theirs killed everyone in the cave where the former loner band was living. It wasn't even a battle, it was a massacre. Stormy escaped, and was eventually found by Pinefur, a Streamclan warrior, who took her to Streamclan. There, she was raised by Willowheart, a kind tabby queen who had given birth to one live kit and one stillborn kit.

Description suitable for chosen name:. A grey cat. Simple as that! The suffix is fine, but as I said before it's only used to describe a plain grey cat. [Though her pelt is quite close, so I wouldn't worry about changing it]
Suggested name[s]: Ashfoot[Or -leaf, if her herbal skills are much more noticeable then her agility]
Notes: Only thing I want to ask- how many loners were there? And how many cats that attacked the loners? I just don't understand how a group of cats can kill another group of cats but leave one.

Overall character: Cute character! But I admit I used to do this, and I've seen this a lot from others- the 'shy/quiet/hates fighting but aggressive if needed' character.
Suggestions for character: Perhaps make her a little less shy, and maybe a bit bolder and daring? I love feisty mollies.

[quitting,,]

Image/Description: A small, dark gray tabby with a light gray underbelly.
Name: Ivywhisker
Gender: female
Clan:
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Ivywhisker is a quiet, shy, peaceful cat. She doesn't like speaking much, and is a pinch lazy, though she likes running and hunting, as those are her skills. She hates being talked about, espacilly when she finds out, and doesn't like team-work. She is indeed loyal, but you can't rely on her all the time.
Important Notes: She keeps to herself because of being made fun of as a kit, she stayed in the nursery for an extra two moons, and was picked on for being the runt.

Description suitable for chosen name: Spot on! Great for you, for using my suggestion.
Suggested name[s]: None.
Notes: None.

Overall character: First off, one question- why would she be delayed her apprenticeship? Just because she was teased slightly as a kit, doesn't mean she has to have a delayed ceremony. It doesn't make sense to me.

Right now, just by reading her personality, she doesn't seem like a cat I would like in my clan. You say others must be skeptical around her when asking for loyalty, and the fact that she could be seen as lazy. Clans are all about team-work and loyalty, so it's a little hard to understand her.
Suggestions for character: I've pretty much suggested what you should do with her character, above.