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Re: LakeClan | Sᴱᴹᴵ⁻ᴸᴵᵀ⁺ »αccєρтιηg«

Postby Keriae » Wed May 21, 2014 1:06 am

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gapTHE NAME TAG
      warrior name: crowfang
      previous name(s): crowkit, crowpaw
      gender: male
      age: fifteen moons
      rank: warrior
      previous rank(s): kit, apprentice
      desired rank: deputy
      clan: emberclan
      kin: oddclaw, seawhisker, silverwing

gapAPPEARANCE
      build: average
      fur colour: black and white
      fur pattern: black bicolour
      (mask and mantle pattern)
      fur type: semi-longhair
      (more prominent around his
      haunches and tail)
      fur texture: soft and smooth
      (sleek and silky)
      eye colour: rich amber
      (like the sun when it sets)
      eye shape: oval
      whiskers: very long

gapPERSONALITY
      good: confident, charismatic
      good communicator
      bad: cocky, vain
      strengths: very good hunter and fighter
      (but not the best)
      flaws: can be too suspicious,
      too cocky for his own good


























xxxxxthe sun was just reaching the highest point in the sky when a queen slipped from under a milk-scented bush and rushed towards the medicine den with wide eyes and flattened ears. it was not long before she was followed by a brown tom with darker points. they wasted no time in returning to the nursery where soft whimpers could be heard. and they did not emerge for some time, not until the sun was setting behind the trees and a particularly brave corvid - a crow blacker than the sky - swooped down from an overhanging branch and plucked a fat mouse from the fresh-kill pile, knocking it's head back and swallowing the dead rodent in a few seconds as it flew away. a white tom with odd eyes had been sat watching the nursery from the opposite side of camp: he had tried to enter at one point and been sent away as his pacing was off-putting. now he got to his paws and, with prickling fur, the tom moved over to the nursery as the brown tom poked his head out and flicked an ear in a beckoning motion. soon the white tom was in the den, sitting next to an exhausted grey and white queen with two kits huddled into the curve of her stomach. one, a strong little tom, was black and white. immediately the new father was reminded of the corvid. "he can be called crowkit," he meowed, touching his nose to his mate's cheek. she purred weakly and let her tail drift over the she-kit's spine, "she can be silverkit."
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xxxxxtoday was the day. he could see the sun rising from his nest in the nursery. soon, he would be outside, in the mist of his clanmates, receiving his apprentice name and finally, finally, he would know which warrior would be his mentor. Wriggling around in the moss with excitement, the kit accidentally knocked his sister, causing her to awaken. "crowkit!" she exclaimed, pouting (she'd never been an early riser), "can't you just sleep?" crowkit protested and the twins got into an argument. seawhisker awoke then, scolding them both before spotting the sun outside and pulling her children towards her. just as she did, her mate entered the den and immediately helped to prepare the kits, grooming silverkit's soft fur. eventually, the family was ready and they headed outside. the ceremony was short and quick: silverpaw was given ashstripe as her mentor and crowpaw was given nightclaw. both of them soared through their apprenticeship, successfully becoming silverwing and crowfang at twelve moons of age. as crowfang was skilled at both hunting and fighting, he was given the suffix -fang to recognize this. unfortunately seawhisker and oddclaw were not around to witness this great event: they died when the twins were seven moons old from a severe illness that the medicine cats hadn't been able to heal.
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three moons have passed since then. silverwing has gone missing, although many theories run around his brain as to why: crowfang reckons that she fell in love with a passing loner, as she was absent from camp more than a few nights many times. if she has, he wishes her all the luck and happiness in the world. putting it behind him (he doesn't want to seem soft) crowfang continues with his cocky, amorous ways.
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Re: LakeClan | Sᴱᴹᴵ⁻ᴸᴵᵀ⁺ »αccєρтιηg«

Postby Kitty-lover93 » Wed May 21, 2014 9:07 am

    ((...Hey Shibiski, what happened to Wolfshade? Your form is now a dog...

    Kit, your forms are accepted!

    Hey Keriae! Your form is accepted!

    Actually, I just accepted Kitsutenshi's finished forms, so I would say yes, but we have our leader now. However, we could use a few more warriors, so you can make one of those.

    I still have to add these new cats to the front, but we might be able to start once we officially have our deputy!))
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Re: LakeClan | Sᴱᴹᴵ⁻ᴸᴵᵀ⁺ »αccєρтιηg«

Postby |Shibiski| » Wed May 21, 2014 12:41 pm

(I fixed it, if you notice anything different please let me know! :D)
(And could i also make a kitten?)
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Re: LakeClan | Sᴱᴹᴵ⁻ᴸᴵᵀ⁺ »αccєρтιηg«

Postby Kitty-lover93 » Thu May 22, 2014 12:44 pm

    ((Okay, the deputy position has now reopened; once it gets filled, we can start!

    Shibiski, you can make a kitten as long as one of the members with a queen will agree to have their queen take care of it or if you also make a queen.))
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Re: LakeClan | Sᴱᴹᴵ⁻ᴸᴵᵀ⁺ »αccєρтιηg«

Postby Kitty-lover93 » Fri May 23, 2014 11:24 am

    ((Alright, I feel like we need to get this going or everyone's going to lose interest...

    So do you guys think we should start this now? I can make a quick deputy unless one of you wants to.))
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Re: LakeClan | Sᴱᴹᴵ⁻ᴸᴵᵀ⁺ »αccєρтιηg«

Postby kitsutenshi » Fri May 23, 2014 1:00 pm

((I think its a good idea to start soon, Kit's getting impatient ;D
If no one else is going to take it, then I don't see why you can't make a deputy.
Also, you should probably update the front page, it still says the deputy spot is taken.
If you want any help with updating the front page, Kit has nothing better to do C: ))
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Re: LakeClan | Sᴱᴹᴵ⁻ᴸᴵᵀ⁺ »αccєρтιηg«

Postby no longer here » Fri May 23, 2014 3:40 pm

{{- I'll take the deputy, reserve spot for deputy, making form in a few hours
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Re: LakeClan | Sᴱᴹᴵ⁻ᴸᴵᵀ⁺ »αccєρтιηg«

Postby no longer here » Fri May 23, 2014 3:48 pm

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name ➸ sunstrike
reason ➸ his golden fur and amber eyes reminded his mother of the sun
age ➸ 25 moons
gender ➸ clearly a tom
rank ➸ deputy (?)
scent ➸ smells of lavender and rosemary
strengths ➸ tracking, climbing, running
weaknesses ➸ fishing, swimming, hiding

personality ➸ sunstrike is a rather calm tom; nothing really gets on his nerves or angers him enough for it to show. this is a rather good trait that he has when he is under a stressful situation. however, this tom could be a bit stubborn and blunt, but in the end he means well. sunstrike can be a bit of a flirt with the she-cats. not in a bad way, but he tends to compliment them a lot, or look at them with a flirtatious glint in his feline eyes

crush ➸ none, win his heart
mate ➸ none, win his heart
kits ➸ none at the moment, yet he desires for some later on
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Re: LakeClan | Sᴱᴹᴵ⁻ᴸᴵᵀ⁺ »αccєρтιηg«

Postby Kitty-lover93 » Sat May 24, 2014 8:32 am

    ((Yay! You're accepted, Bubbline; thanks for making the deputy!

    We can start now! I'll start working on my first post, but you guys can go ahead and start. (;

    Oh, and I'm sorry that my characters forms aren't done yet; they keep changing in my mind, as you can see by the way they don't match their descriptions or pictures in the ranks anymore. Plus I've really been trying to get back into the groove of CS.))
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Re: LakeClan | Sᴱᴹᴵ⁻ᴸᴵᵀ⁺ »αccєρтιηg«

Postby Keriae » Sat May 24, 2014 8:35 am

    (I'll be posting in the morning hopefully; it's getting late here and I've got work tomorrow, so a reply may not arrive until tomorrow afternoon, dunno how my muse will be. Kitty, could you update the front page? Crowfang isn't on it xD)
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