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by tuft. » Thu Aug 29, 2013 12:58 am
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Age› 12 moons
Gender› Tom
Rank› Apprentice
Status› Single
Mentor› Snowdrift
Tags› Snowdrift
"Me? Wonderful?" Smokepaw questioned with a playful smirk and a joking, "Thanks! Hehe, well, I try to be~" He could have quite a sense of humor when he wanted to! The sleek and muscular apprentice then chuckled a bit at his mentor's tease. "You're right." he agreed. He would hate to slack off, but if Snowdrift wasn't up to training him, he wouldn't have minded. Although, he probably shouldn't have just assumed she wouldn't be.
It seemed that she was going to let him choose what to do, but at that point, he could no longer distinguish her voice from the others and was simply watching the movements of her jaws. "I get to pick? Well, ma-" Littlepaw? Did she say Littlepaw? Ah, it was true they were both about ready to be warriors soon! He couldn't pass up an opportunity to train with her, regardless. "L-Littlepaw, you say?" he squeaked out before clearing his throat of emotion. "Ahaha, an assessment between the two of us sounds like a good idea." Did he play cool, well? ... He hoped so.
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by foxflight, » Thu Aug 29, 2013 1:35 am
SNOWDRIFT
Snowdrift blinked her blue eyes, amused with her apprentices reaction to her compliment and her teasing comment. Smokepaw definitely had a good sense of humour which was another reason she loved being his mentor. She was absolutely grateful to Whitestar for picking her to mentor him. The slender white she-cat's tail unwrapped from around her forepaws and she swished her tail back and forth over the ground. Snowdrift was once again left chuckling with amusement at Smokepaw's next reaction to her suggestion of going to go train with Littlepaw. "Yes, I said Littlepaw." She meowed, answering Smokepaw whose voice had come out as somewhat more squeak, as if he were surprised or something. "Ok then. We're going to have to find them then, since obviously they're not in camp and knowing Eaglestrike he would have basically dragged Littlepaw out of her nest to take her training." She meowed with a light laugh. Snowdrift herself found Eaglestrike was a rather serious and at times, aggressive tom, but none the less, she knew he was a loyal and determined warrior. Snowdrift rose to stand, her tail lashed through the air a couple times as she looked around camp. Confirming the fact that neither Eaglestrike nor Littlepaw were in camp. "Come on, lets go find them. You can practise your tracking skills whilst looking for them." She meowed, turning her gaze towards the camp entrance and taking a few steps in the same direction, but paused to look over her shoulder back at Smokepaw, smiling warmly at her apprentice as she waited for him to follow.


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by tuft. » Thu Aug 29, 2013 1:50 am
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Age› 12 moons
Gender› Tom
Rank› Apprentice
Status› Single
Mentor› Snowdrift
Tags› Snowdrift
The blue-eyed tom followed behind his mentor, returning her smile. Tracking was something he was particularly good at, what with his enhanced senses of smell and sight that compensated for his poor hearing. This also made hunting easy, and really, fighting a well hidden opponent was his only issue. Downwind where he couldn't smell them, and camouflaged enough to where he couldn't see, the poor apprentice wouldn't hear them coming until they were inches away from his neck. But, he tried not to think about his handicap too often. It was one of the only things that could honestly change his mood for the worse.
After he and his mentor slipped through the camp's entrance and exit tunnel, he let his jaws drift open, taking in scents from all around. He closed his eyes for a moment, replaying all that had happened here lately in his mind. 'It seems that the first to have left camp this morning was Honeywolf. Her scent is pretty stale.' he mused, nodding to himself as he took in another breath. 'Shortly after came Littlepaw and Eaglestrike. There's who I'm after!' Smiling the tom started forward, following Littlepaw's scent. He glanced at Snowdrift and cocked his head. "Hey, if I'm going the wrong way at any point, please let me know!" he spoke. "I'd hate to lead us into a fox, or something."
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by foxflight, » Thu Aug 29, 2013 2:22 am
SNOWDRIFT
Snowdrift watched Smokepaw as the apprentice followed herself her and slipped through the bramble tunnel, exiting camp. She was quick to follow, a bramble snagging her white fur when she accidentally tripped overher own paws. She hissed underneath her breath, quickly inspecting the spot where the bramble had tugged harshly at her fur. It was now just a faint stinging pain and she simply ignored it, turning to look at Smokepaw. As she emerged from the bramble tunnel her jaws parted almost instantly, her eyes shutting briefly as she blocked all her other senses and allowed herself to take in all the scents around her. She caught the faint sent of a mouse, but ignored the scent despite it making her mouth water, she hasn't eaten anything this morning, having decided to eat after they had finished training. She quickly caught Eaglestrike's and Littlepaw's scent amongst the other scents that currently invaded her senses. Snowdrift head snapped upwards from her things when Smokepaw spoke and she gave a small nod of her head. "Of course Smokepaw," she began, pausing briefly before speaking again. "But I'm sure you won't lead us to a hungry fox, I trust you well enough to be able to track our clan-mates." Snowdrift padded forward, raising her nose to the sky as she scented the air. She then looked back at Smokepaw, taking a small step backwards and giving a small dip of her head, inclining for Smokepaw to lead so he would be able to track Eaglestrike and Littlepaw without having her scent mixing over with their two clan-mates.


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by tyger. » Thu Aug 29, 2013 2:50 am


Squirrelpaw is a she-cat. Beautiful and flowing, this is easy to see.

Squirrelpaw was a cat named Reedpaw's sister- they were known as the two beauties, with their evil, dark-hearted brother, Scarkit. He, fortunately, died before his evil schemes could penetrate the Clan. Naturally he was the 'beast'. Squirrelpaw was always more beautiful than Reedpaw, but when StarClan took her sister, she was utterly distraught. It was Scarkit's schemes that killed her, and Squirrelpaw has always had bad dreams about him since then. She never knew her parents, as her father was killed by a fox and her mother died in grief afterwards. Squirrelpaw was raised by another queen.

Squirrelpaw loved playing with her litter mates as a kit. She and Reedkit would play and have fun together, trying not to notice Scarkit muttering evil plans to himself. But one day the two she-kits were told to stay in the nursery and NOT come out until they were told. Scarkit was brought out of the camp. Squirrelkit- who was always more adventurous- snuck out and followed her brother, who was with the Clan leader. She hid herself and listened. It turned out that cats had heard Scarkit's plotting and had had told her leader, who questioned Scarkit- a d when he refused to answer, Squirrelkit let out a gasp as her leader ripped her brother to shreds. The leader- I'll call him, I don't know, Rowanstar, but that's just a random name- turned and saw her. Knowing that, if she told the Clan what had happened, they would turn on him, Rowanstar made a deal with Squirrelkit. If she told no cat what she had seen, he would not kill her.
But Squirrelkit refused. She was sarcastic and disrespectful, and told Rowanstar that even if he killed her, she would come back from StarClan. So Rowanstar scratched at her eyes and turned her blind in one eye. He promised that she would never, ever become a warrior. Tears welled at poor Squirrelkit's eyes. She would never see again through that eye, but has tried so very, very hard to become a true warrior apprentice.
Scarkit's schemes were always set in the future, and one continued after his death. This plan was the one that killed Reedpaw.

Being blind in one eye, you would expect Squirrelpaw to be less confident and quiter than other cats. Not so. Squirrelpaw is a very difficult cat to be around. She is not rude, in that she will not deliberately offend others; it's more that she will say what she thinks and voices her opinion freely. If she doesn't like a cat she will tell them, she's confident and has a sharp tongue. She knows her own beauty and doesn't care- she's perfectly happy rolling around in mud. She gets bored very easily and finds it difficult to respect cats just for their rank; she has to have a reason.

Squirrelpaw has more than her fair share of beauty. She has thick, luxurious dark ginger fur that has darker red tabby stripes. Her body is as slim as her mother's but Squirrelpaw's thick fur makes her seem more muscular, but in a beautiful, feminine way. Squirrelkit has, in her seeing eye, a blazing green iris- but in her blind one, it is much paler and more milky, which can be seen as a mar of her perfect face. Oh, and a thick tail that is her best feature.

Squirrelpaw has a very good memory and a heightened sense of smell. She knows her beauty and she revels in it, but is not vain. She is forever curious and longs to be able to see again, but she knows this can never happen. Squirrelstep knows all tactics and she can find her way around the forest with ease. She will not eat fish, ever, even if she is extremely hungry, and cannot bear it when cats die. It reminds her of her brother. She is good at talking and listening to the other Clan members, never hesitating to give her opinion, but she hates it when cats are rude to her about her half-blindness.
She can see perfectly out of her one good eye, but finds it hard to judge distances. She will leap out at prey and miss by about a tail-length. She needs to be trained to combat this.

She is six moons old, and has only just become an apprentice. She loves training, but needs a firm mentor that she can truly respect and love- and that is willing to work with her to combat her half-blindness.

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by tuft. » Thu Aug 29, 2013 2:57 am
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Age› 12 moons
Gender› Tom
Rank› Apprentice
Status› Single
Mentor› Snowdrift
Tags› Snowdrift
Smokepaw smiled and nodded, glad to hear his mentor had confidence in him. He stopped walking for a moment to catch the scent again and then continued toward it's source. Soon, they were forced to weave between more closely growing trees, Littlepaw and Eaglestrike's trail becoming stronger. A few more tail lengths, and they came into view. Smokepaw gasped breifly and quickly licked a paw, dragging it over his ears and the space between them, primping his sloppy fur. Eventually, and with a gleaming smile, he padded toward Littlepaw and sat. "Hello, Littlepaw, Eaglestrike!" he purred. "Hey, sorry for interrupting your training! But, uh... Snowdrift and I were wondering if I could train with Littlepaw, and Whitest-" Oh... They were supposed to bring Whitestar with them, weren't they? The apprentice glanced at Snowdrift and frowned as he thought of it.
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