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Postby credence » Sat Apr 05, 2014 7:09 am





This is the kingdom of Asteria.

Left in shambles by the murder of the beloved King Mauntell, it’s all the
newly widowed Queen Rosetta and her stepdaughter, Crown Princess Vivian Gael,
can do to keep it from ripping apart at the seams. With the help of
Prince Ferragance, however, it appears that the rallying point
for the rebels who committed this atrocious act — Killian, the notorious
captain of the pirate ship The Sirens’ Wrath — has finally been captured.

Yet an interrogation by the curious princess yields more questions than
answers, and all of a sudden it’s no longer clear who can and can’t be
trusted. Who wanted the king gone? Was it the pirate with a
less-than-honorable reputation? The maid who can kill a man with a hairpin?
The thief whose grudge against the aristocracy might have gotten a little
carried away? The ambassador of a rival kingdom? Did the assassin act
of his own accord? Why was the prince missing from his chamber that
night, anyway? What if this is all a ruse constructed by the crown princess
to cast the blame from herself?

Who is the real enemy?


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Postby credence » Sat Apr 05, 2014 7:56 am




Tess and Nick's rules can be found here if you need a refresher.

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Postby credence » Sat Apr 05, 2014 8:27 am





P R I N C E S S


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        xxx[ name:] vivian gael
        xxx[ age:] 21
        xxx[ friends:] maid, guard
        xxx[ enemies:] thief, pirate
        xxx[ family:] prince, queen
        xxx[ fc:] --

        xxx[ role-player:] undercover.

        ━━━━ ━━━━ ━━━━ ━
        The Princess has spent most of her life learning the ways of a queen.
        Taking an active role in her education, she knows everything from
        hosting a ball to battle strategies. For the past few years she has occupied
        herself with waiting tirelessly to be married off against her will. Now, still
        mourning her father, the Princess must team with her ridiculous younger
        brother to run the kingdom in the place of their severely depressed and
        grieving step-mother. Meanwhile, she has sworn on her life to find her
        father’s murderer and see him to swift justice. There are too many
        suspects, however. Some are her family, some friends such as the Maid
        and Guard, others are enemies, and some even suspect her. She knows it
        will break her heart if her suspicions against her dear ones are correct or
        to see them accuse her. She begins to wonder if she truly wants to know
        who killed her father.












A M B A S S A D O R


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        xxx[ name:] ferrah
        xxx[ age:] 23
        xxx[ friends:] prince, guard
        xxx[ enemies:] pirate, thief
        xxx[ family:] father
        xxx[ fc:] --

        xxx[ role-player:] Rated R

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        The Ambassador, the princess of the rival kingdom of Aeralind, is the cousin
        of the Prince and Princess through the King's sister. She is simply a
        person caught in the wrong place at the wrong time. To passing eyes,
        she seems the prime suspect for the King's murder. Unfortunate for her,
        the accusation isn't far from the truth. Her intentions in coming to Asteria
        were to propose a marriage between her brother, the crown prince, and
        the Princess, while gaining favor with the Prince to learn the kingdom's
        secrets from him. Skilled as a princess should be, the Ambassador
        must find a way to convince those pointing fingers that she did
        not kill the King while avoiding the truth about her stay in Asteria.
        The question is not whether or not the truth will come to the surface,
        but whether or not she truly did kill the King.












M A I D


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        xxx[ name:] brenna
        xxx[ age:] 22
        xxx[ friends:] princess, guard
        xxx[ enemies:] assassin, pirate
        xxx[ family:] deceased parents
        xxx[ fc:] adelaide kane

        xxx[ role-player:] sakorian rage

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        The Maid’s parents passed when she was nine, both hung for thievery
        to keep their beloved child alive. The King only saw it as theft. She was
        taken in by her aunt, serving as a maid in the castle. Not long after,
        her aunt took ill and nothing could be done to save her. The King, feeling
        pity for the orphan, decided that she would best serve the Princess as
        a personal servant and undercover bodyguard. She knows knives almost
        as well as the Assassin. The two became close friends, adding the Guard to
        their duo soon after his commands to guard the Princess. She is treated
        well by the royal family because of this closeness. Despite it all, the Maid
        never forgave the King’s murder of her family. She tried to convince the
        King to somehow give the peasants of the kingdom an easier life. Now
        she finds that taking too strong of actions has proved worse than she
        could ever imagine: the Princess thinks she may have killed the King.












T H I E F


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        xxx[ name:] aoife
        xxx[ age:] 20
        xxx[ friends:] pirate, maid
        xxx[ enemies:] princess, prince
        xxx[ family:] deceased parents,
        xxxconsiders assassin as brother
        xxx[ fc:] kaya scodelario

        xxx[ role-player:] wings of credence ;;

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        The Thief is a tricky one to be sure. Her father died long before her
        birth, and her mother died from an incurable illness when she was
        five. She was taken to the orphanage when she was found stealing
        bread from the bakery. Right away, she befriended the Assassin.
        They ran away together at twelve and learned their trades of fighting and
        thieving, respectfully. Though they remain close, the Thief took off
        last year to join the Pirate, with whom she has been finding adventure
        beyond the kingdom and doing her best work, moving from her previous
        petty stealing-for-survival and to a whole new level. Through him she has
        found the more exciting life she always dreamed of. Her reputation
        has grown just short of that of the Assassin and the Pirate, the people
        giving her the title of Queen of Thieves. There is no place she cannot
        break into, nor no jewel she cannot steal. What, then, would keep her
        from killing the King?








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Postby credence » Sat Apr 05, 2014 10:16 am







P R I N C E


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        xxx[ name:] ferragance
        xxx[ age:] 20
        xxx[ friends:] princess, guard
        xxx[ enemies:] pirate, thief
        xxx[ family:] princess, queen
        xxx[ fc:] simon woods

        xxx[ role-player:] Helmuth

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        The Prince, the future king of Asteria, is ridiculous to say the very least.
        Though he has been groomed to be king, he is a year younger than his
        sister the Princess, the fact of which virtually allowed him to be been left
        alone to do whatever his heart pleases. Never one to conform to
        expectations, the recent death of his father has only served to drive
        him further from the mold of the perfect prince, and the occasional
        escapades he used to make have become nightly excursions to disreputable
        taverns and shady neighborhoods. When not busy defiling the reputation
        of the royal family, he can be found wandering the castle halls with
        all the tranquility of a storm cloud or enjoying the attentions of
        pretty women. While some argue that, though rowdy, the amusement-
        seeking Prince couldn't murder his father, some believe that the young
        Prince has decided it is his own turn to rule. Which side is correct?













A S S A S S I N


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        xxx[ name:] vincent
        xxx[ age:] 22
        xxx[ friends:] thief, maid
        xxx[ enemies:] pirate, guard
        xxx[ family:] deceased parents,
        xxxconsiders thief as sister
        xxx[ fc:] kellin quinn

        xxx[ role-player:] Beatus

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        He is one of the prime suspects of the King’s assassination, but he easily
        escapes the manhunt the royal family has after him. The only thing known
        about the Assassin of Asteria is his reputation. Left at the orphanage soon
        after birth, the assassin’s first memories are of the Thief and their close
        bond. At thirteen, they ran away from the horrible orphanage and found
        their skills; he the blades and her the thievery. They remain close, though
        she has taken to the seas with the self-absorbed Pirate, a fact he is not
        fond of. She is the only one who could ever connect him to his murderous
        alter-ego, because by day the Assassin is just a normal person walking
        among the people of the kingdom. While his employer has ordered him
        to disappear, the assassin has found that, as long as no one knows who
        he is, things around the castle are getting interesting. Perhaps he’ll
        stay for a while.













P I R A T E


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        xxx[ name:] killian
        xxx[ age:] 21
        xxx[ friends:] thief, princess
        xxx[ enemies:] guard, prince
        xxx[ family:] sister
        xxx[ fc:] colin o'donoghue

        xxx[ role-player:] norm

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        The Pirate ran away from the care of his aunt and uncle when he was
        ten, headed to the seas in a determined search of adventure. It's no
        wonder, then, that twelve years later he would be the captain of the
        notorious Siren's Wrath. His plunder and hatred of the upper classes
        makes him the perfect Robin Hood figure of Asteria. His teaming with
        the Thief has made his career even better. However, his unfortunate
        visit to the mainland during the King's murder has many fingers pointing
        towards him as the one who gave the kill order. When the King's guard
        finds him preparing to leave the kingdom at dawn, the fact is added to
        his reputation as seasoning for his sentence. The questions now rise.
        Will the Thief break him out before he's hung? Can the Pirate convince
        the beautiful Princess that he is innocent? Would he be lying?













G U A R D


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        xxx[ name:] fabian
        xxx[ age:] 23
        xxx[ friends:] maid, princess
        xxx[ enemies:] prince, pirate
        xxx[ family:] father
        xxx[ fc:] tom burke

        xxx[ role-player:] Keriae

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        The Guard’s life began with his mother dying in childbirth. His father
        sold him into the service of the King when he was thirteen, believing
        that the boy would have a better life than that of a poor farmer. His
        father was right. For only two years the Guard was in the military
        service of the King, and that came to an end when the King saw his
        immense talent with a sword, yet his innocent heart. It was decided
        that the Guard’s use would best be served in guarding the Princess.
        The Guard continued growing up in the castle alongside the Maid
        and the Princess, where he and the former were trained to be both
        companions and protectors of the latter. The Guard is one of the
        most loyal to the King and royal family. No one believes that he would
        have killed the King. But how did the assailant gain access to the King’s
        chambers that night, without the Guard’s notice? Time will tell.








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Postby credence » Sat Apr 05, 2014 10:16 am





princess → pirate & assassin
ambassador → prince & assassin
maid → guard & prince
thief→ pirate & guard

ambassador & maid ← prince
princess & ambassador ← assassin
thief & princess ← pirate
maid & princess ← guard

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Postby credence » Sat Apr 05, 2014 10:17 am


O P E N / C L O S E D


Discussion thread: x
Original role-play: x



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Postby credence » Sat Apr 05, 2014 10:19 am


D I S C L A I M E R S


Please note that this role-play is a remake, originally made by sakorian rage. The original
role-play can be found here: x While the characters are basically the same, I've taken
the liberty to rewrite, remove, and add some things.



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-- the queen of thieves -- the queen of asteria

Postby credence » Mon Apr 07, 2014 8:06 am

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        some might say that the queen of thieves, aoife, is a cold-hearted girl with
        a grudge against royalty, but that is only a stranger's perspective. though
        it's usually not connected with the kingdom's best thief, aoife has a very
        strict moral code: she never steals from the poor, only from those who
        have more than enough, nor will she kill anyone unless it is in self-defense
        or to protect an innocent person. despite that fact, her years spent with
        the pirate and assassin have given her a wonderful edge in any battle.
        it was sworn to her own heart that she would protect the poor, since she
        herself knows very well what the situation is like. she finds it difficult to
        love and be loved after seeing so much grief in her life, but it's something
        that aoife is beginning to build a bridge over, no matter how much her heart
        is telling her to tread lightly. despite some self-loathing, aoife is someone
        who put herself into a dangerous life to better serve the poor of asteria.

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[♚] --- K I L L I A N --- [♚]

Postby norm » Mon Apr 07, 2014 8:49 am

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introduction
    name: killian jones
    pronounced: kill-e-en
    meanings: fathers name
    nicknames: captain
    age: twenty something; lost track
    gender: male, obviously.
    religion: atheist; he thinks that when you die, you die. that's it.
appearance
    weight: 210 lbs
    height: 6 foot 3 inches
    hair: naturally thick dark brown messy hair
    eyes: sea green; tealish colour
    skin: sun-chard, burnt
    modifications: a few ear piercings, nothing major.
personality
    first impression: cocky
    personality traits: he is a very strong-willed man and mostly gets what he wants. he tends to be bossy, and overly hard on people. on the inside he can really care for someone just like he does the thief and princess. killian is humorous, sarcastic, and proud. he can be brave, self-willing, and very independent.
    fears: getting hung, that is his worst fear.
    secrets: nothing really. (unless he killed the king)
    random fact: build his own boat (aka: the sirens wrath) by hand.
miscellaneous
    theme song: wanted by bon jovi
    favorite color: sea blue
    favorite food: fish
    favorite drink: rum
    skills: manipulative, and great aim with a gun. and plus he can hold his own rum.
relationships
    past relationships: mostly one night stands, nothing serious
    current relationship(s): just with the ocean and his ship
    crush(es): thief and princess
    best friend(s): thief
    past friends: not so many, unfortunately.
    family: sister?
    pet(s): has a ship dog; german shepherd wolf mix named Jack.
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