Nearing the Edgelord.

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Nearing the Edgelord.

Postby snart » Thu Nov 29, 2012 1:45 pm

Welcome to the forgotten and abandoned thread of my horrible roleplay.
I had mistreated people here and consider that as a red flag that should have been ended before any words were uttered. Closer to the Edge was truly a mistake, I had thought, three or four years ago, I was capable of managing my own roleplay. CttE had shown me I am not fit to lead nor guide anybody, and I am sorry for myself, the way I acted, and my horrible plots and unoriginal ideas.

Bree will likely be dragged down to the plains of oblivion, and her pathetic excuse for a pack scattered to escape from her poor, weak ways. This Alpha has been branded as one of the careless, insecure Alphas that appear in these lands very rarely, or in abundance.

However, Bree was meant to be fragile, and I had tried to make her stronger by the members of the pack, with proved to be a failure and she will no longer lead, but live her life as a nomad, or vagabond.


Sammy aka nivans.piers was a person who got me into roleplaying. I trusted them [and i still do] and knew who they were, probably why I had a preference to responding to them at a breakneck speed. They had formed and helped me construct my very first characters, who were blatantly Mary and Gary Sues/Stu's.

I had thought that they improved my writing, but it seems as if my childish behavior passed into them as I wrote. I could not differentiate "your" from "you're" or "through" from "threw." Needless to say, I was not very experienced in grammar or how fear functioned in other animals, such as prey.

Fortunately, you are all lifted from my cursed world and there I have delivered my long overdue apology. Please forgive, or forget this thread had existed...it'd mean a lot to me. c:
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Plot of the Edgelord.

Postby snart » Thu Nov 29, 2012 1:53 pm

The actual plot for CttE was unfinished, it wasn't polished or even edited. I had tossed out ideas on a blank slate and took what I enjoyed. This caused a confusing and rather undesirable roleplay that would have went up in flames and noxious fumes the moment I would say, "Death to all."

But here, let me write down the plot that in previous years, my inadequate vocabulary had difficulty with.
To fit my older plot, it's a ~all about me~ type of story.

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West winds drifted over the grass, the golden rays of sunlight casting a silken glare across the endless hills. Not much life remained in these areas, nothing but the occasional hare and a bird or two. An unexperienced Alpha, by the title of Bree doesn't lay down strict rules, and ends in a confused, grief-stricken phase. She had received her rank from her father, who was once a great leader and was deeply respected by all. Bree did not wish for the title of Alpha, she had her heart set on becoming a subordinate! All this responsibility and power was meant for wolves who could begin a conversation and stay calm throughout the excitement, who could knock down an opponent with ease, but offer mercy for their lives, a leader who could be an idol to the members of the pack.

Bree halted her little dream, for it was far from becoming true. Her father and his allies had perished in the winter season, and her mother passed during birthing Bree and her sister, Sylvari. The cowardly Alpha could not believe what her father would think of this, the once magnificent and flourishing pack scattered and inadequate. What if she could build the pack to it's former glory, find descendants of her pack or recruit new and different beings? It would be one journey, but who would support such a fragile, fearful wolf as Bree?

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And it's still trash. Nothing can bring back this roleplay and never will, fortunately.
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Mods! ~~~

Postby snart » Sat Dec 01, 2012 6:52 am

If the mods ever find this thread, I'd like them to delete this abomination.

Thank you in advance!
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Re: Closer To The Edge (Wolf RP) (New and Accepting!)

Postby Turn & Burn » Sat Dec 01, 2012 8:10 am

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Re: Closer To The Edge (Wolf RP) (New and Accepting!)

Postby alphatoros » Sat Dec 01, 2012 8:17 am

Can I reserve a assasin and a trainer from sun's blade pack??
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Re: Closer To The Edge (Wolf RP) (New and Accepting!)

Postby snart » Sat Dec 01, 2012 8:38 am

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Re: Closer To The Edge (Wolf RP) (New and Accepting!)

Postby snart » Sat Dec 01, 2012 8:39 am

Mmmh.
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Re: Closer To The Edge (Wolf RP) (New and Accepting!)

Postby luvarien » Sat Dec 01, 2012 8:51 am

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Re: Closer To The Edge (Wolf RP) (New and Accepting!)

Postby alphatoros » Sat Dec 01, 2012 9:04 am

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Name: Sylvari
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Mate: none
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Re: Closer To The Edge (Wolf RP) (New and Accepting!)

Postby snart » Sat Dec 01, 2012 9:54 am

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