Role Play School: Novice (Aiko, Rockpup5, Gleeky~Cheeze)

[s y n]

Hello and welcome to your novice role play thread! My name is DarkLion123 and I will be your proctor. Together we will get through this level and get you prepared for your exams and advancement to the next level! *applause*

What do we want to learn in this level?
• We will learn to create in depth characters
• We will learn to create smooth posts with appropriate punctuation and grammar (including quotation marks and the like)
• We will learn to expand our posts and never make one liners or dead enders


This thread has been created for
• Aiko
• Rockpup5
• Gleeky~Cheeze

[b]Before we start to role play…
We need some characters! As I previously mentioned, one of the aims of this level is to teach you to consider every aspect of your character, thus creating a well developed character who has some sustenance to him or her. To begin with this, we at the RP school have created a basic outline that you may expand on (but not subtract from).


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[b]Name:
Gender:
Age:
Personality:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Greatest fear:
Greatest wish:

Goals in life:
General Past:
Past Things They Regret:
Past Things They Are Happy With:
Family life:

Other:

Picture:


Once you’ve created your characters and have had them reviewed and approved by the proctor, you can begin your role play….

Role Play
Okay! You guys have all chosen to do a fantasy type role-play, and that is what we will be focusing on. To start you on your role play adventure, I have written up a prompt. Please continue with it, keeping in mind everything that is included in it.


Prompt:

A lone wolf ran through the rain as his pack chased after him, telling him that if he ever returned he would be killed. His heart pounding as he ran, his feet thundering on the wet ground. He slipped in the mud and fell. He looked to see his pack close. He jumped up and ran, his underbelly soaked with mud. The pack leader was right at his heels! Finally he turned sharply to the right, sprinting as fast as he legs would take him. Once he was sure his pack was gone, he stopped, collapsed, and lay there, the rain pattering on a wolf who could go no further.

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If you have any questions please feel free to send me or another proctor a pm! Also, if ever you feel like you are not able to post regularly and/or want to drop out, please pm me as well so that we may carry on without you.

[qittenpie]

((Oh, this is PERFECT for the character I was drawing today. XD. *gets my light blue so I can finish picture and use it as the picture ref*))

[onlyafter2009]

Name:
Gaia
Gender:
Female
Age:
4 Years
Ethnicity:
Maned wolf with hints of Gray wolf. Has a British accent.


Personality:
Gaia is a very stubborn She-wolf, never taking no for an answer. Especially if she wants something badly. Messing with Gaia is a bad thing to do, she will insult you until you attack and then she will beat you, or at least try. Most of the time Gaia is happy, she is willing to do things to help, but usually she'd want you to pay a price.
Likes:
Gaia loves to be right. If she isn't she'll deny it.
She likes to run around, have fun, enjoy life.
Swimming is something Gaia does a lot.
Dislikes:
Gaia HATES heights, she'll freak out when she goes near cliffs.
She doesn't like to hunt much but will do it if she's starving.
Strengths:
Water, Stamina and Speed are her best strengths. Also her wits are good at times.
Weaknesses:
Heights and Strength. If Gaia is tackled down there is barely a chance she will escape.
Greatest fear:
To be pushed off a cliff.
Greatest wish:
To someday be the mother of two.


Goals in life:
Her main goal is to become one of the greatest fighting wolves or the alphess of a successful pack.
She wishes to find a mate and have two or three pups.
General Past:
As a pup Gaia was brought up in a large pack, a good pack. Her father was the alpha and she was stuck to train in fighting. Then the large pack went to a medium pack, then a small pack. All because of the wars they had. By then Gaia was 2 Years, her father bred her and all the other females left. Gaia was bred by her father 6 times. She had 5 litters of pups. Gaia then turned 4 Years old. She became stubborn and annoying to her father, so he sent her away. The pack chased her for days, but Gaia kept running.
Then Gaia found what seemed like paradise.. She stuck to it, now she continues to live there.
Past Things They Regret:
Gaia regrets never standing up for herself in her old pack.
Past Things They Are Happy With:
Having a loving mother and a loving father.
Family life:
Gaia and her father were close, although not close enough. Gaia and her mother were really close, like best friends. Her family life was great until the pack grew to only 15 wolves. 13 females and 2 males. This drove her father to breeding all the females in his pack until it grew to it's usual of 68 wolves. That's when Gaia left.

Other:
Nope =D
Picture:

[qittenpie]

Name: Crow
Gender: Male
Age: ~21 in wolf years
Ethnicity: Gray Wolf

Personality: (WHYYYY) Crow is not the brightest bulb, but he's smart enough to not be dumb. He's fiercly loyal to those he knows, and mistrusts strangers. He likes female wolves and loses some of his reserve when meeting one for the first time. His happy act is just a front for the fear of being alone that he hides inside.
Likes: Wolf (his companion crow), females, elk, hunting, swimming
Dislikes: Strange Males, heights, snakes, porcupines.
Strengths: He is a great friend, loyal to the end, and able to get into close circles with ease.
Weaknesses: He fears meeting new wolves, feels lonely without Wolf, and can't understand words if he gets over-excited.
Greatest fear: Being alone. Utterly alone.
Greatest wish: He wants to have a pack to call his own again.

Goals in life:
Find a good pack, so he's not alone.
Settle with a good female. (He wants lots of pups, predicably.)
General Past:
He's been kicked out of packs more times than he can remember, because the alphas often mistrust his easy way and fast ascensions.
A crow hatchling fell out of it's nest on one of his many inglorius retreats, and they grew up together.
Past Things They Regret: He regrets leaving good friends behind, and regrets that Wolf had to go travel for the winter.
Past Things They Are Happy With: He hasn't been all that happy with how things have gone with his life so far, actually. Every time he gets settled, he is chased off.
Family life: None to speak of, really. His father and mother were low-ranking wolves who followed instinct and disobeyed the alphas. He was taken away by force and never knew if he had siblings or not.

Other: ((There's nowhere for physical description. D|. I hate that and will put it here.))
Crow is a leanly built gray wolf, average size. His main fur is a common brown, but his face is 'masked' in black, and it continues down his back to form a cape and runs down his tail. From his chin to his tail, on his belly, a lighter chestnut fur predominates. His paws are dark brown, with black pads.

((THAT IS THE WORST PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION. I-I don't even. D:))

Picture: ((The attachment hates it! XD)
Probably too big, so http://rockpup5.deviantart.com/art/Wait ... -159725203

[Moggie]

Name: Tee~Choo
Gender: Female
Age: 4 months
Ethnicity: Wolf

Fur colour: Black & White
Eye colour: Pale blue
Height: Quite tall for her age, and quite thin with lots of curves.
Any accessories?: (domestic/fantasy animals only) Tee~Choo wears a rainbow bracelet on her left front paw. The bracelet represents thunder storms. (It's kawaii charms are things such as thunder clouds ect...) It was made in her home town, Tokyo; Japan. (She has wings!)
Special Markings: (scars, etc?) The reason Tee~Choo has that bracelet is because she has a thunder strike shaped zig-zag going down her back. She also has very strange paint splash marks, like someone has painted all over her.
Frame:
Quite thin,with curves.

Personality: Tee~Choo is kind and caring. However, when she is complimented, it sometimes gets to her head and she can become very leading and get moody easily.
Likes: She like all nature, and LOVES thunder storms & art.
Dislikes: She does like nature, but she dislikes all the evil creatures of the land.
Strengths: Her ability to run makes it hard for her to be caught. She can also fly.
Weaknesses: Tee~Choo's grip isn't very good, so when she runs/flies so fast, it's hard for her to get her grip and dig her claws into the ground.
Greatest fear: Not being able to stop when she lands.
Greatest wish: To be admired because of her wings and rare markings.

Goals in life: To become happier and get a loving family.
General Past: Her mother rejected her once born. Her father loved her and cared for her alone. Not long ago, her father died when her mother returned and killed him.
Past Things They Regret: Not protecting her father once her mother returned.
Past Things They Are Happy With: Knowing her father loved her.
Family life:
Her mother also rejected the siblings, and they all died once she left them, her father tried to take care of them but it was too late.
Other:
She dislikes humans but she realizes some can be caring.
Picture: (discouraged for humans)

[s y n]

Okay all your forms look good, you may start the roleplay, and I'll give you tips to make your posts better, if you need it. Have fun!

[Moggie]

ooc; Thank you, i have to go really soon so i may only fit in this post. May the wolves meet up? I think we should as it may make the roleplay flow togther nicely.

[onlyafter2009]

~Gaia~

Gaia collapsed to the hard ground, breathing heavily. Small grass seedlings grew around her and the trees around her were strong with life. Gaia let her tongue roll out of her mouth as she started panting. The sun was bright in this small clearing. The dust floated around her angelic body as she panted. Gaia got up before stumbling to the right, she spread her legs and looked at the cause of her lack of energy. Gaia breathed in before slowly breathing out her mouth. She shifted her front left paw forward and her right hind paw back. Gaia snarled at the elk who had been cut into shreds and was now bleeding badly, the cow was as weak as Gaia. She sprinted at it before slamming into its side with all her strength, the elk fell to the ground, letting out a loud below before Gaia locked her jaws around it's neck, feeling the blood run down her throat again as she killed it by jerking the head up and breaking it. An easy death..

Gaia smiled, showing her dagger like teeth. This was a good kill. Gaia reached down and ripped a piece of flesh from the innocent elk, she threw it in the air before catching it in her mouth and chomping on it. Gaia swallowed the flesh before grinning and looking at the stomach. She lunged her head into it's soft stomach, reach in for organ, she touched the rib and smiled before struggling to get her teeth around the broken rib, she ripped it out from the stomach area and threw it away before putting her head back into the warmth of the elk which hadn't gone deadly cold. Gaia scavenged around for the liver, then she felt the worm like thing touch her black nose, she lifted her snout slightly before putting it forward and grasping the liver in her jaws, she took it out and the long stringy worm dangle from her jaws. Gaia wagged her long tail before slurping up the liver as if it was spaghetti.
She swallowed the last of it and smiled, "Ahh.." She murmured before turning around and heading out of the clearing, blood staining her snout.

[Moggie]

Tee~Choo

Tee~Choo's pale blue pupils fluttered as the corner of her eye caught a glimpse of the morning sun. The scenery around her was coming to life now, making her feel safe. With no proper parents, she had to be independent. She had no choice. How she longed to have a loving family, to have a loving home. To have a father that wasn't dead,that hadn't been killed by her mother.

A rumbling noise came from around Tee~Choo. Trying to conseal her fright, she bend down with her hind legs & rear in the air. She began to brave up and gave a half-growl. "Come out.. Im not afraid..." Tee~Choo quietly murmured.

[qittenpie]

Crow's paws skidded on the loose gravel as he made his way down from the mountainside. He missed the comforting black shadow of Wolf, but knew he had to make do for now. Sniffing the breeze cautiosly, his sensitive nose picked up the faintest trace of blood. He cocked his head, chestnut ears flopping to one side as he considered the situation. He was hungry and lonely, and blood would mean a kill and other wolves. He gulped nervously at the thought of meeting total strangers. Wolf would had made this descision easier, but Crow simply made his best guess and trotted towards the blood-scent.

He trod cautiosly as the scent started getting stronger, unwilling to run into a clearing full of wolves. He could scent them faintly now, at least two wolves. Totally strange new wolves. He shuddered dispite himself, and the black tip of his tail started the pines whispering. Frightened by the sound, he almost jumped out of his pelt, and started sprinting in a burst of excitement. He hurdled a small creek, crashing through the undergrowth on the other side. It only frightened him more, as the stirred-up plants gave him the impression that he had a pack of angry wolves on his heels. He finally burst into a clearing and froze, senses overloaded as blood-scented air poured into his overworking lungs. He could smell wolves!

((ffff. Can't spell. OTL))
((Edit: I added his pic to the ref sheet. XD))