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A-train wrote:You Don't Know What You've Got 'Till It's Gone (PART 2!)Alternate Name: I Know - It's Gone (PART 2!)
Welcome to Part 2 of YDKWYGTIG/IKIG! (Long shorthand name, I know. Lols, so contradictive~! XD)This is a BloodClan and Warriors RP!
If you're interested in seeing some of the old forms and players, you can check here, at the old topic (it kind of died after all but five of our members quit, so we created a new topic so, that, hopefully, people wouldn't feel intimidated, and so that they would finally JOIN!). (also add links to the other topics maybe, Idk)
Note: If you want to join, now is the time! It's a new post, and it's not so busy yet!Summary
BloodClan took over the Clans after one apprentice she-cat decided she'd rather have a BloodClan mate. They seduced her and made her tell them everything, then killed her once she'd outlived her usefulness. They kept the Clan cats as slaves, forcing them to hunt for them, and torture them.
However, now the Clans have escaped.... Well, most of them, anyways. Some of them were captured during the rebellion and were forced to go back to BloodClan as slaves!
The rebels who got away, plus any interested loners/rogues/kittypets, joined all the Clans together under the name of 'OneClan'. However, the cats still wanted to have their own Clans! Now, there are four Segments: Thunder, River, Shadow, and Wind.
The Segment Representatives are like leaders, and go to Fourtrees every day to discuss their Clan's opinions and what they should do next. The Segment Warriors and Apprentices help collect opinions from all the cats. The deputy organizes hunting and border patrols and such. The other cats have just normal positions.Plot
Oh, dear! The four Clans were living peacefully in peace until one day BloodClan came and attacked them all while they slept! Why? Well, one Clan cat, Rosepaw, decided that she wasn't happy with her current Clanmates, and found a mate outside of her Clan. She didn't believe that they would... or that they even COULD... hurt the Clans, and guess what happened :: She ended telling them all about Clan life. They knew everything about the Clans, and this made it easy for them to attack. They simply got their forces from other places and overwhelmed the Clans. That she-cat is dead now, but the other cats must live with the consequences!!
Life in BloodClan was stable—slaves got tortured, BloodClan warriors were happy—until the day that some slaves escaped.
As far as I can recall, a loner named Dragon appeared. Darkstar decided to pretend to be good, and Heartpound, a BloodClan warrior, went with him. They became mates. They pretended to be swayed under Dragon’s influence, and Storm Cloud took over, becoming Storm Star. Darkstar became Dark.
Amberleaf got on Storm Star’s bad side and was imprisoned. Dragon found out about it and dug a hole in the back of the medicine den, effectively destroying the tunnel behind the waterfall while leaving the rest of the den intact.
Jet, however, got angry at Amberleaf and they started fighting. Jet disappeared into the undergrowth, no one winning. He began to plan with Dragon, and while Darkstar and Heartpound went back to BloodClan to help Storm Star. Their plan all along had been to pretend to be good, and really be bad and spy for BloodClan.
But that all fell apart when Jet and Dragon helped the slaves escape. Everybody went back to the Clan territories.
But now there is terror. BloodClan is plotting in its territory, and all four Clans have to do more border patrols and things like that to protect themselves. It gets hotter and more humid every day, and there’s obviously a thunderstorm coming. The Twolegs are closing in on the Clans’ territory, and something’s gotta give.
What’ll happen first? Will the great storm come, or will the Twolegs destroy the Clans’ territory? Either way, the Clans will be driven out of the territories they’ve called home for so many moons, and BloodClan will follow them wherever they go.
Through all this tension, BloodClan steals a few cats every so often. They get away with it by snatching them on patrols, rendering them unconscious so they can’t raise the alarm. More and more cats are now slaves of BloodClan. Will BloodClan get the Clans again?Rules
BloodClan Specific Rules:
No force-breeding/mating, obviously.
No horribly gory details!
No killing/torturing another player's cat without permission.
You can have up to five characters! But only two can have high positions. (Is this rule really needed?)
OneClan Specific Rules:
No fighting within the Clan segments! Little squabbles are okay, though.
No border skirmishes unless one Clan segment is trying to take oodles of territory away from the other; the Clans are at peace, now, remember!
If one Clan segment is having trouble with prey, or whatever, the other Clan segments will help them out!
Right now, you may have as many characters as you can handle to fill the main high position! If the RP gets more members and the high positions are wanted, your characters will either have to step down from their positions or become NPCs, or the person wanting that particular position can take your character!
General Rules:
This is a semi-lit RP! Yesh, I expect posts of at least five sentences, and not just lame, "Storm Star sat. He got up. He shook out his belly fur. He padded towards the fresh-kill pile. He ate a mouse." NOOOOOOO!
You should put the character's thoughts, and at least 15 words in each sentence! Come on, peoples; it isn't that hard! D:<
Delete the stuffs in brackets on your form! Also,if a line on the form does not apply to you (i.e. you are a BloodClan cat not from the original four Clans, you would delete the 'History & Former Clan' line section altogether!), you must please delete it from your form!
Tess's rules apply.
Have fun! ;D
Uhh, let me just make that into a small thing.
