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[C a s]

"Who's that?" Melodykit inquired, sitting at the nursery entrance. Brightcloud moved towards her and peered out. "...I don't know. Kits, get back into the nest."

[rentropy]

Diamond looked around.

[C a s]

Please don't make all of your cats-or anyone's, for that matter-so accepting of loners, kittypets, and rougue.)

[rentropy]

I just didn't know who else would walk over}}

[C a s]

No one should. They should've tried to drive him out, like a normal Clan cat.)

[rentropy]

That sounded a bit rude, Cas.
There, i edited it}}

[SoftBeee]

((In my opinion, it's not rude. Just helpful.))

Birchfeather sniffs around for Emberheart urgently.

[totems]

"You never want to talk to me," growled Brackenblaze.

{I don't like ever play Spencer, would you mind deleting him?}

"Awh, don't be like that! I talk'd to ya las' time I visit'd." Birchfall pleaded.

[C a s]

It is what it is, which is the truth. In one of the normal Clans-River, Thunder, you get the gist-an intruder would be attacked and forced to leave.)

Emberheart bounded back to the meeting spot.

[rentropy]

Brackenblaze snarled, "Why don't you just leave, Birchfall? You left us, and once you leave with your new clan, you're never coming back."

{I'm not saying it isn't the truth, but it was still rude the way you wrote it}