(Sorry I wasn't on yesterday! D;)
Heartpound glanced over at Hawkstar, seeing that he was making it look so easy to stay quiet. That wasn't easy for an exciteable cat like Heartpound. Her name matched the way she was feeling! Her heart was certainy pounding in her chest from not fear; but anticipation. She stifled a snarl as the mouse raced right in front of her nose in fear. It would be nice to have a meal right then and there, but that would give them away from the scent of blood.
The kept her stomach low to the ground at Hawkfang's words, keeping as silent as she could. How much longer to the camp? The smell of the Clan cats were overpowering her nose. So many of them! But they were stale, as if none of them ha been in that section of the forest for a day or so.
"Hawkfang," she said, lowering her voice to a whisper. "How close are we? I mean, to the camp?"
She slid further and crept across the pine needles until she came to another bush next to a tree, where she quickly took refuge in.