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[Animals65]

Purpleflower smiles and purrs at Aspenwing, happy to see her friend. "I am doing great!" she said, feeling sad once she asked about her kits. "Well... they are dead." She heard Tidestar giving her advice and cheers up a little. "Thanks Tidestar." she said. "That seems to make sense I guess. That sounds like pretty good advice."

[víolet]

aspenwing's eyes were filled with sympathy as the queen stated that her kits were dead. "oh my... i'm so sorry, purpleflower, i didn't know. they must have been beautiful with a mother like you." she said softly, nudging the shecat with a soft smile to cheer her up. aspenwing's heart skipped a beat when tidestar asked if he could have the sand piper she caught. she looked over at him. "o-oh! yes, of course!" aspenwing replied, surprised. she placed the sand piper by his paws and smiled up at him, bowing her head. "tidestar, could we talk tonight? maybe we could meet at the beach?" she asked, hope filling her eyes.

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[Animals65]

Purpleflower feels Aspenwing nudging her and purrs as her friend comforted her. "Thanks Aspenwing, Tidestar." she said. "They were beautiful kits." She looks at the sandpiper and she realizes how delicious the bird was.

(I had to look up what a sandpiper was because I never heard of it! Hahaha! I feel stupid!)

[demus]

Name: Pebblestream
Age: 18 moons
Rank: Deputy (If not available, warrior.)
Gender: Shecat
Crush: Tidestar
Kits: None
Mate: None


Personality: Beautiful white cat with tortoiseshell with a warm amber gaze, and an okay hunter. Not the best, but ocasionally will make some great catches. Sometimes Usually clumsy, but also helpful. Always sweet and kind, and has the sweet smell of honey on her. Loves to climb trees.


(Sorry if I break any rules, this is my first Roleplay.)

[víolet]

( psst not to be rude but i think your character is a bit of a mary sue... "best hunter in the clan" is a little bit... a lot... mary sue-ish. again, not to be rude, just a little advice... )

aspenwing's eyes lit up with happiness when he agreed to speak with her. "great, thank you so much." she meowed, standing a little bit closer to him. she looked over at purpleflower. "don't worry, purpleflower. they're in a better place now, looking down from starclan. i bet they're very proud of their mother." she said with a soft smile.

[Animals65]

(Yeah I think thats a bit too much of a mary/gary sue.)

[demus]

( psst not to be rude but i think your character is a bit of a mary sue... "best hunter in the clan" is a little bit... a lot... mary sue-ish. again, not to be rude, just a little advice... )

aspenwing's eyes lit up with happiness when he agreed to speak with her. "great, thank you so much." she meowed, standing a little bit closer to him. she looked over at purpleflower. "don't worry, purpleflower. they're in a better place now, looking down from starclan. i bet they're very proud of their mother." she said with a soft smile.

Okay, good hunter. sorry, this is my first time X3

[Animals65]

Purpleflower sighs and looks at Aspenwing. "I hope so." she said. "Especially when they watch me tell a certain tom that I love him."