NightClan V.3 (not accepting)

[C a s]

Sootpaw bounded into camp. He froze. The scents of blood and death touched his tongue, along with the familiar scent of his sister. "Something's wrong."

"FatherClan?" Redkit gasped.

[#Spirit]

Cherrykit shook his head, "no, not FatherClan, FeatherClan, they gave us rabbits and treated us a little. They are really kind, well, since they are our allies along with WhisperClan then I can see why. Cinderstar went after the Shiver cat and the one with the burnt tail."

Mintpaw stopped dead in her tracks as she scented death, her eyes widened as her jaw seemingly dropped

[<sandfeather>]

Whats happening!!!)

Cocoa looked around in fear

[#Spirit]

(they found Ashpaw dead)

Mintpaw looked sadly at her paws and a teardrop fell from her eye, Ashpaw had been the one to save her when Ivy attacked, if it weren't for her she wouldn't be standing, she felt like she had a best friend for a little while, now that was gone.

[<sandfeather>]

Cocoa saw the dead body and soghed

[Frostbite18]

Darkkit backed away from the other cats, "F-fine, I won't tell...only because I will not let my family get hurt" she hissed bravely.

[<sandfeather>]

Can mudpaw and honeybee save spirtstar?)

Cocoa sighed"im so sorry mintpaw"

[C a s]

"A-A-Ashpaw?" Sootpaw could barely breath as he dashed to her body. "Get up! Get up!" He yowled. He carried on cursing and yowling until he couldn't, then he collapsed to the ground beside her.
Falling Star moved forward. "She was my sister, correct?"

Redkit blinked. "Oh. I'm glad you're ok!"

[#Spirit]

He looked at DarkKit, confused, "well dad already knows, he got us there plus we didn't know where we were." Cherrykit let out two more coughs before continuing, "well we were taken by Shiver and we didn't really get to witness the battle," he coughed again then stood up straight, trying to ignore it. "He took us to their caves and he made me fight against another cat named Frostbite, surely I won, I think, and we were basically forced to battle against the apprentices." He then indicated the new scar across the back of his neck, "like so." He was about to continue before erupting into a fit of coughing.

(maybe, I need to discuss with Raikou)

Mintpaw buried her face into Cocoa's fur, sobbing

[<sandfeather>]

Cocoa dighed and huged her (puting hrr head around her) she licked he r head