((I personally don't think don't think the intro is too long, but that's just me. I already posted this before, but you seem to have missed it, Tinkpetz.))
Name: Bloodstar (Formerly Bloodgaze)
Gender: Tom
Age: 27 moons
Clan: FireClan
Rank: Leader
Mentor/Apprentice: None
Kin: Icestar's half brother, Runningleaf's half brother, Whiteblaze's brother
Mate: Open
Kits: None yet
Looks:

Personality(Optional): Bloodstar is noble and loyal, like most leaders should be. He, like his half sister, is a natural leader but thirsts for it so. He can be cruel at times, and kind at others. Very protective of his Clan and those close to him.
History(Optional): Many seasons ago, Bloodgaze was a young but powerful warrior thirsting for the one thing just out of his grasp: power. He had nearly driven himself mad with jealousy at his brother and the former deputy, Whiteblaze, when he had discovered that Freestar was on her last life. Dawns later, Whiteblaze and Bloodgaze were on a border patrol. That was the last time Whiteblaze was seen alive.
Do you promise to follow the warrior code?: That is a very good question. . .
Other: Famous Amos, He is on his fourth life.
Name: Dappleclaw
Gender: She-cat
Age: 13 moons
Clan: DarkClan
Rank: Minion
Mentor/Apprentice: None
Kin: Unknown
Mate: None, FORBIDDEN!
Kits: None
Looks:

Personality(Optional): Dappleclaw is cold and cruel-hearted, like Icestar had changed her. She had been naturally rebellious and independent as a rogue's kit. She is determined and hard-working to gets what she wants, and isn't afraid to slit a few throats to get what she wants. Sadistic as well.
History(Optional): Dappleclaw is from IceClan. She was an apprentice eagerly anticipating her warrior ceremony that was to take place at sunset that following day, after the sunhigh patrol she was on. Little did she know, she would not return to camp nor would her companions: her mentor Bluestreak and her best friend (possibly mate) Darkcloud. After a strange, unfamiliar scent reached her sensitive nose she stopped short and curiously queried Bluestreak about it. Her mentor scented the air and a frightened, dreading expression appeared on her face. After the bloodbath that followed, Icestar noticed a dangerous potential in Dapplepaw; perhaps her cold, calculating gaze that seemed as though she were wondering the most efficient way to take you down, or how she, an apprentice, killed one of her strongest warriors despite the blood pouring out of her own wounds. Either way, Icestar took Dapplepaw in after hollowing out her soul and healing the wounds that should have been fatal.
Do you promise to follow the warrior code?: -Hisses bitterly-
Other: Gingerbread men (That are very fun to light on fire and imagine they're real. x3) She is an exceptional fighter and is deadly in battle.
Name: Dawnsinger
Gender: She-cat
Age: 17 moons
Clan: WaterClan
Rank: Warrior
Mentor/Apprentice: None
Kin: Aswhisker, brother
Mate: Stormcall
Kits: None
Looks:

Personality(Optional): Kind and friendly or cruel and cold-hearted. Dawnsinger's mood can change with the wind and she "suffers" from MPS (Not even sure if a cat can have that. x3). She is different from her brother, but is a worthy opponent in battle nonetheless. She has a somewhat short temper, and gets mad easily. She can be violent and cruel sometimes as well as kind and loving at others.
History(Optional): Same as Ashwhisker's.
Do you promise to follow the warrior code?: I -falters- do
Other: Nutter Butter
Name: Ashwhisker
Gender: Tom
Age: 17 moons
Clan: AirClan
Rank: Medicine cat
Mentor/Apprentice: None
Kin: Dawnsinger
Mate: Forbidden, none
Kits: None
Looks:

Personality(Optional): Bold and outgoing. Isn't afraid to speak his mind but has enough wits to know when to hold his tounge. He is strong-willed and loyal, but strays from the code occasionally. He can be kind or menacing, depending on whether he likes you or not.
History(Optional): Two moons after being kitted, Ashwhisker's father thought his mother was in love with another tom. He tried to kill her, deranged, sadistic cat he was, but ended up murdering his Ashwhisker's other sister. He was banished from WaterClan. After that, Ashwhisker was separated from his sister when their powers were determined.
Do you promise to follow the warrior code?: Do I?
Other: Fig Newton
Name: Shadepaw (Shadeflight)
Gender: Tom
Age: 8 moons
Clan: IceClan
Rank: Apprentice
Mentor/Apprentice: Nightfall
Kin: Dawnkit, niece
Mate: Open
Kits: None
Looks:

Personality(Optional): Somewhat kind and friendly once you get to know him. Shadepaw is quiet but not shy, and usually keeps to himself. He doesn't usually make relationships often, but when he does it sticks. He isn't selfish at all and would give himself up in a heartbeat to save those close to him as well as his Clan. He can be quite odd sometimes.
History(Optional): Most peculiarly, he cannot remember anything prior to the age of three moons. When he awoke, his parents were dubbed as disappeared, end of story. Even stranger, he can't seem to get any information about what had happened, who his parents were, or what had happened to them. The only way he knows about Dawnkit is because he overheard some cats talking about her when they mentioned his name.
Do you promise to follow the warrior code?: -Gives skeptical look, as if he's wondering why you would ask and how he would answer- I do,
Other: Kitteh-shaped cookies!
Name: Stormpaw
Gender: She-cat
Age: 10 moons
Clan: LeafClan
Rank: Medicine cat apprentice
Mentor/Apprentice: Heathersong
Kin: Unknown
Mate: Open
Kits: None
Looks: Smoky gray pelt with dark blue eyes that can be as mysterious and unreadable as the ocean.
Personality(Optional): Shy at times, and usually quiet as well, though she can talk a lot when she's angry, upset, or being friendly. It doesn't take much to ruffle her fur, oddly, and she will unsheath her claws in a moment's notice. Stormpaw can be weird at times but lovable all the same. At the same time, Stormpaw is also bold, outgoing, and headstrong. She is not afraid to speak her mind but has enough wits to know when to hold her tounge. She has a somewhat short temper, although she is usually calm. Doesn't make relationships very often though when she does, it stays. Frivolous and has a rebellious streak. She is quick and agile with a lean build and often uses her speed to overpower opponents, though she is suprisingly strong. Stormpaw is free-spirited and strong-willed, as well as well as determined and hard-working; she won't allow anyone to get in the way of her ambitions.
History(Optional): Stormpaw's mother died after kitting, and her father was killed by some foxes when she was a young apprentice. She bears a wickedly curved scar from this incident running down her left front leg.
Do you promise to follow the warrior code?: Sure I do
Other: Oatmeal Rasin, May start to like Earthpaw of EarthClan
Name: Whiterunner
Gender: Tom
Age: 19 moons
Clan: RockClan
Rank: Deputy
Mentor/Apprentice: None
Kin: Unknown
Mate: Heathersong(?)
Kits: None
Looks:

Personality(Optional): Usually calm, very patient and thinks before he acts. Whiterunner is quite friendly and makes friends easily. He is ruthless in battle, though, and can inflict pain and manipulate other cats easily.
History(Optional): Whiterunner was born as a rogue and found as a kit by a RockClan patrol. He was teased and shunned most of his life but eventually proved himself by thinking he has to work harder than anyone else because of his origins.
Do you promise to follow the warrior code?: Do I?
Other: Oreos
Name: Flamedancer
Gender: She-cat
Age: 13 moons
Clan: SunClan
Rank: Warrior
Mentor/Apprentice: Open
Kin: None
Mate: Nightfall(?)
Kits: None
Looks:
http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs18/f/2007/212/1/b/Ginger_by_Spudgun.jpgPersonality(Optional): Rebellious, free-spirited, and strong-willed. Flamedancer loves to joke and mess around with other cats, and is very social as well as good at making friends. Don't underestimate her, though. She is a fatal opponent in battle, especially if she is fighting for those closest to her. Her tounge is barbed and whatever you say might be thrown back in your face with vicious sarcasm.
History(Optional): -Cough- She fell from the sky. (JK)
Do you promise to follow the warrior code?: I do
Other: Chips Ahoy