Treeclan ~ The clan of the dense forest.~Semi-lit.~OPEN!

[zippyzoo77]

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[hotaru.]

Oh, thanks! Sorry, zippyzoo77, sometimes I maybe can't type enough or write
a post too late. Most times, I write after school and at the night, but my mom
just screams at me to not do the computer or the Ipad. Really sorry!

[zippyzoo77]

((I understand that too. My mom just bugs me to get off the computer and sleep.))

[hotaru.]

Ahh....Noo!! I was typing a post on this, but my sister
And brother deleted it!! I remember it was long
And important, but I forgot what I wrote! Oh no...
Oh well, I'll have to deal with it.

[Reiy]

Name: Moonpaw
Gender: She-cat
Rank: Medicine cat Apprentice
Age (in moons, 6-13): 7 moons
Clan: Fireclan
Mother: Fawnspot (passed)
Father: Darksparrow (passed)
Other Kin(alive, and their relations, if another clan specify which.): none
StarClan Kin(If you want a special life description put that here too) : Fawnspot, Darksparrow
Looks (description and picture): Silver cat with blue eyes and a long feathery tail

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Mentor (required): Dewdrop
Personality: Caring calm loyal patient friendly
History: Mother died while giving birth Shortly after father died from Greencough
Other (warrior name, etc.): Moonwhisper

[zippyzoo77]

((I have several things. Numbered for your conveinence.
1. Since you have applied for a Fireclan cat, you will need to put their form in the Fireclan forum, not here on Treeclan. The link is on the front page, and in my siggy too.
2. Could you please add more to your form and make it more semi-lit? I'm a bit worried that you may not be literate enough, since your personality and history are only about a half a line each, but I'm more worried about the fact that there is no punctuation and incorrect capitalization in the history, as well as incomplete sentences in the personality and description. (Everything else I understand is short, and they are fine.)
3. Please re-read the rules, you've missed something.))

[aiu]

Name:
Blurkit
Gender:
Male
Rank:
Kit
Age (in moons, 0-6):
3 moons
Clan:
TreeClan
Mother:
Starflight
Father:
Specklenose
Other Kin:
Goldenkit (brother), Mothkit (sister)
StarClan Kin:
N/A
Looks (description and picture):
Black tabby tom with bad eyesight.

Personality:
Blurkit is a rather bubbly kitten, full of energy, but because of his bad eyesight, he is often down trod.
Other:
Blurstrike

((Remaking. Sorry.))

[zippyzoo77]

((A couple things, one, Blurkit (and his family) are in Sunclan, so you'll have to put them over there before they can be accepted. Two, his father's name is Sparknose not Specklenose. Other than that is pretty good.))

[aiu]

((Whoops, sorry. Do mind if I just use him and change his name to one of the kits from this clan?))

[zippyzoo77]

((Actually, all the kits here are female... You could play one of the warriors here, and have dibs on one of Snowfur's kits when they are born if you'd like.))