Olivesaurus wrote:"Brokenwhat?" Smokestar asked, inviting the tom to sit down with him. He had clearly never heard of her, and looked puzzled.
"Her name is Brokendream," Brackenflame's voice hardened. "The mousebrain of a leader before you changed her name when she was marred by the badger attack. She was only a kit, but had to live with that name for the rest of her life. I came here today to tell you about her and to request that you change her name, because it never represented what she really is.
Brokendream used to be a bright and outgoing she cat, always helping when ever she could. But one day, a fatal badger attack killed her family and scarred her, on the inside and outside.
Since then, she has withdrawn from helping around in the clan, is seldom seen, and her spirit has gone. Now, she spends her time hiding, thinking that she is a monster. I think that with help and support from the clan and a new name, Brokendream will regain that wonderful personality, forget her past and become a great warrior.
That's why
you have to help. You can convince the clan, tell them about her. Tell them that she is one of them, and should be treated that way. It may take weeks, moons, even, but I am confident in you and Brokendream, so Smokestar, please help." Brackendream took a deep breath, waiting for him to answer.