♥Brightclan and Darkclan, The Clash♥ Semi-Lit And OPEN!

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Re: ♥Brightclan and Darkclan, The Clash♥ Semi-Lit And OPEN!

Postby squints » Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:29 pm

(THankyou so much! PS I'm a horrid speller, and sometimes my spell check dosesn't work D: would that be ok? I men, I bet you could still kinda understand XD)

Hauntedsoul gasped, surprized at the condition of the camp. "Um, Hello, May I help in anyway?" Hauntedsoul asked hoping something wouldn't crawl out of the forest and attack, her. HEr heart was racing, "Hello?"
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Re: ♥Brightclan and Darkclan, The Clash♥ Semi-Lit And OPEN!

Postby Solanum » Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:44 pm

Whispertail glanced at Hauntedsoul, sighing softly. "I'm sorry but we've taken losses, maybe you should come back another time." The pregnant she-cat hung her head, closing her eyes but not stopping the tears from falling down her face. At her feet lay the tattered remains of one of the newest warriors, Ternfeather. She had been a good friend, and her best friend was no where to see. Many others were missing. Her heart was heavy with fear for her clan, where were they and were they alright? Kite was an intelligent cat, and an amazing warrior. She would make it out, or Strayclan would pay.

(( Ofc it's not just Kite that has been captured and I'm not favouriting her because she's my character. It's because Whispertail and Kitewing were close :3 ))
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I will be here
when you think you’re all alone
Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
Til I break you

You’ll never know what hit you
Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
This hell you put me in
I’m underneath your skin
The devil within
You’ll never know what hit you


I tried to be the lover to your nightmare
Look what you made of me
Now I’m a heavy burden that you can’t bear
Look what you made of me
Look what you made of me
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Re: ♥Brightclan and Darkclan, The Clash♥ Semi-Lit And OPEN!

Postby squints » Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:47 pm

"Oh, erm- How may I Help you?" She looked at the warrior, having no idea what to do, she was afrid of going back to her clan. But, she was also, afraid of hurting the female

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Re: ♥Brightclan and Darkclan, The Clash♥ Semi-Lit And OPEN!

Postby Solanum » Wed Jul 13, 2011 7:14 pm

Whispertail shook her head, sighing once again. "I don't know. Everything is going wrong for us right now..." She took a deep breath, opening her eyes once again to watch the loner she-cat. "I'm sorry, you're going to have to excuse me. There may be many cats in a clan but each casulty is a friend. What is it that I can help you with?" Cocking her head, her ears pricking up a little but still drooping at the tips. She was one of the only cats without blood on them, other than a little on her paws and muzzle from Ternfeather's body. She wouldn't have been allowed to join the fight anyway, she was too pregnant... Vulnerable.
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I will be here
when you think you’re all alone
Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
Til I break you

You’ll never know what hit you
Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
This hell you put me in
I’m underneath your skin
The devil within
You’ll never know what hit you


I tried to be the lover to your nightmare
Look what you made of me
Now I’m a heavy burden that you can’t bear
Look what you made of me
Look what you made of me
I’ll make you see
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Re: ♥Brightclan and Darkclan, The Clash♥ Semi-Lit And OPEN!

Postby Africa. » Thu Jul 14, 2011 4:35 am

(BlazerDream: I'm sorry, but you'll need to use spellcheck a lot... This place is semi-lit, and one of the rules here state that we'd like at least two lines per post, at the very bare minimum, and good punctuation/grammar. Otherwise, I'd need to un-accept you, which I really hate having to do D: Also, you'll have to change your posts ^^" Here, when a new character is added, we just jump them into a post as if they were always there, so try that ;) )

Seapaw could feel his discomfort, but continued on. Last she checked, him living was a bit more important that how comfortable he felt with a medicine cat apprentice licking his wounds. Tongue lapping away at the last scraps of blood, she pulled away, as if to inspect him through vision, though that was obviously impossible. "Its all I can do now. I'm sorry... He's to rely on Starclan having mercy upon him now."

Owlspirit licked the top of her head, whispered a soft "I love you" as he did so, praying to Starclan that they'd find their daughters. Pulling away, he scanned the camp with desperation in his gaze. "Lightkit? Sablekit? Girls, where are you?" His voice rung out clearly, eyes flashing. Strayclan would be. They'd be hunted down, and they would be killed.
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Re: ♥Brightclan and Darkclan, The Clash♥ Semi-Lit And OPEN!

Postby Rosalind » Thu Jul 14, 2011 4:39 am

OCC: I'm begining to lose my muse for this RP... :(
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Re: ♥Brightclan and Darkclan, The Clash♥ Semi-Lit And OPEN!

Postby Africa. » Thu Jul 14, 2011 4:53 am

(Aww </3 Don't worry, Icepath will keep Appleberry company ;) ^^)

Seapaw waved her tail towards her den, clearly indicating for Icepath to bring Mistclaw there. Icepath, understanding this, began gently dragging Mistclaw away towards the other side of camp, where Seapaws den be. All the while, he could feel Featherpaw at his heels, hurrying after her mentor like a lost kit. Pushing past the overhang of moss, Icepath slid Mistclaw into the cave in which was the medicine cat den, laying up down on the last available nest in the entire den. Glancing over, the tiger tom found Appleberry a little ways off. Rising to his paws, he padded over, bleeding paw pad causing him to wince at each step, though the pain was very much barable compared to Mistclaws. "Appleberry... How are you doing?" He sat at her side, fearful to find that same, distant silence.
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Re: ♥Brightclan and Darkclan, The Clash♥ Semi-Lit And OPEN!

Postby Rosalind » Thu Jul 14, 2011 5:12 am

(Okay, thanks!)
At first, Appleberry sat that there gloomingly and didn't say anything at first. Then she looked over at Icepath. "Is your paw hurt?" she meowed quietly, and sniffed his paw. She was very grateful for the warrior being there for her, she didn't want to be alone.
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Re: ♥Brightclan and Darkclan, The Clash♥ Semi-Lit And OPEN!

Postby Keriae » Thu Jul 14, 2011 5:35 am

(Africa, the kits are 'paws now. Remember?)

Brighfrost stood by his side, raking her gaze along hte edges of camp. Her head lifted a little and she took a deep, long breath, drawing in as much scent as she could. "Sablepaw? Lightpaw? Where are you?" She called, each moment adding to her anxiety. Where were her two daughters? She knew that Seapaw was already treating the injured with Brackenfrost. Such stress for one so young...
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Re: ♥Brightclan and Darkclan, The Clash♥ Semi-Lit And OPEN!

Postby squints » Thu Jul 14, 2011 6:22 am

(Ok really sorry about that, and this is my first semi-lit. I'll try my very best to do well ^^ )

Hauntedsoul looked around, at the bare, cold, camp. Bodies were every where, of cats she used to know. Empties puppets of the souls she called friends. She kept going trying not to fall over, thew in her head seemed to just escape her, making her light head. She kept her balance, barely. She decided to look for the cats she knew. "No, no, no." She sighed, going through cats she knew. Hauntedsoul stood up and walked around checking on every one. (Is this better ^^ I'm trying! )


Blazeheart padded around full of fury and anger. Hissing left and right, full of pure hatred. "Why us those flea bags get to come here-" Blazeheart stooped in her tracks looking at the body of her best friend, "No, I thought she was alive" Blazeheart shook her head trying to shake the image from her head. Her anger depleted, and turned to sorrow. Soon tears were streaming down her cheeks.


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