SunClan's Story [New Thread]

[Venatici]

ooh, I absolutely love writing. c: All the teachers think my rough drafts are my finals, untill I tell them different. So far, I've written an analysis for a Socratic Seminar that was over two thousand words in under 75 minutes, and only errors in it were one capatilization, putting an 'it' and 'that' in the wrong area, and putting the sentence "The mindset of such a thing triggering the narrator's mind to act upon merely the softest thumping is very typical; the brain connected it to the beating of the man's heart, which in turn drove him to madness" in the start of a paragraph. [Continues to ramble on] Anywho, anyone like to RP with Wolfpaw for a bit? c': ]]

[TheCalicoTabby]

{I like writing, but not so much in english class. x3 Too many essays. At least this time it was something a bit more interesting; a memoir. I chose to write about the time I slid down an icy hill with most of the rest of my grade two class and couldn't get back up. x3 It was quite the adventure at the time.
Anyway, I'm finished now, so it's time for Eaglestar to wake up. ^^}

Eaglestar blinked slowly, raising her head from where she'd begun to drift off. She'd thought she'd heard an argument, and as she looked for the source a breeze blew towards her, carrying an unfamiliar scent. Her eyes widened with alarm, which quickly faded to wariness. She hadn't heard a fight or scented blood; with any luck this outsider was less hostile than Grinner. Still, the voices hadn't sounded friendly. Knowing she should deal with it, she reluctantly got to her paws, her muscles aching. With a quick shake to free the dust from her pelt, she padded over, soon spotting Loudpaw, Skypaw, and an unfamilar she-cat; surely the source of the scent.

[leirah.]

Smallstep smirked as Skypaw stomped off." She has the urg to irritate me, but she's loyal you can see it in her eyes. I'm assuming she ran off so she wouldn't bother you anymore." Said the she cat as she swished her tail. Was that pride in her voice? "However she reminds me of myself." said the she cat as her whiskers twitched with satisfaction. Smallstep turned her head as she spotted Eaglestar and flicked her ears." Hello are you the leader of this clan?" she questioned.

{Hehe x3 I know how you feel}

[SukarettoYanagi]

(Sounded like fun X3)

Loudpaw looked over at Eaglestar and back at Skypaw. "See. I told you she'd be here soon..." he trailed off, seeing her go. He lept to his paws and followed after her. "Skypaw! Please. Come back. Did I say something?" he called behind, hoping he didn't just ruin the chance at a good friendship.

[leirah.]

Smallstep pricked her ears and stopped infront of Loudpaw whispering in his ears." Don't worry she will forgive you she just may make it hard. That's how she cats are. Don't give up on her." Smallstep said gently as she turned back to Eaglestar. Skypaw lied down and faced her back towards him, she wasn't mad just embarrassed.

[SukarettoYanagi]

Loudpaw shook off what Smallstep had just said, coming to lay down beside Skypaw. "Did I make you upset?" he asked, concerned. His amber eyes looked into hers, mixed emotions clouding and dulling his eyes.

[leirah.]

Skypaw's eyes met his, but as soon as they did she turned away and stared at the ground. " No; no you didn't." she said softly as she lied her head on her paws. Skypaw was protective of her clan, she felt bad for the way she acted, but her clan was important. Skypaw didn't trust Smallstep, but she never trusted any cat until they proved their loyalties. If a cat ever questioned Skypaw's loyalty she would call her fur off, then make it into a bed she didn't tolerate cats questioning her loyalty. If Eaglestar or Loudpaw found out her secret, would they like her? What would happen, it was the truth yes, she was half clan.

[SukarettoYanagi]

Loudpaw pressed his nose to her cheek. "Good. I'd hate to know I just lost my first friend." he meowed quietly, resting his own head on his paws. He felt he could trust her, that she really didn't mind his scars or what he looked like. "But what happened back there? It doesn't seem like you to burst in another cat's face like that. I know I don't really know you all too well, but I'm sure about this."

[leirah.]

Skypaw turned and looked at him, her eyes were almost closed as she looked at him sadly. " Well I--- Well I know that cat." Skypaw admitted miserably. Skypaw could remember her mother told them right before the fire." My young kits, my darling kits, I apologize for never telling you, but I feel it's necessary. I must save the rest of the clan I will not come with you, follow your aunt." Skypaw remembered it clearly, almost as if it happened, just yesterday. Skypaw remembered the tortoiseshell pelt as her mother referred to that cat as her aunt, she remembered telling her mother. " That's not our aunt." " I should've told you, but this cat is my sister. I once was from Rainclan I fell in love, the cat I fell in love with was your father. I joined this clan so you guys wouldn't find out, I didn't want you to face the fact. Just trust me please."

[SukarettoYanagi]

Loudpaw looked at her, but didn't seem unfazed by this. A lot of the cats were scattered after and during the fire, so it wouldn't surprise him if she did know the cat. "Who is she?" he asked her, voice calm. He'd placed his tail on her shoulder, almost in a calming manner.