Sunclan~The clan of the streams and islands.~Semi-lit.~OPEN!

[Raiyacat]

Name: Thistlepaw
Gender: Tom
Rank: apprentice
Age (in moons, 6-13): 7 and 1/2 moons
Clan: (Be sure it corresponds to where you are putting it. I encourage you to put cats in every clan.) Sunclan
Mother: unknown
Father: unknown
Other Kin(alive, and their relations, if another clan specify which.): Pebblepaw; Sunclan
StarClan Kin(If you want a special life description put that here too) : unknown
Looks (description and picture): Dark brown tabby with yellow eyes; http://iceclanagain.webs.com/STICKPELT.jpg
Mentor (required): Twigsnap?
Personality: quiet, hostile towards other clans, friendly towards clan mates
History: doesn't remember
Other (warrior name, etc.): Thistlestorm


Name: Pebblepaw
Gender: she-cat
Rank: apprentice
Age (in moons, 6-13): 7 and 1/2 moons
Clan: (Be sure it corresponds to where you are putting it. I encourage you to put cats in every clan.) Sunclan
Mother: unknown
Father: unknown
Other Kin(alive, and their relations, if another clan specify which.): Thistlepaw; Sunclan
StarClan Kin(If you want a special life description put that here too) : unknown
Looks (description and picture): Sandy colored with faint brown tabby stripes. Green/gray eyes; http://images.wikia.com/warriorcatsrpg/ ... flower.jpg
Mentor (required): Brighteyes?
Personality: shy, friendly, smart, and sneaky.
History: doesn't remember
Other (warrior name, etc.): Pebblestream

[zippyzoo77]

((Alright, I've got next to nothing for Wren, just one little thing. Sparknose does have parents and siblings listed, you can check on the Kin post, about 1/3 of the way down. Also, Sparknose's mate is Starflight. Once you've added that in he will be accepted, but the other two look great as they are. If you'd like I can add Tulipblossom as a sibling of Sparknose, but everyone that was already a part of his family will still be a part of his family.

@ghost (Mind if I shorten it?), You still need to make more edits, and remember that there is a four line minimum for in character posts here, so if you aren't able to do that you will be getting strikes for it. I am willing to accept you, if you make the necessary adjustments to your form though. But they will still need to be done before that can happen.

@Lunar (Mind if I shorten it?), Things are looking alright with your form, but I will need a bit more in order for it to be accepted. And your characters must have a history, even if they don't remember it. I would also appricate it if you would make a warrior, since without warriors we can't have apprentices. Please remove the things in (these) as well. I will need to know their parents, or at least their parent's status (dead, rouges, kittypets, clan members, etc.) and their names. You don't have to play them though, just so that I can put them on the appropriate place in the lists.))

[hotaru.]

Yes I don't mind. I am truely sorry if I am a little confused at this moment. May I ask
what you mean at the four line minimum for in character posts?

[zippyzoo77]

((Well, when you look at the posts on a computer screen, you see a certain number of lines of text. For example the last post you did has two. The last post I did has 12. This paragraph has 4. It's really a measure of length, I think ther average line has around twenty words, but that can vary based on what the words are. Example: "it" takes up less space than "hippopotamus" does. So a line of all "it"s would have far more words than an average line, and a line of all "hippopotamus"s would have far fewer.

As I know, you are new here, so I see how you could be confused. It also seems like you might not be on a computer- since all of your lines are being cut about an inch shorter than the full space it takes up if you've got a large enough screen to fit the whole width of the site. But I don't know, just a guess. That doesn't matter. I'm actually glad you asked, because it's better to ask and know than to just be confused. Sorry if my explanation makes no sense. Sometimes they do that.))

[careless reality]

[[ - Alright I do believe that I have finished with all the editing ^-^ - ]]

[zippyzoo77]

((Looks great, Sparknose is accepted now. ))

[careless reality]

[[ - Awesome, well PM when this is gonna get started. xD - ]]

[Raiyacat]

((this is a pretty strict role play... In most roll plays history's are optional because most people don't want to write them. I don't think I'll be joining this RP, sorry))

[zippyzoo77]

((Alright. But as with most semi-lit and higher roleplays, the history is not optional because if you aren't going to put something into your character's past then how am I supposed to know that you will put something into your character's post.))

[zippyzoo77]

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