Cake, Lies, and Other Sweets ( A JBD RP )

[Shiverice]

OOC: It's not a park with benches and stuff. It's just a valley with a lake...
Fizz
I dove back under and bit the crocodile's nose. I watched as it came for me, biting my tail. I screamed in pain.

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[broker]

OOC: It's not a park with benches and stuff. It's just a valley with a lake...

OOC: All I'm saying is that a crocodile isn't that commonly found in a Public Park Lake with people coming in often to walk around, picnics, etc. The beast would have already been reported and taken out of the lake if it were to be living in that water. If it were somehow from the zoo, escaped, and was living in the lake for a couple of hours, it would make more sense at least in my book. And with that, it's possible for animal control to get involved and save Starburst. Because let me say, he doesn't have a chance. With the croc already caused damage and with his lungs bursting, he would be dead in merely seconds. This isn't in anyway meant to cause offense to you, I'm just trying not to get confused. o3o;

[SecretsLive]

| They aren't in a public lake. It's in the woods. His lungs didn't burst. He just needs air. |

Starburst
As I was let free I weakly thrashed through the water for my life. I lunged towards the crocodile, shoving my claws into int's soft underbelly. I clamped my uber jaws down on it's soft throat and threw it to the ground. I grabbed Fizz's scruff and threw her to the surface. I leapt out of the water, along with the small female. I clawed onto the grass and scrambled to my feet.

[broker]

OOC: How did you guys switch from being in a park, in the woods? Sorry for all the questions I just need to get this straight in my head. Alright then alright.. Starburst and Fizz start off by the pond, walk down a connecting stream to the lake. The pond is in the park as said in the earlier replies, so is the lake located off of the park deeper into the forest?

[Shiverice]

OOC: Yes, that works ^^ Also, humans haven't discovered the 'park' yet.
Fizz
As I hit the surface, I gasped for air. I crawled on to the land and laid on a rock.

[broker]

OOC: Yes, that works ^^ Also, humans haven't discovered the 'park' yet.
Fizz
As I hit the surface, I gasped for air. I crawled on to the land and laid on a rock.

OOC: Whew ':D Good. As shown in the early posts indeed humans know of this park already.

[Shiverice]

OOC: Oh, sorry XD

[broker]

OOC: Haha.. no problem. ^^ Sorry for all the inconvenience. Now I must sit here and read what happens next. o3o

[SecretsLive]

Starburst
I fall onto my stomach, gasping for air, bloody gashes all over me.

[Shiverice]

Fizz
"Starburst, are you alright?" I ask frantically.