SunClan's Story [New Thread]

[TheCalicoTabby]

Eaglestar's eyes shot to the bushes as Duskpaw burst through. She opened her mouth to warn him, but he was already stalking towards Grinner. She stepped forwards, concerned, but paused as he looked back. A clear message; to stay away. Eaglestar, a little reluctant, nodded, signaling to the cats around her to wait. She watched tensely as Grinner spoke, her eyes narrowed. She couldn't help but let out a low hiss at the rogue's words, her claws digging into the dirt. She glared at the rogue, her gaze turning to worry as she looked towards Duskpaw. Her eyes widened as his voice echoed in her head--and everyone else's, she realized as she saw the expressions of those around her. Before she could react, the small apprentice attacked. "Duskpaw!" she called with concern, quickly shifting into a fighting crouch. The leader hesitated, not wanting to risk hurting Duskpaw in the fight.

[Vespur]

[[ Just posted a entire load of text, and gone. So ticked.
I will be posting something small now due to it. Give me a few.]]

[Vespur]

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Duskpaw lifted his claw to try to land a strike onto Grinner as his eyes turned slightly glassy as he stared down at his dad with a mix of uncontrolled rage, anger, and hurt. Yet, he was too slow. The claw attack he moved down towards Grinner's face was met by another black paw, and the one left went straight into his wounds right side beginning. It burned when the claws dug into the skin, and it turned red by the sudden pain that flashed into his gaze as his dad only grinned slightly. He bit his tounge to stop a scream of pain, but a few tears fell from his already glassy eyes as Grinner pulled in forward so he could whisper into his right ear. "You weak my son. I wish you had a better heart, and weren't such an easy push-over. Your mother gave you that, and I wish I killed her sooner," he spoke with a light glow of his eyes, as he pushed him off with a back paw that sent in a bit airborne till his front claws met the ground to stop him only a few feet away. It only took seconds, but he yelled out in rage to all the mind-contected cats before launching his body towards the standing up Grinner to let his claws cut off a large bit of his left ear at his next attack. This time Grinner growled. In anger of his hurting ear, his dad threw back a claw swipe to land to against his neck in a slash and with a shove of his paw pushed him down onto the ground where his eyes closed un in his own blackness. The last he heard was Grinner thudding paws on the ground till he let the darkness take over from the next oncoming of pain in his side.

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Afterwards:
Grinner was hurting in pain as he let his front paws rest on his son;'s belly where he tackled him. He never felt so much pain by his son, and to him he was quite shocked he would do such a thing to his own father yet was quite proud in his own way. He knew in seconds the clan surrounding the fight would be on him like a pack of dogs, and he quickly made up and excuse as soon as a second passed. He lifted his head to let his eyes rest on Eaglestar's eyes as he poke he next few words he hoped would keep him from begin killed on the spot. "If anyone comes closer, I will kill Duskpaw," he warned with his eyes glancing to everyone who watched the fight. he won't mind killing his still alive son, but would if he could live another day.


[Raccoonstrike({.zσкєтι.})[] Tom [] Mood: Rage and Pain then Darkness [] Location: Outside Camp a Bit[] Crushing on two Cats~ Viperpaw and Wolfpaw]

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Stormkit

Stormkit nodded at the hearing of his words, but still somewhat confused to what he might be telling her since she was not in a clan for a while of her life. Her eyes followed his as she glanced over to the nursery where the other kits played, and for a moment she wished she didn't ask him to stay with her since it seemed he wanted to go play with the other kits that fought playfully with their mothers. She looked over with longing at the thought of having a mother. It seemed like a nice idea to ask one to adopt her, but she was too nervous to ask since they seemed to be busy with other kits that needed them. Of course, she could always wish she knew. Hearing Otterkit, her gaze went to him as he moved away to head over to the medicine den and peeked inside with his voice sounding against its dirt walls. She didn't want to say anything as she glanced over to Otterkit in slight nervousness.

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[No Mentor[] She-cat [] Mood: Nervous [] Location: Camp[] Single]

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[zoketi.]

Raccoonstrike watched the fight with a tense poise, his eyes focused on the two cats whirling about in the grass. He was shocked by the taunts that rang through the air, and sickened by the fact that this mangy Grinner would try to hurt his son. The multicolored warrior still hesitated, unwanting to interfere yet fearing each blow directed at his apprentice. Was he a bad mentor, for not helping? But Eaglestar and Viperpaw and Frostwing and Shadowpaw had not moved except for subtle movements of shock and concern, and there seemed to be something holding them all back. Raccoonstrike's tail lashed and he jolted up as Duskpaw was struck down by the rogue grey tom. A hiss escaped the jaws of the dark brown and black tom, and his claws tore into the ground. But he kept himself still, for Duskpaw's sake. It was a trap. Furious and helpless, he glanced towards the rest of his clanmates nearby.

[~NatureSword~]

Songpaw looked at her mentor, but didn't say a word. She moved her eyes from Spiritblaze to the sky, just as the creature(vulture) was about to attack.

redfern looked at his apprentice "no I have not. what happened?" He asked

"Well..." She started,"Before we were attacked, Songpaw was most-likely one of the most bravest cat in our family, She toke after our father, like me. But half and moon after our father died, we were attacked by a monstar. we ran and ran, till we were safe, atlest we thought we were. When it came back, we were splited apart. I was with my brother, Dawn, and Songpaw was with our mother. After me and Dawn were at a safe spot for sure in a tree, I told him that I'd be back. I left the tree hole and saw that Songpaw and our mother were still being attacked. Mother made it up a tree, but when she looked down, Songpaw was as still as she could be. Mother didn't know why, but I did. The monstar was too fast for her, and it could of killed her. She now has two scars under her right eye and she is now nearly blind. She's been afrad to battle, and if something spokes her, she's as still as passible." She finished with a deep breath and followed her mentor.

[Velvetmemory]

{{Oh Calico, is the fox thing ok, I mean, are you ok with it? Sorry I forgot to ask.... }}

Redpaw bit her lip and then turned her head towards wher she was pretty sure Pineclaw was. "Well, I-I just wanted to h-hunt but then I smelled fox." She stammered and lowered her head nervously and waited for punishment. "I'm Redpaw by the way." She added, dragging her paw in the dirt.

{{Sorry for shortie}}

[opti-mism]

Crookedtail.
With Emberflight.
Hunting!

Crookedtail nodded,"Well, some of us don't end up with the best of mentors. Even though he was strict, he taught me everything I know. I hope he survived the fire." He sighed, poking her tail with one paw. " I'm sorry to hear that." He pinned his ears in sympathy. He smiled, trying to ease the mood of the conversation. "Well, it looks like we're fetching some more prey, then!" He meowed, jumping with the excitement of an apprentice on their first outing. "Where to?" He asked, flicking his tail.

(Bumping this up for golden to see. It's six pages back. )[/quote]

Emberflight stood, and flashed Crookedtail a smile. "I hope he did too. Survive, I mean. And it's alright. We've all lost family, friends, and even those we didn't know we would miss until they were gone. All we can do is hope." Her eyes brightened, and she gave her pelt a light shake to dethatch the leaves clinging to her tail fur. "Anywhere you choose, take your pick! Maybe wherever the wind takes us! To the moon! The stars!" She rambled in a louder tone, a clear bit of sarcasm to her voice and a twinkle in her eyes.

{I apologize for the short-ish post. I have a headache and can't think. -.- }

[TheCalicoTabby]

He lifted his head to let his eyes rest on Eaglestar's eyes as he poke he next few words he hoped would keep him from begin killed on the spot. "If anyone comes closer, I will kill Duskpaw," he warned with his eyes glancing to everyone who watched the fight. he won't mind killing his still alive son, but would if he could live another day.

Eaglestar's eyes narrowed, quickly judging the distance between herself, Duskpaw, and Grinner. She could run for the injured apprentice, but...she wasn't entirely sure Grinner wouldn't get there first. And she couldn't risk the apprentice's life. She stayed where she was, though her mind raced through possibilities. "What do you want?" growled Eaglestar. "Why are you doing this?" It was mainly a ploy, to buy time, maybe distract the cat. But part of her honestly wanted answers. What would make a cat turn on his own son like that? ...No time to think of that now. You have Racoonstrike, Pebblerun, Lightpaw, Viperpaw. He's outnumbered, badly. If we can get Duskpaw out of there, he doesn't have a chance. But he knows that. It won't be easy. If someone could sneak around behind him, attack and keep him occupied...but how would I communicate it, and how would someone slip away without him noticing?

{{Oh Calico, is the fox thing ok, I mean, are you ok with it? Sorry I forgot to ask.... }}

Redpaw bit her lip and then turned her head towards wher she was pretty sure Pineclaw was. "Well, I-I just wanted to h-hunt but then I smelled fox." She stammered and lowered her head nervously and waited for punishment. "I'm Redpaw by the way." She added, dragging her paw in the dirt.

{{Sorry for shortie}}

Pineclaw's eyes widened. His apprentice was blind? Was this some kind of joke? "What were you thinking, going out there alone?" he growled instead.

Foxstride smirked at the two felines, as they jumped at her sudden presence. Foxstride walked over and brushed her paw over the trinkets, eyeing the gold ring. "I can get you some Blackberry leaves, Burnet, Daisy leaves, Dandelions, Honey, Ragwort leaves, Thyme, and even Ragweed," Foxstride grinned, she knew where all these were, it would be a snap. "Now, since Ragweed is such a valuable herb I was thinking the pretty ring on a string, but for everything else a couple feathers would do." Foxstride nodded to herself and grinned at the bi-colored cat.

"Hmmm..." purred Naomi, considering the deal. The feathers she wouldn't mind letting go of, but the ring and the string...ragweed was useful. She did a lot of travelling, and it was excellent for strength. She nodded, making her decision. "I'd be happy to trade the feathers I have here for some honey and thyme." she began. "As for the ragweed... You can have the ring and string for it---on one condition. You show me where it grows." She smiled, looking over at the rogue. "What do you say?

[Chameleon]

~ * W O O L Y * ~
Wooly pawed at the silvery bell on her collar. Normally, sound would have escaped it, but her's didn't. It remained silent, no matter how many times or how hard she pawed at it. There was no sound at all the came from it. "My collar doesn't make any noise. The bell broke ages ago, when I was a kitten." she meowed, suddenly with no signs of hostility. She seemed to be her usual calm, happy self, despite the Clancats around her. "And you're not half Clan if you have the heart and spirit for it. Blood doesn't matter, but what's inside." Wooly reasoned further.

Mintbreeze

Mintbreeze stared intently at the collar. Didn't it bother her? Wasn't it choking her? Mintbreeze felt relieved she didn't have to wear one of those things. "The collar doesn't matter to me. And, honestly, arguing doesn't matter either. Well, I suppose I'm just going to go now, as it is pretty much useless to take you to our leader." Mintbreeze shrugged and flicked her tail. "Unless, you want to join us." Her ice-blue eyes gleamed and she licked her paw, drawing it over her ear slowly.

[Paper-Thorn]

Boulderstride and Reedwhisker stood next to Pineclaw staring down at the apprentice curious as well.