SunClan's Story [New Thread]

[Joyfeather16]

Cherryleaf's pelt was bristled and she felt devastated, her first day on the job and her apprentice was hurt and unconscious. "We have to get her to Shiverwhisker and Appleleaf." She whimpered.


Tigerclaw scratched at his ear with a grunt of frustration, he felt as if he may have a tick behind it and he was getting rather annoyed.

[opti-mism]

Crookedtail.
With Emberflight.
Hunting!

Crookedtail watched intently as graceful Emberflight finally was on the ground beside him. " You climb well." He commented, smiling politely. He laid his prey down softly and covered it with soft dirt from the ground. "I used to climb trees as a younger apprentice, but my mentor was strict and did not allow me to after I became a warrior. I was only allowed to climb trees if I was hunting for birds or squirrels.." He sighed, looking over at her. A patch of sunlight came through the branches and lit up the ginger she-cat's fur, making it gleam and sparkle. " Your fur looks like fire." He commented, washing his paw and dabbing his forward with it. " Shall we hunt for a while longer, or head back to camp with our treasures?" He asked, curling his tail around his paws.

Emberflight drew her paw down to rest beside it's pair, before lifting her gaze to meet his. "That's horrible. My mentor, Twigfleck, always told me to embrace my abilities, no matter what anyone else thought. You see, he had only had sight in one eye, but was an amazing swimmer, despite being in Flameclan. He died before the fire though, of greencough." His comment made her blush slightly, although it didn't show much under her bright pelt. In response to his question, she answered with a smile. "It's your choice. I could go either way. But, I feel like if we go back to camp, we'll just lay around the rest of the day." she joked, leaving it up to the black and white tom in front of her.

[lvxe]

((Sorry guys, I am really busy surprisingly; so can I take a week off then I promise I will be more active))

[AlphaWolf10]

Cherryleaf's pelt was bristled and she felt devastated, her first day on the job and her apprentice was hurt and unconscious. "We have to get her to Shiverwhisker and Appleleaf." She whimpered.


Tigerclaw scratched at his ear with a grunt of frustration, he felt as if he may have a tick behind it and he was getting rather annoyed.

Birchheart nodded "here I'll taker her and we'll both go then come back for the hawk later"he said and picked the apprentice up again and ran for the medicine cats den
Stonekit walked away from the kill pile and saw tigerclaw he crouched low and snuck up to him and pounced on him landing atop of the big warrior "haha and stonekit wins!" He said with a smile

[TheCalicoTabby]

Shadowpaw huffs in disappointment, but he supposed that Eaglestar was right. A warrior would be so much more help than himself. But what if he chased after me? Agh, too many questions! It'll never happen anyways. The apprentice kept low in the grass, his pelt brushing against the ground.

Eaglestar crept closer, being sure to stay upwind, until she could see Demon and Viperpaw through the grass. She stopped, holding her tail out in front of her apprentice to signal that he should do the same. Her own sandy pelt blended in well with the grass, but she soon realized Shadowpaw's black fur would stand out like a beacon in the sea of gold. Careful not to make a sound, she moved to stand between him and the others, hoping to hide him. Satisfied that they wouldn't be detected, she watched Viperpaw and the rogue carefully. They were talking, though she couldn't quite hear the words. She didn't scent any blood; nobody had been injured yet.

"Now," continued Naomi, not noticing Foxstride standing in the grass behind her. "Where did I put it? Ah, here!" she said triumphantly, brushing some grass out of the way. Behind it there was a small crevice in the rock, which she reached into to pull out a piece of tattered white fabric. She unfolded the fabric carefully, standing aside to reveal her collection. It included several feathers of various colours, a bright red leaf, though it was already beginning to crumble, a few coins, a key, a silver chain, ("I haven't found anything to put on that yet." she commented.) a gold ring held on a black string, a purple, shining earring, some colourful stones from a riverbed and, finally, a half-finished bracelet of mismatched beads and trinkets. "See anything you like?" asked Naomi, placing her newest finds--the collar and the candy wrapper--down with the rest.

[Joyfeather16]

Cherryleaf's eyes where filled with worry as she followed closely at his side, nudging her little apprentice softly, her eyes full of anguish.


Tigerclaw bounced with soft surprise before chuckling as he gently shook Stonekit off, "Is that so?" He challenged playfully.

[leirah.]

( Was I accepted? c:)

[AlphaWolf10]

Stonekit pushed both his tiny paws on tigerclaw "yea" he challenged with a smirk
Then nuzzled the big Tom

Birchheart ran even faster they were now in camp, he headed straight for the medicine cat den and once they were inside he set the apprentice down softly and licked her ear

[TheCalicoTabby]

( Was I accepted? c:)

{You're going to have to choose an original clan, unless you'd like me to choose for you. FlameClan, RainClan, or StoneClan.
The only other thing you might want to change are the names--Skyepaw would just be spelled Skypaw, since warrior's names are made up of real words. Orionkit...I don't think cats have the same constellations as humans, but I guess I can let that one slide if you're really set on that name for him.
Other than that it looks good. I'll add them up as soon as you change those things.}

[leirah.]

( Sorry didnt mean to add the e x3 Well you can choose Orionkit :3)