SunClan's Story [New Thread]

[AlphaWolf10]

Holliclaw ran as fast as she could she knew the kits were coming and soon...she ran to where she heard all of the cats and she yowled in pain as she made it through the tall grasd and ran into the camp "Help!!! Urrrg help someone please!!" She fell to her side and yowled in pain louder this time "i think my kits are coming!!!"

[Sable.]

((What do you mean can't be the leader? i didn't say anything about being a leader))

(his name is still pantherstar. All the other clan leader but Eaglestar died. He needs just a normal warrior name)

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"Coming!" Appleleaf jumped up to find a queen, about to kit running into the camp crouchign down almost with pain.

[TheCalicoTabby]

((What do you mean can't be the leader? i didn't say anything about being a leader))

{He's named Pantherstar. Only leaders can have names ending in 'star. Change that, and it should be fine.
Edit; nevermind, looks like Apple beat me to it. x3
Anyways, I think I'm headed to bed now. I'll be back tomorrow.}

[AlphaWolf10]

"Hello im holliclaw im from rainclan my mate he died in the fire and i got traped in a cave in our old territory..grrrrr i can explain the rest later but im having kits now i need help!!" She spat trying to keel regular breathing patterns

[xXxWolfLoverxXx]

~PanterPaw~
He took graceful strides walking through the meadow grass. His grey and black markings started to blend in with the grass. He walked on a little path he had been traveling for 3 weeks.

[Sable.]

"Come." Appleleaf half walked half dragged the queen into the medicine cat den, laying her in a mossy nest that was her own but she would make another. "Now just breathe. It'll be over before you know it Hollyclaw." Appleleaf mewed grabbing some herbs. "Eat these, they'll help." She said feeding Hollyclaw the herbs.

[TheCalicoTabby]

~PanterPaw~
He took graceful strides walking through the meadow grass. His grey and black markings started to blend in with the grass. He walked on a little path he had been traveling for 3 weeks.

{Paw? Is he an apprentice now? If so, you'll need to change his age. 3 years would be a young warrior.
Also, why is he travelling? The clan has stopped now, they're resting. They've been travelling, slowly, for three months. Did he get left behind?}

[Sable.]

~PanterPaw~
He took graceful strides walking through the meadow grass. His grey and black markings started to blend in with the grass. He walked on a little path he had been traveling for 3 weeks.

{Paw? Is he an apprentice now? If so, you'll need to change his age. 3 years would be a young warrior.
Also, why is he travelling? The clan has stopped now, they're resting. They've been travelling, slowly, for three months. Did he get left behind?}

(-is so confused-)

[xXxWolfLoverxXx]

((*facepalm* gesshh.... fine his name is PantherSong))

[TheCalicoTabby]

~PanterPaw~
He took graceful strides walking through the meadow grass. His grey and black markings started to blend in with the grass. He walked on a little path he had been traveling for 3 weeks.

{Paw? Is he an apprentice now? If so, you'll need to change his age. 3 years would be a young warrior.
Also, why is he travelling? The clan has stopped now, they're resting. They've been travelling, slowly, for three months. Did he get left behind?}

(-is so confused-)

{Confused by me, or WolfLover? Sorry it it's me. It's past 2 in the morning, I may not be making much sense.
EDIT: And alright, that works. I'll add him to the list.}