7 Days 7 Deeds || Semi-Literate || Accepting

[iGator]

( I have typed up Vitani's history, but i will be honest with you- what i wrote for her personality and pelt description is what i was able to write. I think if I make it as long as you's like, i'll be babbling about things that aren't necessary to be mentioned and adding detail to things that have been already described, and before you know it it'll be like the lord of the rings books all over again- taking up 7 unnecessary pages to describe a forest. XD I mean, in no way am i trying to be confrontational. I am only speaking what is true- I personally don't think i should add to a story that has already been told. But if it is really required then i will try without making it sound like an amateur wrote it. Lol, but i can't make any promises- like i said, i already tried to make it long as i could. )

[.mischief managed.]

((Tell Me about it. I can't write about something i'm not interested in. It Doesn't work that way. You can't tell an artist what to paint. You don't tell a writer how to write. I hate it. English is my least favorite subject. I like Science the best
And Alright. I'll wait for you to edit! Super exited (:

New members, yay! )

[D e s t i n y D.]

(Ya, sorry, I'll write more.)
Peeking out from under the tree, Dament decided he would slip out of camp and hunt. Just so Movie, Wotai Kai, or one of the hunters didn't grab him by the ears painfully and call him Useless again. One may have though that being taunted for so long would have made him no longer so responsive to it, but Dament still remembered the old days, when he was barely 2 years and already Beta, and when everyone liked him. When he almost got a mate, who perished in the storm. When he had something to live for. But I guess I do have something to live for, now that I'm in the Black Dawn, Dament thought as he squeezed through the brush that separated the camp from the forest. "Hey, Ghost! Where are you going!" a voice called harshly.
(Volunteers?)

May I please ask you to not use Wotai (Kai) like that? He.. isn't mean. Thankyou!

[D e s t i n y D.]

Ｗｏｔａｉ

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Dᴇʟɪʟᴀ

Finaly, after her skin was near to raw, she had tethed away all the flower seeds,cackleburs, and other forest seeds out of her pelt. She pranced around camp, taking car of the deeds of the elders, and such. She went by her den and laid in the summer sun, her pelt warming to the touch of the golden light.She thought about the factor of science,and gravity, and how the Sun kept Earth in a orbit to where we weren't flying out into space. It was truelly amazing, she thought. She wished to have been named Eclipse, Lunar, or something like that.. She really liked Moon. But, she also liked her name. She wonderd what it was like to be a bird, flying under the stars at night, and over the horizon in the morning.She used to get jealous, and Cira would laugh and say in a motherly tone, But, It's near to impossible. But, if anyone can, you can find a way to fly. More that anyone I can think of,I quess.And then I would reply,But not if it's impossible.And she would reply still, but our chats were locked in my mind. I hoped to see her again soon, as she was at a different pack. It was a clam decision, between me and her, which pack we were going to travel to. We wanted to see the world, travel to different places. But, we soon found it not so easy as it seems.

* Sorry for double posting!

[Destonation]

(( Guys, I am not pushing you to write useless things about your characters and other stuff, you should take note that I told you this was going to be semi-literate. And in the form it says at least five lines. I'm sorry if this offends you, but if you cannot write that much, I'm going to have to ask you to leave. Also, please don't start drama over a simple thing such as this, is adding one simple line to a personality that difficult? Although I understand that if you are not interested in something you cannot write about it, if you are going to join a roleplay I believe that you should be very interested in your character, as characters are the basis for a good roleplay. If you have well thought out, in-depth characters, the roleplay becomes much more interesting. If you have any major problems with this, please PM me instead of cluttering up the thread. Thank you. ))

[mantisboy9090]

Marock

Marock stopped eating when he make demanded his name. He could smell the pack from this male. This male was from the nearby pack. He turned his head slightly, his left golden eye glaring at him. In the past he learned to not really trust any wolf. Marock studied the male some more, taking in for what he sees. This male seemed to have settled down a bit according to his tone of voice. He looked away from the male again. "Marock" he finally said, breaking the silence. He didn't want to tell this stranger his name. But he already knew a lot abou this male just by his smell and body build. Even his voice screamed out who he was to him. Just another pack member working with other wolves. He went back to thinking what he wanted. He wanted a pack, but somehow that thought has been starting to fade from his thoughts. He just stayed quiet as he continued to eat his rabbit. (( don't know if that's 5 lines or not cause I'm typing on my iPod. If its not, then I'm sorry cause I have WB))

[growl]

May I please ask you to not use Wotai (Kai) like that? He.. isn't mean. Thankyou!

(I'm sorry, I just wanted an example of someone with a high rank. Please don't take it personally, but I'm not going to edit because Dament is just assuming that's what Wotai would do . Don't be offended )

Dament hurtled forward, slipping with ease through a small gap in the undergrowth. He heard yelling and someone trying to shove themselves through the gap he had used, and he involuntary smirked. His mind was proudly aware of the rule; Omegas were not allowed out of camp unless given permission. Skirting the brambles, Dament skidded to a stop. He was by the streams. Padding towards the clear green water, he touched it with a paw. Brrr! Cold! He had an idea. Scooching back, the brute jumped all-out into the water, than regretted it the moment his pale gray fur touched it. What if someone had heard the splashing? He swam quickly towards shore.

Rudy stood there, thinking. Marock? Hmm....Should I ask him more questions?... Deciding against it, the brute shuffled to the side, where he could get a better view of the stranger. It was quite obvious that he wouldn't budge, but anyhow Rudy said what he had been trained to say; "Loner Marock, leave instantly or come with me to meet the alpha of the pack. This is no home for stray wolves." He stood there, kneading his paws impatiently for several moments. This was the first time he had used those words other than during training, and he was nervous about what the stranger would do, since he had no possible way of getting back-up unless someone just happened to stumble upon them. Which was highly unlikely.

[rose;]

[quote="Pichiechu"]

Ɣ u l c a n

Vulcan returned her grin, “Alright.”He finally felt satisfied, knowing she wasn't keeping her worries to herself. As soon as she said 'go!' he pushed off with his hind legs, sending himself barreling forward. His paws moved him forward seemingly with a mind of their own. Intent on keeping his footing he placed his steps nimbly, avoiding the larger obstacles when possible. He looked taken back when Willow sped past him. He knew she was fast, but wasn't expecting her to be this fast. Ignoring this he increased his own speed. Though he was still a distance behind her he was slowly gaining ground on the speeding fae.

Claws kicking up the forest floor he dodged and swerved avoiding the foliage in his path; from time to time he creating his own path. His rusty gaze glinted as he followed the silver she-wolf as she left the wooded area, instead moving to the rocky terrain beside the river. He smirked, “I'll try!” He called to her in response to her playful taunting.

Willow laughed, but couldn't keep running so fast for much longer. She was good at sprints, not long distance. She yelped as she almost slipped on a slippery rock, loosing her footing and half fell half slid into the shallow water. She kept her footing and just kept running, water splashing up from her feet. She kept glancing back as Vulcan kept getting closer, and slowed down, panting, her tongue lolling out.
At a large log that was fallen across the river, Willow collapsed in the shallow water, trying to cool off. She laid out on her side, lapping at the water. "I beat," she said, grinning widely. When he got nearer, she didn't bother getting up yet, she was enjoying the coolness of the water running around her fur. Her fur was slicked against her side, making her look skinny and small.

((Allaick is still open))

[D e s t i n y D.]

May I please ask you to not use Wotai (Kai) like that? He.. isn't mean. Thankyou!

(I'm sorry, I just wanted an example of someone with a high rank. Please don't take it personally, but I'm not going to edit because Dament is just assuming that's what Wotai would do . Don't be offended )

In that context, it is perfectly fine. Wotai seems mean, but he is actually nice.He never hurts others

[mantisboy9090]

Marock just looked at him as he finished his food. "One, I'm not in your territory. Two, why should I come and see your alpha?" he asked. Marock didn't mean to be a threat, but he was in defense mode. He felt slightly threatened.

(( sorry. I just have extreme WB))