Sunclan~The clan of the streams and islands.~Semi-lit.~OPEN!

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[hotaru.]

Uhh.... Should I show my writing, too?
I do warriorcatsrpg.com, and ... I did a lot of posts. Should I send the link to you?

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((Just an example will do. I don't have time to go through a whole site.))

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[hotaru.]

Okay. Thank you! Here is an example; please take notice that I am not a professional writer, I am just a starter.

Moonleaf padded around in her den, twitching her ears. It was leaf bare, and she noticed that her herb supply was low. The pool in her den shimmered with light. The water was moving every time she heard footsteps. She sighed. The stock of coltsfoot was very low, in fact, everything was the same.

[careless reality]

Name :

" The name is Tulipblossom. "

Gender :

" I am obviously a she-cat. "

Rank :

" Warrior of Sunclan. "

Age :

" 31 moons old. "

Clan :

" I am a proud Sunclan warrior. "

Mother :

" Her name was Lemonspice. "

Father :

" My father was Tallreed, but he wasn't my mother's mate. "

Other Kin :

" The only kin that I have left are my siblings and their kits. "

StarClan Kin :

" I believe my mother Lemonspice is in Starclan now, I don't think she became a stupid kitty pet. "

Mate :

" No one. "

Kits :

" None. "

Personality :

If it were not their mother being the same cat there would be no way to see Tulipblossom and her brother's kinship. Tulipblossom is a tough she-cat with a gentle heart and soft voice. She has seen many moons and understand a lot of the ways of a warrior but she is still insecure and always doubting her teaching of her apprentice Hawkpaw which she suspects in the reason Eveningsatr gave the young cat to her to teach - to raise her self-esteem. And in some ways it has, she is not the nervous and shy she-cat she had been as an apprentice, she is now capable of holding a conversion with the senior warriors with out feeling as if she does not belong among them as a warrior.

History :

Tulipblossom was raised as a clancat in Sunclan under the protective eyes of her queen mother Lemonspice. When Tulipblossom and her brothers apprenticeship came into view her mother became distant from her kits who she had showered their whole life with love. At night the she-cat would slip away from their nest and return in the morning with a minuscule amount of prey as an excuse for her absence. The one day a moon after Tulipblossom's apprentice ceremony the sibling's mother simply did not return from her trip and the clan assumed she had takenup the pampered life of a kitty pet. With these whispers spread around the clan Tulipblossom and Sparknose stole themselves from the clan and distanced themselves from them allowing only a select few close to them.

Looks :

The first thing that everyone notices about the tabby pleated she-cat would be the bright robin egg blue orbs that are her luminous eyes. Her narrow white blazed muzzle is tipped its a pale pink nose. The dark tabby marking that fold around her shoulders like a blanket around a two leg is separated by the white blaze that claims the soft dense fur of her neck and stomach.

Apprentice :

" My apprentice Hawkpaw. "

Other :

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Name :

" I am called Sparknose. "

Gender :

" Clearly I am a tom, and clearly you are blind. "

Rank :

" Warrior for the moment. "

Age :

" 31 moons. "

Clan :

" Sunclan warrior. "

Mother :

" Lemonspice. "

Father :

" Tallreed. "

Other Kin :

" My sisters Tulipblossom, Flowertail and Brighteyes. "

StarClan Kin :

" My mother Sundapple. "

Mate :

" Starflight. "

Kits :

" Goldenkit, Blurkit and Mothkit are mine. "

Personality :

Sparknose is quite blunt and uses as few words as he can but this does not restrain him from being the hyperactive tom that he is if he does not gather himself and put his energy to good use such as hunting - though he is terrible at the activity. Though his hunting needs quite a bit of improvement, Sparknose is an excellent warrior, capable of putting up quite a fight. Sparknose is quick witted in situations where is requires action quickly. But the pressure that comes with this makes the young tom sharp tounuged and will snap at anything that near him with unexpectedness harshness that holds him from being able to become deputy.

History :

( Just read Tulipblossom's history )

Looks :

Sparknose has a peculiar solid black pelt that is assumed to have been inherited from his father. But the deep sea green eyes of his are definitely the eyes of his mother Lemonspice who had blue-green eyes the color of the foam creastedwaves of the sea.

Apprentice :

" I don't have an apprentice. "

Other :

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Name :

" My name is Goldenkit! What's yours? "

Gender :

" Do I look like a she-cat? I didn't think so. "

Rank :

" I am a kit right now, but one day I will be a warrior! "

Age :

" I am five moons old. "

Clan :

" I am a Sunclan cat! I wouldn't want to be anything else! "

Mother :

" My momma's name is Starflight. She's the best mother you can have. Aren't you jealous? "

Father :

" Oh, Sparknose is my dad. He doesn't visit me often but I know he loves me. He has to.. "

Other Kin :

" Oh! I have a brother named Blurkit and a sister named Mothkit. And bunches of Aunts and Uncles. "

StarClan Kin :

" None that I know of, I'm sure my great, great, great grand parents are in starclan but I don't know there names. "

Looks :

Goldenkit is on the slighter side in size. He weighs about as much as a chubby robin and is about as tall as a water logged fern after a night of no stop rain. But his eyes are as bright as the open sky on a cloudless day though they have been seen dark as the waves of the sea when the young cat has become a furious creature not to messed with.

Personality :

On a typical day, Goldenkit is quite carefree and can be describe as slightly lazy even. But even though he is normally calm and scerne like a beach scene, the kit inherited one trait from his father. And that was the hyperactiveness that tends to strike the cat at the most random of times. In these moments his temper is as easy to spark as a fire on a scorching day in greenleaf.

Other :

Goldenkit wants his warrior name to be Goldenstripes solely cause he has stripes.

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[hotaru.]

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