The First Night ((horse RP NEEDS NEW PPL!!!))

[AgenderMurdock]

((can I have a recap from page 11? sorry I havnt been on! I have a sudden burt of writing ideas!))

[Hunter-jumper-1997]

((haha cutie ur soo funny))

[~Wolf Chick~]

((Am I posting long enough? I just wanna make sure, I'll improve if you want))

Spirit:
Spirit looked deeper into Dare's golden-amber eyes. They were so beautiful when the light shone on them. The young stallion calmly swayed his tail as the soft, relaxing breeze blew through his fur. Dare was the most beautiful horse he had ever seen and he hoped she wasn't part of Whispers herd. "So, are you in Whisper's herd?" he asked, his cheeks turning a pinkish colour.

Rain:
The young mare stepped closer towards the handsome stallion. Rain could see his brownish cheeks turning a blush pink colour but was rapidly turning a deep shade of red. "Naruto, are you ok?" she asked, she smiled sweetly, swaying her tail from side to side.

[yuki,]

"What! yeah...of course I am." He stuttered.
Naruto tried to look for something to talk about so he would stop blushing but he couldn't find anything.
"Its getting cold out here..."

[Rɛ∂∂]

((Am I posting long enough? I just wanna make sure, I'll improve if you want))

Spirit:
Spirit looked deeper into Dare's golden-amber eyes. They were so beautiful when the light shone on them. The young stallion calmly swayed his tail as the soft, relaxing breeze blew through his fur. Dare was the most beautiful horse he had ever seen and he hoped she wasn't part of Whispers herd. "So, are you in Whisper's herd?" he asked, his cheeks turning a pinkish colour.

Rain:
The young mare stepped closer towards the handsome stallion. Rain could see his brownish cheeks turning a blush pink colour but was rapidly turning a deep shade of red. "Naruto, are you ok?" she asked, she smiled sweetly, swaying her tail from side to side.

((Yes. Keep it like that or better.))

"What! yeah...of course I am." He stuttered.
Naruto tried to look for something to talk about so he would stop blushing but he couldn't find anything.
"Its getting cold out here..."

Have you not been listening?!!??! I have already told you NOT to type a line, hit enter and do that to make the three line minimum. Keep this up and i'm throwing you out.

[yuki,]

(I'm really sorry! I always write like this!)

[Rɛ∂∂]

((Type a paragraph with at least 3 sentences. It's not that hard.))

[AgenderMurdock]

Willow stood in a field she was left in waiting for Whisper((again im not quite sure what is going on, I guess I'll read back though)) Her Forelock blew in her face and she flicked it to the side and began to run around. She jumped over a few logs and stopped. She whinned to Whisper and flicked her heat scent around with her tail. She began to think about what her foal would look like. "definatly strong, and a handsome colt,or beautiful if it's a filly." she smiled and took a drink from a small stream she walked too while thinking to her self.

[~Wolf Chick~]

Rain:
Rain gazed over Naruto, her tail swaying from side to side. She let out a small shiver as the frosty, winter-like breeze blew through her fur. "You're right, it's g-getting really cold." she stuttered, moving closer to the young stallion as she tried to keep warm. "Aren't you cold?" she asked the tall stallion standing opposite her. Their pelts almost touching.

[Rɛ∂∂]

Whisper lifted his head and whinnied back to Willow from the main field. Atop his small hiss he watched all the stallions and the lonners, and in the distance the horse he could only presume was Goddess. His watchful orbs swept over the land in search of any lone mares that he could take in. His hopes was that Cali would stay with him and his two mares, but another hope he had was that he could claim Godess. She was know throughout these lands as unclaimable because she was unable to be charmed and unable to be caught. But he had known Goddess for a while and hoped she'd be willing to join him.
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Goddess's coat shone brightly in the morning rays. The seductive arabian mare practicly floated on the ground as she walked, her long tail trailing behind her on the ground, her main cascading over her withers. Her long forlock covered one eye and her soft feathers swayed in the light breeze made by her every step. She was in heat, but did't need to do much to let the stallions know that. A heavenly sight she was, as she drifted across the open pasture. Though she didn't need to announce her self she did anyways. Her lips parted and a sound as heavenly as her looks escaped through them and spread through the field, drawing the attension to herself.