Role Play School Novice Thread (Kitten, Raven, Alphie)

[kitten;]

Thunk.

A dazed Snowy Owl very, very slowly got up from the dusty ground, and shook herself, starting with her head, then shaking her wings, and then finally whipping her tail around until she was cleaned off enough. She clicked her beak, and assessed the damage. Although a few deep bruises were forming, she could still move without killing herself. Good.
Wait-Chime? Where was Chime?
"C-Chime?" Max called out cautiously, careful not to yell too loudly. She heard a thump, a groan, and then a feeble voice said somewhere above her, "Max."
"Chime!" Max ran off the ground, spread out her wings, and took a very wobbly flight to her friend's voice.
"Oh, my....Are you okay?" She whispered, coming upon her friend's body.
Chime looked up feebly, and blinked. "Are you dead too?" She croaked, and coughed up blood.
Max grimaced, shook her head, and leaned down next to her friend. "Nope. And we have to get out of here. The Henchmen, they're coming. Hurry up. We've got to leave, and I mean now. Chime?"
She prodded her friends with her talon, and Chime opened her eyes, wincing. "I dunno, Maxi. I-I just wanna go home, to Alaska, with my owners-"
"No! Not now. Come on, Chime, get up. Hurry, please." She positioned herself on the side of the cat, and then, groaning and complaining, Chime the silver tabby stood up.
"Good. Come on, now, girl. You and I can do this."
She led Chime to the cliff, and then whispered, "Do you want me to try to carry you or will you jump?"
Chime groaned. "I'm dead, I'm sure. You would never carry my fat butt."
Max sighed impatiently. "Yes, but this is a life-or-death situation."
"Okay, fine. I'll jump." Chime opened her eyes a sliver, took a few cautious steps forward, and jumped.
Max growled. "Oh, now I have to save your fat butt too!" She took a small running start, and took off at the edge of the cliff. Max followed Chime down in the path she had taken, and found her sprawled in a patch of heather. She touched down next to her friend's head, and tapped her head impatiently with her beak.
"Maxi, I dunno 'bout this. What are we going to do now?"
Max's shoulder's sagged. She looked very seriously to the sunrise for dramatic effect, and said confidently, "We escape."
Oh gods, now I have to lead a hurt and maybe even crippled friend into the unknown. Crap. And get this, now I have to lead-without a plan whatsoever. I don't even know where we are, where we'll go, and what we'll do. I just hope those Henchmen won't find us while I-
Sleep. Max flopped down to Chime, drained emotionally and physically, and was snoring within seconds.

[skeletor]

He'd done it again, by god. Ace had utterly got in over his head. But hey, it was on purpose this time... Did that count for anything? Grimacing, he slowly staggered forward. The pain of the jump was to intense, he was lucky to have survived it. His aching limbs grinnded to an abrupt halt, his ears flicking with the slightest fraction of anxiousness. Surely whatever had been chasing him had not caught up to him already?! He had made such a risk taking leap of a cliff, only to be killed anyway? But, to his relief, there was not any excitement right now... Just the gentle ebb of the forest, the sounds of birds whisping around. Sighing, he was content.
Ace didn't like excessive noise or drama... This now serene setting was perfect for him, as he continued to listen intently to the gentle sounds.
Ace shook his head, this was not the place for him. If he was ever truly to escape then he would have to get as far away from this place as possible. There was only one way to go...Forward.

[OCeanic Vista]

((Bump.))

[shibe]

((Oh gosh, I am so sorry! O.O))

First off, it's lovely to see how you all took the 'jumping off the cliff' aspect into your posts. I love that about them. And your grammar/punctuation is almost perfect! *clap clap*
As for the basic descriptions of where you landed, they were 110% also! You are all quite advanced in that part of your posting. The main idea is to get your point across to the reader of where you are, and what it looks like, which you obviously had no trouble doing. :3

The only thing I would suggest for next time is to run a spell check through your post. I mean, you guys did awesome at spelling, but it never hurts to check for mistakes. <3

Now onto the next part, meeting a fellow RPer, and creating some dialouge! Let's pump it up!

[OCeanic Vista]

Monika gathered up as much of her courage as she could, but not before having one last look around where she was. She silently debated going into the forest.

"Do I go in? Maybe get mauled by bears? But bears don't scare me that much...until they're two feet ahead of me, I suppose. Or do I stay here? Do I wait for someone else to find me, therefore saving my life? Now what? I'm stuck!" she whimpered, unlike her. After a few more minutes had passed, she shook herself off and took a few steps back, checking to see if there was anyone near this place now.

"Hello? Is anyone there?"

[kitten;]

((It's okay! ^^ ))

"Hello? Is anyone there?"

Through the dark hazy waters of unconsciousness, Max could faintly hear a voice. She dimly thought that she had to go and wake up Chime, to get her out of here and into someplace safe. Max struggled against the dark water, and broke out of sleep, gasping in the cool night air. She could feel the bruises where she had hit the ground the worst. The owl slowly got up to her feet and checked under her feathers to look at them.
Crap. There were purple and blue bruises everywhere. She looked at the sleeping form beside her. Max almost threw up when she saw a pool of blood around her friend's body.
Quickly, Max's instincts set in, she blocked out the sight and smell of blood, and she shook Chime violently.
"Chime? Chime?" She said hysterically.
Eventually, Chime groaned. “No....” She muttered, and turned over in her unhealthy sleep, snoring.
Max blinked, and bit her tongue when she saw blood gushing out of Chime's mouth, and then a lip, almost bitten in half.
Oh thank god, it wasn’t serious, but how hadn't she seen that before? Anyway, Chime could most likely live if she was cared for soon enough.
Max stopped worrying about the cat for a second, and turned to face the direction from which she had heard the voice. “Um, hello? Please, can you help me?” She called out hesitantly, not sure whether she wanted to meet this creature or not-it could be the Leader or someone. And then they could hurt both of them any way they wanted. Max wouldn't go without Chime.
Max gulped and turned back to Chime, her only friend. Oh gosh, she had to be bleeding out. There was a pool of blood soaked into the heather that she landed on.
Max called out again, “Hello? I need your help! My friend is dying!”
Max closed her eyes for a second, and breathed deeply, in the air that smelled of blood and fear. She imagined herself in a place where she was free with Chime, where there was nobody after them and they could stay in one place for as long as they wanted, where the sun shone as something that could make them happy, and not fear that they would be seen, where other animals wouldn’t be a threat.
Max sighed contentedly, and opened her eyes. She stared toward the horizon, and gulped. There couldn't be anything worse than that Leader. And she would have to face it....whether that was it or not.

[OCeanic Vista]

((Minibump, this forum gets a lot of visitors. :3))

[kitten;]

((Erm, poke? Poke, poke? Anyone there?))

[OCeanic Vista]

((Yeah...Shiba? Raven?))

[shibe]

I'm really sorry about this thread! We need Raven to post...But she hasn't come back in a while. Hmm, I'll see what I can do and ask GreenStreet.