Hey guys
so
Originally this post was easily the longest on here and it was super detailed.
But when I went to post chickensmoothie made me relog in.
When I did all the stuff was deleted.
It is now 12:30am.
I dont care about trying to make it as good as it was. Im just getting the basic plot across.
I want it to be as good as the original. But. Oh well.
I spent 2 hours for nothing.
So, sorry if its not as good as it was. The concept is good. The original was REALLY STUNNINGLY GOOD! And really long. But hey! Heres this! Enjoy! xD
*update*
Its 3:55am. I'm finally done. And its way shorter than it was.
Sorry.
Whats happening? Whats happening.Who's there?! Zeph asked the fog surrounding him.
Who's there. Answered a voice, bored.
What are you? Zeph questioned.
What are you. Again responded the bored voice.
Where is everyone? Zeph pressed on.
Where is everyone. The Voice repeated.
Zeph immediately spun around, looking for where the voice may be coming from.
He found it.
Just behind the fog, there was a silhouette. Standing- Staring. At him.
Zeph couldn't see any eyes, or anything on it for that matter. But he knew it was staring at him.
Zeph looked down at the ground.
His shadow was gone.
Stop!Stop.W-what is this?! Zeph spat.
W-what is this. The voice steadily echoed.
your headyour headmy headmy headMeWeUsWhere is everyone. The Shadow pressed on.
Where is everyone? Zeph repeated.
What are you. The Shadow questioned.
What are you? Again responded Zeph
Who's there. The Shadow asked the fog surrounding him.
Who's there!? Answered a bored Zeph.
Whats happening. Whats happening? Where is everyone? Zeph repeated.
Zeph shook his head.
We immediately turned on our heels on ran- as fast and as far as he could.
It was no use. Zeph could hear the shadow immediately behind us. Echoing his Pace- repeating every breath, and every gasp in that sickening- murderously apathetic tone.
Run His whole body told him
Run...
Zeph stopped. So did the shadow.
We turned back to look at The Shadow.
What are you?! What are you.The shadow wasn't repeating him anymore. I spoke with him.
Why are you doing this. Why are you doing this?!The shadow spoke just before Zeph.
Wait.Wait.Whats that noise.Whats that noise?How had Zeph not heard that before?
It was like... Like...
A deep hum.
Where was it coming from?
Zeph strained his ears listening for where the sound emanated from.
N-No.N-No?!That deep electrical hum was coming from The Shadow
Zeph turned to run again, noticing that as he moved- the shadow mirrored him. but it was too late.
The hum turned into a earsplitting thrum.
The Shadow surged at us.
It appeared to be made out of a solid vibrating black smoke.
N-No! Stop! Zeph shouted at the shadow.
<> <> <> The noise stopped.
- - -Darkness.
Zeph was in pure darkness- No. It wasn't darkness.
It was
void.
There was no noise.
There was no sight.
There was no smell.
There was no feeling.
Zeph couldn't feel any air, yet he could breathe, and see his body.
Zeph was floating- No. Suspended in this voice.
He tried turning himself like he would in water. He managed to rotate himself.
He wished he didnt.
...
Far, far in front of Zeph, yet big enough to seem massive from where he was, there it was.
The Black Sun.
The one from his dreams.
He knew what it was. He's done his research.
He would normally call this evil.
But it wasn't.
It wasn't good, or bad.
It was null.
But for him- It definitely wasn't good.
Just looking at it, Zeph could feel shivers down his spine- and he felt just... weird. Abnormal.
He could hear something now. Whispers. It was unclear what they were saying- but they were definately voices. Lots of them. Coming from all around him.
He felt compelled to look under his sleeve- so he did.
There on his wrist was the mark, but not the burn mark like he expected.

He looked back up to the Black Sun.
He felt something now.
What was it?
N-No!!Zeph was being drawn towards the Black Sun incredibly quickly.
NOO!He could hear what some of them were saying now.
NO! NO I WONT! I CANT! NO STOP! NOOO! NOOOOOOOOOO! He was moving so fast, his vision was blurring. He felt the speed forcing him unconcious.
The Black Sun was ginormous now.
Zeph could see nothing but the Black Sun. He was so close. He was almost in it-
He saw it so clearly now.
Life? Death? The same. A concept. They are this: Sacred Geometry. That's all this was. Thats all we all were. You. Me. Any of us. We are patterns. T
he truth has been revealed to me.
They are returningCogito, ergo sum Cogito, ergo sum Cogito, ergo sum-_=o=_- -_=o=_- -_=o=_-Zeph opened his eyes.
W-what happene-AHHH!Zeph was falling through a sky.
A real sky.
WooOOAHHH! He screamed as he fell.
He could feel the wind whipping his cloak around behind him.
And his hair being tossed all over his face.
The wind was making his eyes water.
...
CRASH!He landed on a barrel, breaking it on impact.
Oww... He groaned, rubbing the back of his head.
He stood up and looked around.
He was on a large bridge, surrounded by a fog, and murky, still, water.
Zeph could hear a voice.
-TS ME!! GUZORE!!!!Guzore?
Zeph decided to follow where the voice came from.
He was about to run that way until
wait!He looked down at the ground below him.
His shadow was were it should be. Attached to him.
Zeph smirked. Although still incredibly disturbed by the dream, which he couldnt completely remember still.
He took off running down the bridges- towards where he heard Guzores voice.
It shouldnt be hard to find him... considering it was a bridge... rails.
Hey Guzore! Over here! Zeph shouted through the fog, which was nowhere near as dense as the fog from his dr
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