Keep Your Head In The Clouds ~ Art & Poems for All! ~CLOSED~

[Graysen]

Alright, I'll get right onto both your orders. ^^

Blue, does it's length matter to you? Just so I know. ^^ *must add to poem form*

[Kickin' up dirt]

thank you

[Graysen]

Hey, no problem. ^^ I'm just so glad you guys ordered. I had a lot you guys had to read through, and it always means a lot to any artist/author/ect when anyone likes their work enough to request something. ^-^

[Kickin' up dirt]

sorry for spamming I didn't know what to put lol

[Graysen]

It's understandable, no worries. ^^

Breathless~
Another breath, twenty three,
a beautiful sight, and in it,
just me, to harness the beauty,
and keep it close, another breath,
twenty four, or twenty five
at the most? But now I've lost count,
but not the sight, oh no,
it's still here beside me, singing it's notes
of silent beauty that had stunned me,
breathless. The counting doesn't matter
any more, to me,
it's this sight, that I've seen,
my heart sparked and ready.
Ready to know that I'm ready
for more, more of life's sights,
that will stun me breathless,
that will keep me afloat
in any dark bays, away from the shores,
of those dark days.
Yes, I'm ready for more.


I hope this isn't still too long. ^^"

[Kickin' up dirt]

thank you!I think I like this one better than the other

[Graysen]

Oh, good! I'm very happy that you're content with this one! ^^ Thanks so much for ordering! =D

[Kickin' up dirt]

your welcome and thank you too!

[Noctyrn]

Alright, I'll get right onto both your orders. ^^

Blue, does it's length matter to you? Just so I know. ^^ *must add to poem form*

I'd like it to be short, If possible. Thanks! I'm going to put in in my siggy when you're done!

[Graysen]

Alright, awesome! ^^
I'll have it done in a short while. =)