Ħαρριℓʏ Иɛʌɛя Δғтɛя (Happily Never After)

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Ħαρριℓʏ Иɛʌɛя Δғтɛя (Happily Never After)

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue Dec 27, 2011 6:40 pm

HOLA PEOPLES! It is me again, the awesome JF! I am posting a new STORY! So YAY! ..... Ya. I'm happy. ANYWAYS, you are probably looking at this because you are bored and just wanted something to click on, or you are a reader of my TIAJNAD series, or you are one of my friends, or you just clicked on the story because it looked interesting. I'm right with one of those, aren't I? I am? YES! I AM MAGICAL! .... I think I'm too hyper. Anyways, without further to do, the Happily Never After story! :)









First things, this is no "Prince And The Pauper" story, nor is it a "Fairy Tale". It is not a normal bedtime story, nor is it a "Lesson Teaching" story. You must remember that. So now, read on and see the story of Happily Never After.

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Long ago, in a kingdom far away, lived a young girl, who's name was Lea. She was a servant. The queen had found her in the woods when she was but a child, and had made her a servant. The queen's daughters, Opal and Penelope, didn't hate Lea, but they didn't love her.
Lea walked through the hallway, carrying the food for Opal and Penelope, when suddenly she ran into something and fell, the food splatting everywhere. Lea shook her head and looked around, but saw nothing. No one in site. Nothing in site. Lea looked at the spilled food and moaned.
"3, 2, 1...." Lea said to herself, and immediately after she said one, a door burst open.
The queen walked in. She looked at the spilled food, and then at Lea.
"Pick this up immediately!" the queen ordered.
Lea picked up the food, and ran to the kitchen and got more food, and then ran straight to Opal and Penelope's room, careful not to run into anything. She knocked on the door, and Opal opened it. She took the tray of food and closed the door. It was almost 11 p.m., so Lea went to the servant's quarters. She suddenly ran into something and, again, fell to the ground. She looked around, but nothing was there. She stood up and went straight to her bed, and closed her eyes and immediately fell fast asleep.

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Something was tugging at Lea's feet. Her eyes fluttered open, and she would scream, but a clawed hand went around her mouth. She was dragged out of bed and out of the servant's quarters. Lea looked at the creature and tried screaming again as she saw it's horrible features. It was red and it had horns, spikes, razer sharp teeth, and sharp pointy claws. It pulled her down the hallway and out the door of the castle. It pulled her into the forest and to a tree. It quickly tied her feet up with rope and then swung the rope around the tree. Lea was now dangling upside down from a tree. The creature tied cloth tightly around Lea's mouth so that she couldn't be heard except by the creature. The creature hissed at Lea, and again she tried to scream. But, of course, nothing came out except a muffled cry. The creature bared it's teeth and lunged at Lea.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Ħαρριℓʏ Иɛʌɛя Δғтɛя (Happily Never After)

Postby Ellies » Tue Dec 27, 2011 7:44 pm

Great start not really my type of book so i think ill hang around TIAJNAD more ^^
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Re: Ħαρριℓʏ Иɛʌɛя Δғтɛя (Happily Never After)

Postby brambletalon98 » Tue Dec 27, 2011 8:04 pm

Oh.. wow. Such a quick start! ^^ :3. I guess I'll be hanging round here too!
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Re: Ħαρριℓʏ Иɛʌɛя Δғтɛя (Happily Never After)

Postby ZebraButt » Tue Dec 27, 2011 8:06 pm

I wanna read more!
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Re: Ħαρριℓʏ Иɛʌɛя Δғтɛя (Happily Never After)

Postby Sadies » Wed Dec 28, 2011 12:37 am

Awsome :D its nice to see an story thats not a romance :)
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Re: Ħαρριℓʏ Иɛʌɛя Δғтɛя (Happily Never After)

Postby kimmy1479 » Wed Dec 28, 2011 3:50 am

I like it! ^.^ Keep on writing JF!
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Re: Ħαρριℓʏ Иɛʌɛя Δғтɛя (Happily Never After)

Postby Nonexsitent » Wed Dec 28, 2011 6:20 am

thanks for pming me this I'm hooked ^.^ please write more soon
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Re: Ħαρριℓʏ Иɛʌɛя Δғтɛя (Happily Never After)

Postby [Braveheart] » Wed Dec 28, 2011 6:50 am

Nice. I an hooked
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Re: Ħαρριℓʏ Иɛʌɛя Δғтɛя (Happily Never After)

Postby Stiles » Wed Dec 28, 2011 8:52 am

[Ohhh! JF! This is really cool. I write books of my own too.]
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Re: Ħαρριℓʏ Иɛʌɛя Δғтɛя (Happily Never After)

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Dec 28, 2011 12:43 pm

Ellies wrote:Great start not really my type of book so i think ill hang around TIAJNAD more ^^

OKay with me! Thanks for givin' it a chance! :)
brambletalon98 wrote:Oh.. wow. Such a quick start! ^^ :3. I guess I'll be hanging round here too!

Ya, most of my books (except TIAJNAD) have a quick beginning, so that I can get the reader hooked onto the story perhaps.
Drew McIntyre #1 fan wrote:I wanna read more!

Okay, I'll write more later.
Wolf_Therian_Sadies wrote:Awsome :D its nice to see an story thats not a romance :)

Ya, although most my stories have some romance in it, I was thinking I should make some without romance.... although I may add some to a very minor charcter, such as the step-sisters.
kimmy1479 wrote:I like it! ^.^ Keep on writing JF!

I shall later.
Insainity was here wrote:thanks for pming me this I'm hooked ^.^ please write more soon

No prob! And I will!
rainstar12 wrote:Nice. I an hooked

Why thank you! :)
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Thank you! And you do? Give me a link to one of your books, perhaps?

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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