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Arabelle's Story~No posting! PLEASE READ AND VOTE!!!

Postby MollySue » Wed Jul 27, 2011 4:25 pm

WARNING: This story may contain foul(starred out) language! If you are not thirteen or older, I advise you not to read the following story


PLOT:

The story I am about to tell you starts with a girl, no older than five. Young Arabelle lives in a time where Gladiators are worshipped. The Junoir Gladiators are young men who train for years to be in the games. When five year old Arabelle is captured in the market, no more than a young slave girl, for stealing a loaf of bread, she is sentenced to death. That is until Sir Byron sees something in the fiery tempered young girl. Byron buys the child and for ten plus years trains the child in the ways of a Gladiator. Many ridicule the young woman as she grows, but Arabelle is determined to prove herself. Can Arabelle become the great Gladiator she is destined to be? And can she fight the boy she'd known and loved years ago, when she was a mere slave?
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Re: Arabelle's Story~No posting!

Postby MollySue » Wed Jul 27, 2011 4:32 pm

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"Stop! Thief!" The voice rang through Arabelle's ears as she raced through the market place, clutching her prize. Only one thought ran through Arabelle's head.
Get out. Eat. Find a home. Never go back. At five, the firey haired child was smarter then most her age. Born into slavery, Arabelle had no family, no last name... her only companion was the dirty Siberian husky racing beside her. Arabelle was a beautiful girl, but clothed in rags with dirt streaking her pale face and her red hair, she looked no more than she was: A peasant.
"Come here, you!" A hand grabbed her tiny arm and a man yanked her towards him.
"Felix, help!" Arabelle shrieked, clawing at the hand holding her. The dog turned, snarling, and lunged at the man who fell back with a yell. Arabelle was released, but men began to close around the black cloaked girl.
Felix hung close to Arabelle, snarling and swinging his head in a circle, teeth snapping threateningly.
"Get the dog!" The first man commanded. Two men lunged and grabbed Felix, holding him down and ignoring Arabelle's shrieks. The market place was silent other then their struggle as shoppers froze to watch in shock. One man yanked Arabelle's hood back. Desperate to hide her identity, she dropped her prize and clung to the hood. The man snorted and knocked her hands away, pulling the hood back to reveal her delicate, dirt streaked face and the wide, forest green eyes.
"Arabelle." The man said. "You are being charged with theft as well as running from your duty as a slave. What have you to say for yourself?" He asked.
Deny everything! A voice at the back of her head screamed. But Arabelle ignored the voice.
This girl, all five years and forty-five pounds of her, lifted her chin and faced the man squarely.
"I do not deny it." She said, green eyes defiant.
"I should slap you for your defiance, child!" The man roared.
"Do it! Should i care? I am sentenced to death, regardless." Arabelle growled.
"NO! Arabelle, no!" The voice came from a boy with shaggy blonde hair streaked with darker hues and crystal blue eyes that bore into hers when she turned.
Fabion... my dear, dear Fabion. I'm so sorry. Arabelle thought as a man stepped between them. Even at five, Arabelle had had every intention of marrying Fabion when they grew up... Fabion had promised himself to her and she to him. They were bound for life. A life that is about to end before it has started.
"You little wench! I will very much enjoy disposing of you!" The man snarled. She felt the cool metal of a dagger at her throat when a voice cut through the air, rippling with authority.
"Stop this at once!" The voice hissed. The crowd parted to reveal an elderly man moving forward. The hand that held the dagger to Arabelle's throat stilled.
"L-Lord Byron, sir?" He said warily. Arabelle stared up in awe. Lord Byron? Arabelle knew the name well. Fabion had often stayed in her room late at night and told stories of him. Lord Byron was the son of the founder of the famous Junoir Gladiator games! A elderly man hobbled forward. His face was lined and wrinkled and reminded Arabelle of leather. He had a tan, weathered face, with a scar slashing through one eye but it was the face of a grandfather nonetheless. He looked at Arabelle with twinkling, forest green eyes and... winked. Arabelle gapped at him. This man... this legend, was winking at her.
"Lord Andrews, release the girl please." Lord Byron said.
"But, My Lord, she has been sentnced to death!" The man protested.
"She is a Slave, correct? Who owns her?" Lord Byron asked, looking around. A middle aged man stepped forward.
"I do, My Lord. She is the daughter of two of my old slaves. They died when she was a mere infant and I raised her myself." The man said, running a hand nervously through his black hair.
"Well than... I'll pay Fifty for her." Lord Byron said.
"What?" Sir Andrew threw his head back, roaring with laughter. "With all do respect, My Lord, the girl is barely worth five let alone fifty."
"Do you question my judgement, Sir Andrew? This girl has potential." Lord Byron's eyes hardened with a dangerous edge that had the laughing silenced.
"N-no, of course not My Lord... I'd be glad to sell the little Wench." Sir Andrew stammered.
"Good. Then release the girl." Lord Byron reached into his robe and pulled out an envelope, pulling out five gold peices. "This is worth fifty then. Give her to me." He commanded. When Lord Byron dropped the coins into Sir Andrew's outstretched hand, the man thrust Arabelle towards him.
"Give me Felix!" Arabelle turned and whistled. "Come on, boy."
"No! The dog will face your sentence instead!" Sir Andrew hissed.
"NO!" Arabelle lunged forward but a hand lashed out and smacked her, sending her crashing to the ground. Pain lashed through the girl but she rose and moved forward again, no fear in her gaze.
"Enough! Give the girl her dog. The animal belongs to her and she to me, now. Do you dare steal my property after handing it over?" Lord Byron hissed.
Sir Andrew looked about to argue, but then he nodded sharply and snapped his fingers. The two men holding Felix released him and backed off quickly. The dog rose and bounded towards Arabelle. People scrambled out of the animal's way. When Felix reached Arabelle's side, he sat and looked around protectively.
"Come Arabell. We have much work." Lord Byron turned and left. Arabelle took a deep breath, and followed the man who had saved her life. But as she left the market place, she couldn't help one thought that raced through her head. Lord Byron had saved her life... but at what cost?
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Re: Arabelle's Story~No posting!

Postby MollySue » Thu Jul 28, 2011 6:26 am

Chapter 1
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11 years later
Ba-bump. Ba-bump. Ba-bump. Arabelle was acutely aware of her heartbeat. Ba-bump, Ba-bump, Ba-bump! Adrenaline was causing it to pick up it's pace. Arabelle's gait was slow and calculated as she walked through the dark tunnel. BabumpBabumpBabump! Not fear... excitement. Eagerness. This was what she was born for. Fighting... it was in her blood. It ran through her veins. The light at the end of the tunnel grew as she approached, blindingly bright. BABUMPBABUMPBABUMP! It was now or never. Live or die. No, not literally. Killing was forbidden. But Arabelle would rather die than lose. Shame would kill her where it counted. BABUMPBABUMPBABUMPBABUMP!!!! Now! Arabelle stepped out of the tunnel, white washing over her. The deafening roar did nothing to distract Arabelle.
"Farah the Heartless versus Satar the Destroyer." The man announced. Arabelle looked to her opponent as Felix brushed against her leg. Satar was a tall, well muscled boy. He was heavier than her... though all her opponents were. The boy stared at her... and laughed.
"A girl? I am to fight a girl?" Satar laughed. He hadn't fought her yet. Satar moved forward, circling her, studying her. Arabelle didn't move an inch, her forest green eyes wide and innocent.
"This will be a peice of cake." Satar continued.
"What is your name, Gladiator? Your true name? I am Arabelle." She said, smiling at him.
"I am Peter." Satar said. Arabelle nodded, then looked up as the voice blared through the speakers once more.
"Let the Junoir Gladiators game begin!" The man yelled.
Arabelle drew her sword, a beautiful instrument with a long silver blade. It was a long sword, about as long as her arm, with a silver and ivory hilt. Embedded at the base of the hilt was a sparkling blue Sapphire.
Satar regarded Arabelle, frowning with confusion. The fiery haired girl, who had looked so sweet and innocent before, now had an undeterred confidence about her. Her grip on the hilt was firm, but it was in no way too tight or too loose. Her whole demeanor was both alert and yet loose.
Satar shrugged and moved towards Arabelle, bringing up his own sword. When he moved, a flash of brown caught Arabelle's eye. He had brought a German Shepherd to the fight. The next moment Arabelle was in motion, swinging away from the sword and striking out with her own. The sword caught Satar in the side, digging into his flesh. Arabelle saw him stumble and lunge. His dog was on her the same instant and Arabelle felt teeth close on her sword wrist. A flash of black and white charged into the German shepherd's side and the weight was removed. Felix and the dog grappled, snapping and biting though they didn't go for the kill. Arabelle pushed to her feet and lunged at her opponent, kicking low and sweeping his feet out from under him.
Arabelle touched the tip of the sword to Satar's throat and glared at him. Satar threw his weapon aside, a sign of clear defeat. A bell shattered the silence.
"And Farah the Heartless wins!" The man called over the loud speakers.
"Felix, come." Arabelle called. The red haired girl turned away but paused when Peter called to her.
"Who are you?" He asked.
Arabelle glanced back at Peter who was still on his back, eyes wide with shock. A smile curled Arabelle's lips and she tossed her hair over her shoulder. "I'm Arabelle.... and your worst nightmare." With that said, Arabelle swept out of the Arena.

"Arabelle, good job." Byron approached Arabelle as she left the tunnel leading from the main Arena. When Arabelle lifted her head, Byron was pleased to see she was relaxed and confident. When Byron had taken Arabelle under his wing so many years ago, he'd been uncertain she was the right one. But Byron was determined to show that girls could fight just as well as guys. Before Arabelle, Byron had trained a series of girls. None had shown the progress he'd wanted. But that day in the market place, Arabelle had stared death in the face with no fear. In a five year old girl, that was more than Amiable. Byron had bought her and been proud.
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Re: Arabelle's Story~No posting!

Postby MollySue » Fri Jul 29, 2011 10:18 am

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Re: Arabelle's Story~No posting! PLEASE READ AND VOTE!!!

Postby okamishiranu » Wed Oct 05, 2011 11:08 am

I don't know if I'm supposed to post in this thread or not but, This story is AWESOME!!! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D :thumbup:
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