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Never Look Back

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Jul 21, 2011 6:54 am

Hi you guys! It's JF here and I'm writing a new story that I hope you will all enjoy! Now, begin reading please!


A young girl named Layla looked out the window into the big blue sky with clouds. Why do we have to move? she thought. Layla had lived in Minnesota, but now she was moving to California. She loved all her friends in Minnesota, and she missed them terribly. She also missed her house. It was the only house she'd ever known, and now she was moving away from everything she knew. Her dad had lost work, and they couldn't pay the house anymore. So they sold it, and now they where going to go and live with their grandma, which wasn't so bad. Layla loved her grandma and granndpa, but it just wasn't the same as living in Minnesota. When they arrived and their grandma and grandpa's house, they got out of the car and went into the house.
"Hi, sweety!" their grandma said, hugging Layla. "I'll show you your room."
Their grandma guided Layla into a room. The room was turquoise, and it had colorful paintings and furniture in it.
"I hope you're comfortable here," their grandma said.
"I'll try to be comfortable," Layla said, sighing.
Her grandma left her alone and shut the door. Layla sat on the bed and unpacked her things. There in her suitcase was the gift her best friend had given her years ago. It was a diamond necklace, and Layla loved it so much. She put it around her neck, and then unpacked her other things. When she was done, it was about three o'clock. So Layla decided to go outside for a walk to get to know everybody. Layla went outside and walked around the road. Everything was just fine..... until she reached the park.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Never Look Back

Postby Hawkfire. » Thu Jul 21, 2011 7:01 am

You should maybe make people bully Layla cause she's new :) Unless you have something else in mind...
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Re: Never Look Back

Postby flufferpie » Thu Jul 21, 2011 7:05 am

I love moving stories! They're awesome. :D
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Re: Never Look Back

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Jul 21, 2011 7:22 am

Good idea Wild (it's okay if I still call you that, right?)!
Thanks Catzee!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Never Look Back

Postby Hawkfire. » Thu Jul 21, 2011 7:26 am

╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:Good idea Wild (it's okay if I still call you that, right?)!
Thanks Catzee!

Of course!
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Re: Never Look Back

Postby ezirabesu » Thu Jul 21, 2011 7:27 am

Hey that was great.
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He finally returned to the mansion,
But he was unable to laugh again.
I love Ciel.
I love Ciel's smile.

Weak in order to Love.
Strong in order to Protect.
And both in order to stay at you side.

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Re: Never Look Back

Postby ciel + sebastian » Thu Jul 21, 2011 7:29 am

Heyy!! Omg that was so good!! I love it, cant wait to read more of it. You should read mine. Its in my siggy..But anyway love the story so far!!
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Re: Never Look Back

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Jul 21, 2011 7:32 am

Why thank you! I might read your story later...

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Never Look Back

Postby Hawkfire. » Thu Jul 21, 2011 7:44 am

Will you read mine -puppy face-
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Re: Never Look Back

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Jul 21, 2011 8:00 am

Layla looked at the park. There where swings, slides, and jungle gyms.
"I might as well get excersise while I'm here," Layla said.
She went to the swings and right as she sat down the swing was pulled away from her and she fell to the ground.
"Ow!" Layla shouted.
She sat up and saw that older kids in tenth grade had pulled the swing away from her. So Layla grabbed the swing and sat down in it. She began swining. But as she was swinging forward, she didn't notice a kid infront of her, and she knocked her down. The kid was a tenth grader.
"You little idiot!" the kid shouted. "Knock me down again, and I'll knock your head off your neck!"
"S-s-sorry!" Layla stuttered.
She got off the swing and ran away. Tomorrow would be the first day of school in California for Layla.
"I hope the kid isn't in my school," Layla said, hoping school would be better then she thought.




Will you read mine -puppy face-

I have... have yo uwritten more?

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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