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• daivik • the one who will set us free •

Postby T h e M a r t i a n » Mon Feb 19, 2018 6:09 pm


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daivik

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one who has divine characteristics

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Our hero is a peasant born child, who is blessed by the three central deities of his civilization. A cruel dictator is why he sent to his people. Upon hearing about this new born child, he has him stolen away and raised as an instrument of war. Our hero becomes the very thing he was sent to purge from his world. Soon mated and a father, our hero realigns his priorities, but it comes too late. The dictator kills his beloved and almost his daughter. Will our hero finally fulfill his purpose and will he set his people free?

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• daivik • who is this savior •

Postby T h e M a r t i a n » Tue Feb 20, 2018 7:54 am

brief personality;
reserved || observant || compassionate || protective || just || courageous || protective || selfless || humble || intelligent || forgiving


in-depth analysis;


abilities;
Daivik is indeed blessed by the gods. Given their powers to be used in times of crisis, and only in these times. He has been given powers over the elementals, most profoundly over the earth and fire. He greatly resembles his culture's god of the earth, which is represented by a crocodile, who is also the creator. He was blessed most profoundly by him, Akish, and by the god of fire, represented by the dragon, named Ivaan, who is also their god of war. Thus, he is also unaturaly skilled in battle even when he was experienced. He is unbeatable when fighting for the right causes. His abilities do come with that one limitation. He must be just and righteous in his using of these abilities.


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• daivik • the cast of his story •

Postby T h e M a r t i a n » Tue Feb 20, 2018 7:58 am

relationships;

his daughter;
Eleanor is everything to him. He had managed to save her from Libra, and she is the last remaining portion of the life he once had. Reluctantly, he had let her become a knight in the kingdom's army, trusting she would be able to handle herself. She looks far more like her mother, something that is both a curse and a blessing to Daivik. He has a lasting memory of his beloved mate, Makani, which can bring up both bad and good memories.


the evil king;
Libra is a being who has existed before in other forms, but just happened to be in the form of a king this time around. Running a tyrannical regime that suppresses the rights of his citizens, he is cruel and does no stand for words spoken against him. He possesses godly powers that helped him keep his power until he gave Daivik a reason to truly remove him from power. Now banished from the kingdom, Libra has not made an appearance since.


his comrades;

Advisor;
Obsidian is someone who understands politics and how to run a country far better than Daivik does. Obsidian is a prince and a noble who Daivik befriended shortly after becoming the new King. Obsidian is a very compassionate individual and decided to help Daivik out instead of trying to make a grab at the throne himself. Now, Obsidian is one of Daivik's most trusted officials and one of those next in line should anything happen to him.

The Spirit;
Quexa is not a living being. She is a spirit who helps those soldiers that are fighting the losing battle against a prevailing evil force. Quexa appeared to Daivik in his time of need against Libra and helped him to win against Libra. Daivik owes Quexa a lot and still remains in contact with her. He has decided he might help her out from time to time in her quest to hekp the innocent soldiers and those they strive to protect.

An Old Friend;
Amarantha was a friend of his mate. He befriended her through Makani, and the two have remained friends since. He is truly grateful to have Amarantha around, as she helped to raise Eleanor in his great time of need. She also helped him through the loss of his beloved Makani. She is an advisor to him as well, though he mostly keeps her around because he still needs some advice when it comes to dealings with his daughter. A sweet and fiery viscet, he counts her a very close friend and someone he will be eternally grateful for.

The General;
Elysian is a trusted friend who he met during his time as Libra's general. Daivik knew he would need someone to man his military forces to help ensure that Libra would never return. He trusts Elysian to be a just and righteous general, truly opposite of what Daivik had been during his years as the general. He trusts Elysian will take this job seriously, as Elysian has never tested this faith of his. He is a righteous and courageous viscet who Daivik is truly grateful to have the service of.

The Guardian;
Apep is someone Daivik cannot remember how they met. He does know that it was during his time as the cruel general of Libra. Apep is forgiving and seems to be able to overlook the wrong that Daivik had done.
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• daivik • a look into his culture •

Postby T h e M a r t i a n » Tue Feb 20, 2018 4:32 pm

location;
Located near a river delta, the kingdom is flourishing. The full berth of the kingdom stretches miles upon miles of the river shore and reaches to the coast of rhe sea the river feeds into. A kingdom that depends upon the flow of the river and they are also a big mining civilization. They are capable of trading for better and hardier crops from other civilizations due to these precious metals. They are also known for their beautiful jewelry and pottery, which is sought after by other kingdoms. The capital city is known as Agnu and lies along the middle of the eastern border on the shore of the life-bearing Red river. The kingdom is known as Anakisha.

religion and beliefs;
The kingdom has a polytheistic religion, though there are three central deities. Akish is the first. This is the creator and god of the earth. Represented by the crocodile, Akish is a male figure. The next deity is Ivaan, the god of fire, war, and the ruiner. Represented by a dragon, Ivaan is also a male. The last deity is Behati, the goddess of water, peace, and the preserver. Represented by the heron, Behati is a female. Behati and Ivaan are the children of Akish and work to balance one another, which is reminiscent to the idea of yin and yang. They are quite opposite from one another, yet one cannot exist without the other. Along with these three central deities, there are plenty of minor gods and goddesses that control other phenomena or ideals.


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• daivik • the beginning •

Postby T h e M a r t i a n » Tue Feb 20, 2018 4:33 pm

It was a warm night, as it typically was this season by the river bank. A warm wind blew over the village, a fog beginning to rise from the surface of the cool surface of the river. A full moon and dull stars shone brightly above the small village of Ministria, lighting the ruins of several of the buildings ans the magnificance of the central villa.

The king's pawn lived within the villa, a massive courtyard spread out behind the mud building. Houses had been destroyed to make that blood house, the ruins of those sacrificed assembled in pathetic piles across the street from the villa. Families displaced by the action were accepted with open arms into the homes of smaller families with rooms to spare. The king had made an attempt to crush their will, but it seems to have done just the opposite.

That night was exceptionally warm, and the moon and stars seemed to shine bright than the nights before. The fog grew thicker and blanketed the village, giving an eerie feeling to those who were still awake. Fathers watching over their homes and their families would often stay awake to ensure no harm would come to their beloved brood. Lit by lamp light, they sat by crumbling walls to keep watch.

The sound of cracking pierced the night, and a mother awoke quickly at this sound. This was the night she had been waiting for. She rose, tail curled around the palely marked egg. It was an egg that never should have existed. She had been believed to be barren, unable to produce a child, yet here the hatching egg stood testament to her miraculous story. Tears slid down her beautiful face as the red eyes of her infant son first peeked through the shell.

The father soon appeared, lighting a simple lamp to further shed light upon their child. Eyes like rubies shone in the fire light. Pearly teeth, gleaming in that same light were visible protruding from his jaws, which were mishappen and flawed. A hint of concern flashed in blue and green eyes of mother and father. Had they borne a crippled son? Had they further been cursed by the gods?

However, further examination proved to unveil more confusion and concern in both parents alike. He bore markings unlike either parent. Beautiful hues of red, brown, and orange, in patterns resembling crocodile scales and the ornate pottery the artisans crafted. But, a gasp escaped mother's lips at the sight of what lay at infant's back.

Crimson wings, dark as blood were attached in two pairs upon the broad shoulders and back of their infant son. What was this creature that had hatched from that egg? Rubies stared up at the beautiful mother and stocky father who looked in utter confusion upon the winged creature. Upon unsteady legs the creature strode towards mother, beside which he curled up searching for warmth. Red eyes disappeared beneath brown lids as the creature nestled its head against its beautiful mother's side.


~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~

News traveled fast across the village that following morning. Daivik is what the creature had been deemed by their religious leader, due to his bearing Ivaan's wings, Akish's jaws, and Behati's markings. He was one of divine characteristics. However, a traitor stood among the group surrounding the blessed son. With a whisk of his tail, he was off to tell the king of this new arrival and the tales he bore. A child had been borne of gods and its intent was to tear down the king's awful regime.

Mother lay beside her blessed son, who moved lacking grace upon unnaturally unsteady legs. Perhaps it was due to the two sets of wings he bore heavily upon his back, no one knew exactly. Daivik stretched his jaws as he moved to lay beside his mother, curling into her flank. A smile graced her beautiful face. "You are destined for great things, my son. One day I hope you fulfill them. You will set our people free." She whispered softly to her son, whose ruby red eyes looked up in mild confusion. He understood little of speech yet, and was thus unlikely to know what she said. She was right, however. One day, he would set his people free.


~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~

The traitor had found his master, living with Agnu in a palace of unheard proportions. "Sir, a child has been born in the village of Ministria. A child blessed by the gods. The villagers believe he has been sent to end your reign and perhaps your life." Traitor said a little out of breath, dropping to deeply bow his head to the king of Anakisha: Libra. "Blessed by gods, you say? Explain." He hissed, the traitor lifting his head at this. "Wings, two pairs, of deepest crimson like those or ruiner Ivaan. Jaws like those of creator Akish. Blessed markings of preserver Behati. He has been sent to set his people free." Traitor said softly, ears slicked back in worry, treacherous eyes glittering concern. "Do not kill him, but bring him here. He will not set his people free." The King hissed with a sly grin. "Leave! Now!" The shout came a moment later when traitor made no move. Scurrying up and out of the palace, traitor headed off to gather the blessed son. Libra would not lose his title, not after everything he had already lost. He would ensure that this blessed creature would not rise against him, no matter the cost.

~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~

A day of celebration followed the child's hatching, which lasted well into the night. The beautiful creature was laying nestled in the hut that it's parents had built with their own paws. His beautiful mother was out dancing with his strong father, as they believed their blessed son was safe. How wrong could they be.

The smell of smoke awoke the child, its red eyes glittering in the light of the fire. Screams echoed outside the house. "My son! Daivik!" Beautiful mother cried, rushing into the burning hut. Traitor stood behind the child, the source of this fire. Snatching the blessed creature, who squealed in terror and tried in vain to reach its beautiful mother, who was frozen in her spot. With a whisk of his tail and a final loud squeal from the son, traitor and creature were gone.

Fire ravaged the run-down village of Ministria, leaving not even the villa of the town leader intact. The blessed creature was at the palace of the cruel dictator before even the final pillar of the villa had fallen victim to the fire. Still with fight left in him, the poor creature clawed at his captor growling as best he could. Traitor entered the throne room, where the dictator stood waiting. "You were not lying, were you?" Libra said in half suprise, heading down to see this odd creature. "He is perfect. He shall do anything but set these poor people free." He sneered, lifting one of the wings of the child. Libra saw an instrument of war, with which he could play like a poor pawn in his never-ending chess match.
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• daivik • the •

Postby T h e M a r t i a n » Sat Feb 24, 2018 1:48 pm

"Ryker!" The booming voice echoed through the halls. Red eyes moved towards the door of the room, which was opened by a dark-hued viscet. The teenaged viscet rose immediately, crimson wings flattening against the broad back of the male. "What is is father?" The deepening voice of the ruby eyed viscet answered smoothly.

No, Ryker was not the biological son of this King. However, Libra had brainwashed the child since the day of his birth when he was kidnapped that he was. He was crafting an instrument of suffering, a cruel general for his army. Someone he knew would think and behave just as he would.

"A revolt in a village. You are coming with me this time to help put an end to this madness." The smooth voice of the dark viscet hissed. Ryker blinked his red eyes once, shocked that Libra was actually letting him out of the castle. "We leave now." The voice came again, and Ryker gave a swift nod. "Of course, father." He answered, moving towards the door with the King.

Ryker was already the height of his father, if not then he was taller. Ryker had the makings of a massive creature, broad shoulders and muscle covering every inch of his massive body. A powerful viscet, yet also quick and clever. He was everything that Libra could have hoped for that day.

~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~

"Where is it we go, father?" Ryker asked of the king, who walked side by side. "A village named Ministria. There have been constant uprisings in this town and I think it well near time to put an end to their nonsense." Libra hissed with a hint of a smirk. The name of this village seemed oddly familiar and something about the scenery about the path they walked seemed to remind him of something he could not quite recall. Brushing it off as nothing, he walked in silence beside his father until they reached the arched entrance to the run-down village.

Ears pricked, the sounds of the villagers ceased, eyes of all shades resting upon him. "Daivik! Oh, my Daivik." A voice soon shattered the silence, a once beautiful female came from the crowd tears streaking down her cheeks. Libra's face curled in a look half of disgust and half of almost humor. He stepped away from the female, seemingly repulsed by her drawing so near. The female fell at Ryker's feet, her paws wrapping around one of his front paws. "My sweet child, you have come home." She cried softly. Ryker, uncomfortable, moved to step away from the female. "Father, who is this? Why does she call me this name?" He said to Libra, flattening his ears against his skull.

The female stopped her crying, the smile falling from her face. Her look of joy was replaced by loss and even rage. Her eyes turned on Libra. "You fiend! How dare you?" She roared in anger as she stood, advancing towards Libra. The crowd behind her knew it was an ill motion to do so, but made no mention of such a thing. Ryker stepped away from both adults, and made an attempt to make himself smaller wanting to just disappear. Covering his eyes and cowering down near the ground, he knew what was likely to come next.

He hated to see it be done, and the screaming that ensued hurt him to the core. Flattening his ears against his head, tears stinging his eyes, he laid there curled aside the crumbling wall of an old building. An eerie quiet followed and Ryker lifted his paws from his head and unfurled his massive wings from about his body. The female was gone, as he knew she would be. She was but dust now, scattered by the wind. A fiendish grin was spread across Libra's face, his eyes darkening as they turned onto the remaining villagers. A few began to flee, though most remained locked in place, crippled by fear.

"This is what treachery earns you. You dare abandon your own king, an individual placed there by the very gods himself. You dare test the might of the gods?" The words stung Ryker, and his ears remained flattened against his head. His eyes widened as Libra began to unleash his fury upon the villagers. "Father, please! Why do you do this to them?" He cried, tears stinging his eyes. What he saw was horrible. Children ran to the arms of their mothers, though they would not reach their safety. Mates ran for each other, unable to touch one another again before the wind wisked them away. Men and women alike fled in the desperate attempt at finding some miraculous escape. Dust, that was all they were now.

"I do not look kindly upon betrayal, my child. They had been warned in the past time and time again. I gave them time to change, and they tested my patience again and again. I admire their spirit, but they had deserted me. That is something I just can't have." He said, turning his eyes on Ryker.

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