[♥] in a time of my life, [for kalon #1098]

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[♥] in a time of my life, [for kalon #1098]

Postby kirbby » Mon Jul 31, 2017 7:40 am

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[yeah okay y'all can post.
for this kalon.]
[750/750 words. story complete.]
[1/2 art pieces. art incomplete.]

it was like any other day, the community was large and i was simply one person in it. i was always told that you can't make a change if you don't try. so today, i was going to try. try my hardest. and if i fail, there's always tomorrow to try again, because that's how life is. the past is yesterday and the future is tomorrow. but you always live in the present, which is today.

hi! my name's laurie, and let me tell you the tale of the time that i finally made a difference.


where all the pixels come from.
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day one.

Postby kirbby » Mon Jul 31, 2017 8:23 am

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i knew i was one of many in this community, but that could hardly ever stop me. i was young, i knew who i liked, and i was full of inspiration to run my shop. my fashion shop! i was so excited. and, half of my profit goes to those in need! all i had was a little shop between huge businesses, but that's merely for now. i really hope my business goes and gets popular. taking in a deep breath, i quickly walk in carrying my umbrella and book bag, which had all of my current materials in it. this is it, laurie, this is the time of your life. make clothes, hopefully sell them, and profit goes to those in need. don't hold back now. this is for those in need. entering the currently empty shop, my heart sinks a little. it's so.. bland. i don't.. it's not.. but then the gears in my head turn, and i know exactly what to do. i set down my cup that was full of iced coffee on the ring up counter, and do a little dance. this'll be perfect! beautiful wallpaper, ooh! a chandelier! oh, i just can't wait to get started on my shop! but.. a name. hmm.. it's perfect! laurie's lovelies.
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day nine.

Postby kirbby » Mon Jul 31, 2017 8:52 am

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finally. it's complete. laurie's lovelies. so, hi! i know it's been a while. i see you finally came back for the story! this was day nine of my success. it's perfect. laurie's lovelies. this is really happening. i wanna dance my heart out. i really do hope it gets around. i hope i hope i hope. nearly everyone i see passes it, which makes my hope go down a little. after a full day of nothing but messing around and drinking iced coffee, finally, someone comes in.
hi! my name's laurie, how can i help you? i may seem calm on the outside, but on the inside, fireworks everywhere. i'm just uh.. gonna look around. it seems nice. maybe buy something for my girlfriend. he says quietly, and i quickly nod, my curly pink hair bouncing around a bit. sorry, i'm just really excited for this! my first customer!

he's window shopping for now, looking at the dresse and skirts. i soon become a bit nervous. does he not like them? the nervousness soon really gets to me, and i step into the back through the light pink curtain, with a sign that says employees only on it. i sip a bit of my iced coffee, trying not to freak out. i look at my unfinished works and sigh a bit. it's nothing to be nervous about. hello? oh thank goodness! he's still here! i step out, seeing him holding two dresses and a box. i'd uh.. like to check out. a smile spreads across my face and i get behind the counter. that'll be.. 58.37. he hands me three twenties, saying keep the change. okay, that's thirty dollars for me, and thirty dollars for the whole reason i started this.
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the end. i made a difference.

Postby kirbby » Mon Jul 31, 2017 9:32 am

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oh, just remembering it makes me want to cry. it was the end of the day and time to close up shop. i saw a mother and child come in. the child looked so sweet, and the mother looked like she needed new clothes. they had holes, and they looked dirty and tattered. welcome.. is there anything you're looking for i ask, my eyes pooling with worry. the lady tells her child to go and find something she likes. she came up to the counter, telling me that she could only afford something for her child, but she needed new clothes for the coming winter. ma'am, laurie's lovelies is all about helping those in need. i'll buy something for you. i say, holding her hand. tears come to her eyes, and she blesses me for my kindness. though, it was all of what i taught myself. to care for those.
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drawing/main form

Postby kirbby » Mon Jul 31, 2017 10:51 am

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name: laurie
gender: female - s.o.; lesbian
what are they proud of?: having made a difference in the world.
favorite outfit: laurie's favorite outfit is a pair of includes a pair
of cute, red shoes, kneehigh socks that are white, an olive green top,
and a black skirt with lace across it. the bow she wears goes around
the collar of her olive green shirt.

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hey all!! i'm so excited for this kalon. she's very adorable and i'm really excited for whoever wins her. the contest is said to end the third, and whew, am i full of excitement. i took three hours on this drawing apparently. [the timer is probably lying, like always.]
anyway, this story was really hard to write, as i had spent three hours just trying to think of it.

i really hope i win this girl. she's just.. so.. ahhhhh!
anyway, i'll see you all again when the winner is announced the first.
[yikes.. it was supposed to end the 28th.. good thing it was extended.]

edit: i can't read.
it ends on the third.
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