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⧽⧼ - Up and Coming

Postby eltonn » Thu Mar 02, 2017 1:15 pm

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- Greetings. -
- My name is Bentley Moore. -

- I'm assuming you must be that journalist I was told that would be interviewing me today? -

- I thought so. Welcome to my office. Go ahead, make yourself comfortable while I prepare you a cup of tea. -


- And do mind the stuffed animals. -
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⧽⧼ Look out, Wall Street!

Postby eltonn » Thu Mar 02, 2017 1:15 pm

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So, Bentley, was it? Alright, what is your job?

- Excuse me while I clean my glasses, because I assume it is quite obvious what my job is. -

You don't wear glasses.

- Contacts, of course. Anyway, if you actually are that blind, I'll explain. I am the CEO of Moore Incorporated, a large business that helps small business owners run their companies. We rent out office space and have many consultants available to help those who are new to the business world. -

Oh, wow! You must be extremely generous to run such a helpful business.

- Not particularly. Next question, please. -

Let me flip to my next page. Ok, what made you want to get into big business? What was your... motivation?

- Motivation? Ah... a drive to achieve my goals. -
- I would have to say that mine was my mother. -


And why is that?

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- Next question. -


Do you have any hobbies?

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- No. -


Are you sure?

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- Yes. -


Ok. I.. my employer didn't send me a very long list. I'm sorry, this is the last question before I leave. Do you have any advice for those who want to make their way on Wallstreet?

- Don't fail. -

That's it?

- Yes. That is it. -
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⧽⧼ - Mother, Where Art Thou?

Postby eltonn » Thu Mar 02, 2017 1:16 pm

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[ don't try to stop me; nothing can stop me ]

wolf mother, where you been?
you look so worn, so thin
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wolf father, at the door,
you dont smile anymore
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⧽⧼ - Childhood

Postby eltonn » Thu Mar 02, 2017 1:18 pm

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The small brown kalon turned the stick of wax in his paws, blinking curiously at it. "Momma, what's this?" He looked up, confusion making his voice heighten. The female chuckled, crouching down to look her son in the eye. She lifted the crayon out of his paws, holding it up so he could see it.

"This, my dear Bentley, is a crayon!" She exclaimed, smiling. "Watch," she instructed, turning to the table next to them. Bentley toddled after her, his eyes wide. His mother slide out a piece of paper, tapping the tip of the crayon to it. She then dragged it across, creating a red line down it. Bentley gasped and reached out to grab the crayon.

"Imma try, momma!" He wrapped his fingers around the red crayon,
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scribbling it on the page and gasping again. "Look, look! Is red!" He squealed, clapping his paws together and proceeding to get red wax all over his pawpads. "I like crayo," he nodded, taking the paper off the table and sitting crosslegged on the ground. Bentley's mother padded a few feet to the side, tending to the pot on their small stove. She hummed quietly to herself as her son sat entranced by the single crayon and sheet of paper. A few moments later, the toddler stood up proudly, holding up the paper at arms length. Red scribbles covered the page. "Is you," he pointed to a batch of lines that in no way resembled his mother. Bentley's mom looked over her son's shoulder at the art. "An me," he pointed at the marks next to it. "And then that is dad!" He motioned at the circles that were on the far side of the page. His mother's smile faded.

"It's... very beautiful, Bentley. I'm sure your father would love it." She said hesitantly. Bentley tilted his head back to look at her, grinning with pride.

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"Can I show 'im? When he comes back?"

Bentley's mother stroked her son's head fluff. "Yes. When he comes back, you can show him. Run along and play now, Momma has to finish cooking dinner. I'm making chicken soup."

Bentley leaped in place. "Chikkesoup!" He cheered, racing off to his room with the crayon and paper.

After he had left, Bentley's mother looked out the window. Her eyes purposely shifted away from the picture frame that rested on the sill. She still didn't know how to tell her son that his father didn't care about him. She didn't know how to tell him that he shouldn't expect him to return. She didn't know how. A low sigh escaped the female as she padded back to the small pot filled with simple broth and a few cold bits of chicken. She didn't know how to explain to her son that his father was a billionaire, but they were left with nothing. Bentley's mother looked down at the sink, then exited the room.

Inside the frame on the sill was a photo of Bentley's mother next to a smug looking male. They were holding Bentley's paws as they walked, suspending their son a few inches off the ground. The river behind them was glittering in the sunlight. And the two adults were both smiling.
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⧽⧼ - The History

Postby eltonn » Thu Mar 02, 2017 1:19 pm

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Bentley is the son of a wealthy businessman and a poor laywoman. His parents were very happy together, and even more overjoyed when he came along. However, something changed. His father began to come home less and less frequently. His mother would get upset at the mention of him, and Bentley had no idea why. Later on, he found out that his parents had gotten into an argument and split up. Little Bentley didn't understand at the time, and even now doesn't exactly get why it happened. They never told him what the problem was, and he always had the nagging feeling that it had to do with him.

When his father left, he took everything. His money, his house, his car. Bentley and his mother were left with a little apartment and a small amount of cash reserve. Bentley's mother worked as a waitress in a local restaurant, but it wasn't enough to pay for the rent, food, and Bentley's education. Bentley never attended preschool or kindergarten, or even gradeschool. His mother simply could not afford it. And yes, he could have gone to a public school, but Bentley's mother didn't want her only child to be exposed to the things that go on there. She kept him close. Unfortunately, she still fell behind on rent payments, and their landowner threatened to evict them. Desperate to keep the shelter for her son, Bentley's mother began to give her food to her son. She became thin and sickly. One day, men in suits showed up at their apartment, told Bentley to pack up his stuff, and then took him away. They had ruled that those conditions were not fit for raising a child, and Bentley's mother was sent to a rehabilitation center due to the belief that she was unable to care for herself. She never left.

Of course, the court ruled that Bentley would be sent to live with his father. Bentley was quite happy about seeing his father for the first time in years, as he was now nine, but his father was quite the opposite. The male was coldhearted and in his mind, the ends justified the means. He was well known as a ruthless businessman on Wall Street. Bentley didn't mind. His father set an entire room aside just for him! The room was actually so that Bentley wouldn't bother his father while he was in meetings.

Eventually, when Bentley began to get into his teenage years, his father began to notice him again. Bentley wasn't exactly introverted, as he frequently spoke with staff and clients. His father noticed that Bentley dealt with clients quite well, and began to hint that he needed someone to take over the business when he retired. Bentley was happy to take up the job; anything to get him closer to his father. He began spending days watching his father's meetings and taking notes, and nights getting lessons from staff and his father if he was lucky. The boy learned quickly. It was as if he was born for the job. Some staff began to teach him math and reading to help him in his studies, and he enjoyed the tasks. Bentley began to write about kalons that he met in his private journal; a tradition that he continues to this day. He also picked up a few traits from his father, such as his hatred for waste. Even small wasteful things bother him, such as a kalon not finishing their cup of water, and dumping it out down the sink.

When the time came for his father to retire, Bentley, in his mid twenties, became the new CEO of Moore Incorporated. However, as time went on with him dealing with other companies, he learned that his follower personality simply wouldn't work. Bentley made himself a 'mask;' he hides his true emotions while around others, appearing short-spoken, cold, and calculating. Eventually, the traits began to sink into him, and the real Bentley's personality morphed. He still 'wears the mask,' persay, but it's been getting easier and easier for him over the years.

In those rare moments that Bentley is alone, he opens the locked drawer on his desk and takes out his set of crayons and alphabet blocks. Bentley always loved those days in his childhood when he would spend all his time drawing whatever came to his mind with that red crayon, stacking the blocks when he lost motivation. When the building shuts down for the night (and no one is working late), he stacks lines of plastic dinosaurs along his desk, making sure to arrive early the next day to clear them away. He hides this part of himself away, a close guarded secret. But yet, that childish part of him still remains.

[ you wear a mask so long, you'll forget who was beneath it ]
[ - Alan Moore ]
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⧽⧼ - It's Just Business

Postby eltonn » Thu Mar 02, 2017 1:19 pm

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"Ms. Pearsons...?" Bentley questioned, speaking slowly. His secretary nodded, causing Bentley to inwardly sigh. This was the third time this week that that specific Ms. Pearsons had attempted to scheduled a meeting with Bentley, and he had already sent her to speak to at least four of his specialists. But no, she demanded to speak with the CEO of the company. Just get it overwith, Bentley. You'll have to talk to her eventually. Bentley closed his eyes for a moment, rubbing his temples. He disliked the kalon, even though he had never met her, due to what he heard from the employees that had worked with her. Apparently, instead of complying with what they said, she just repeatedly asked to speak with him. "Fine, send her in."

A few minutes later, Bentley sat at his desk, paws folded as the female sitting across from him asked for a loan for her business. Bentley knew well enough that Ms. Pearsons' business was doing just fine how it was, and wasn't in need of aide from his company. But she insisted on talking to him anyway. "Please, Mister Moore." She pleaded. "We haven't been getting new customers recently, and it worries me."

Bentley didn't really know what to make of that. "But, according to our statistics, you're company is making profits at a fast pace, and is doing fine without our intervention." Ms. Pearsons was quiet for a moment before replying.

"Well, you see, it's just a small family bakery. You're father helped me sort myself out to start it up and begin selling merchandise, and put the ads in your company's magazine like they always do. But, it's just a bakery, and I want to expand it, Mister Moore." Ms. Pearson explained. Bentley raised an eyebrow. He had spoken with his employees that had tried to work with Ms. Pearson before, and they had made it seem like she was trying to take advantage of the company. But here, that seemed far from the truth.

"Expand... in what way?" Bentley leaned forwards, his face betraying no emotion. "Opening another shop, or selling new products? Upgrading your current building, more advertising? Please be specific, Ms. Pearsons."

The female kalon wrung her paws together, looking down at the ground before glancing nervously at Bentley. He could tell that she was worried he would reject her idea, and prepared himself to hear a bad business pitch or greedy request.

"I'd like to have the resources to either donate portions of my profits to orphanages or to have the means to give pastries to the children I see wandering the streets alone, without family."

Bentley blinked slowly. He wasn't sure he had heard her correctly, and tilted his head lightly, asking her to repeat her statement. "I want to help the children living on the streets of New York." She said again. Bentley exhaled through his nose, leaning back and readjusting his posture. He grabbed a pad of paper and a pen, scribbling down a name and a phone number.

The tall male stood, striding around his desk and pressing the paper into Ms. Pearsons' paw. "I'm so sorry that my staff didn't do this immediately; this is the number to our Service Branch. Ask for Mishki, she'll be able to help you secure what you need to begin." Bentley gave a small, sideways smile. Ms. Pearsons stood, a joyous grin cracking her muzzle into two. She took Bentley's paw, shaking it viciously.

"Thank you, thank you, thank you!" She exclaimed. "You have no idea how much this means to me!" Ms. Pearsons clapped her paws together. "Thank you, Mister Moore!" The female called, exiting the room and hustling off to the lobby so she could call the Service Branch. Bentley shook his head. If she had just listened to the kalons I sent her to in the first place, they would have given her the same information... Some kalons just had to go right to the top, I guess.
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⧽⧼ - Journal Excerpt

Postby eltonn » Thu Mar 02, 2017 1:22 pm

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          Heather - Respected Acquaintance

            I met Heather while she was taking her class on a field trip. They were learning how businesses worked, and she had requested for her students to be brought on a tour. My secretary showed them around, and after they toured the building I spoke to the students about how even if something in your life goes wrong, it can turn out ok. Well, that's what I said in my mind, at least. In reality I probably muttered something under my breathe and then introduced myself before proceeding to stand there awkwardly and wonder if I was supposed to do something. I admire how Heather handled the children; a few of them were a bit unruly but she handled it immediately without anger. And to my surprise- the students listened! She had their respect, and gained mine.


          Branden Hollis Price - Disliked Aquiantance

            I don't know him, but as I was walking to work today I noticed a brightly colored male traveling with his friends. He frontflipped onto a guiderail and walked across it before flipping again off the end. What a show off. He's lucky he didn't get hurt. Ha. Probably practices all the time just so he can look cool. I still see him sometimes while walking to work, but have never actually spoken to him. I tend to give him a wide berth; I don't feel like getting kicked in the face.


          Graham - Close Friends

            Graham and I are good friends. We think quite similarly, but our public attitudes are reversed. We are compliments of the other. I met him when I was maybe 12 or 13, and my father had let me go to the park with one of his employee's sons. Graham was at the park as well, and he began talking to me. We found out that we had similar interests, and became close as we aged.

          Dustin Train - Friend

            I came across Dustin and his family while they were on a vacation to New York. His mother came up to me and asked where the Annual Spraypainting Contest was. I had no idea, but directed her to someone who might. Before she left, she introduced her son, Dustin, to me. Dustin has a brother, Jackie, but he was busy petting an extremely overfed crow that was sitting on his shoulder. Dustin, however, came right up to me and asked why I was wearing a suit because it was very hot out. I immediately took a liking to him. Whenever his family comes to New York for the painting contest, I always make sure to visit his mother's entry.


          Parvati Picard Bianchi - Client

            About a year ago, Parvati had come to my office asking if I had ever helped start up any photography companies. Of course, I've helped thousands of kalons start their own businesses, so I was completely sure that I had. However, he had a strange request. He asked if anyone of them were in Grand Marais, Minnesota. I had never heard of the place, but it was apparently his hometown, and he was looking for a friend of his that had gone missing. Unfortunately, I haven't ever helped set up any businesses in Grand Marais, but he thanked me for my help anyway. He was quite peculiar, always fiddling with a camera that was tangled up in a long blue scarf. And he looked like a cannibal. He never once stepped in sunlight when he exited the building, and instead opened and umbrella to keep himself in the shade. I've drawn my conclusions, and never thought I would have a vampire ask me for help. Hey, first times for everything, right?


          Malone Storm - Client

            Now Malone was quite an interesting client. He's Dustin's cousin, and found out about my company through him. Malone came to inquire about starting a Soap Business in Libya. I sent him to my bodyworks specialist and he was able to start his business. However, whenever someone coughed or sneezed, his eyes widened and he quickly grabbed a small Febreeze bottle out of his pack, spraying it around him. My poor employee's office carried the smell of Febreeze for the next month. I had to move her to a new office because she has an extremely sensitive nose and couldn't concentrate. If you can't tell, Malone is the reason that my company had to put into place a rule against bringing in air fresheners unless you were staff.
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⧽⧼ - Conclusion

Postby eltonn » Sat Mar 04, 2017 1:15 pm

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