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Tryout Fourm for #800

Postby dolly » Tue Jan 24, 2017 3:39 am

This is a wip. Please judge on what is completed and the ideas of the story not completed yet. -

Freed and heading to the temple to gain power
On the way there met kals who tell him of the stories
Fights his way in to the power stone
Touches it and gains powers back
Journeys back and burns painting trapped in.

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In The Painting
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On My Way
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A New Friend
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Arrival
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Return and Revival
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The Aftermath
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About Em'
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In The Painting

Postby dolly » Tue Jan 24, 2017 3:39 am

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Ameera // Female

"Things weren't always
this way, I used to be a
free kalon until I was
trapped here. I could
run free and live a
normal life but I
wanted power and
that power cost me
freedom. Now I can
never leave this frame
and just watch
as others pass me by,
touching and staring
at my saddened
expression and out of
place colors. I wish I
could leave but I have
no ability to free
myself,the only way out
is for someone to free
me saying the words
outside the painting."



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A meera ; Hello I am Ameera. I have been
trapped in this painting for years upon years but after a while you just stop noticing the
faces looking at you or poking you. I don’t look in place but no one questions it. No one
knows the artist and no one questions it. No one knows how it got here but they don’t
question it. When you think about it they don’t think about anything in this art gallery.
You are probably wondering how I got trapped in the painting and how I am talking to
you. Well the answer is… complicated and will come in time I suppose. The funny
thing is, no one actually notices or cares I am trapped in here. Sounds pretty
depressing saying that out loud but it is true. When I lived outside I was rude and
arrogant so at least this painting has given me time to think.

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More;
“Guys look at this painting!”, called Neal motioning his friends over to see a painting of a mythical kalon looking creature. Nimue nodded acknowledging she likes it but only spent a moment looking. She was to distracted by the other amazing art to spend much time on one piece. Cora and Summer walked over to see what their son was talking about but neither really took interest in paintings not created by the kids. It was a wonderful built painting with a bland frame bringing out the colors and look to it. The thing that caught everyones eye though, was an engraved metal label. It read “This painting is one of a kind and no one knows the actual artist that created it. It is a wonder but their is no historical record of it anywhere in history.” and many took the time to read it while they looked around the gallery. The marble floor and walls complimented the colors making it seem even more astounding. It just felt so real, so life like. You could almost say their was a real kalon living in it.
“I have never seen something like it or heard.”, laughed Summer after reading the label stepping back to let others see. Everyone started a bit of a chuckle but Cora stopped them short. She tried remembering where she saw it and something just seemed to click a few moments later.
“I remember seeing this somewhere with a little message.”, replied Cora confused but intrigued about its history and her potential knowledge of it. She took out her phone and searched up what she thought it was. She tried to think of keywords to search and asked those around her for some until she found the page and began reading what it said.
“Freedom is something you desire, someone outside the barrier and no magic shall free you and that one is me”, she spoke not noticing what was going on around her, “That was a stupid sentence eh?”, she added on starting to notice what was actually going on. The other kalons in the store were being lifted off the ground and their seemed to be a strong fan blowing.
She was then lifted off the floor as well and thrown to a wall as the painting fell of the wall shattering. They all gave a shocked, fearful look at what was happening and what they had just done. Summer shot Cora a “what the heck did you just do” kind of look. Nimue took her mate, Cora’s, hand and Cora took Summers hand as the prepared themselves for what come next. They had never experienced anything like it but really who has. It was magic at its finest and this wasn’t exactly a land of magic instead of science. The closed their eyes and it seemed stopped in seconds. Everyone seemed to let their breath go and start breathing again. The whole room was silent except a few kals trying to catch their breath after the fright. To afraid to look up they stood on the floor along with all of the other customers of the art museum waiting for what just happened to reveal it’s self.
“I’m i’m free!”, yelled a female voice in front of them. She sounded like she was from across the world and had a soft, yet sad tone to her voice. She has an accent that sound like nothing they’d ever heard. Like something from a made up land perhaps.
“May I ask who you are?”, asked Summer quietly getting up helping her kids and mate up as well. Their was a pause as if everyone was thinking of their reply or getting ready if they attacked.
“I could tell you or I could show you.”, she replied more excited starting to run towards a wall. Just before she was about to hit it a fire halo appeared and a portal opened sucking everyone in the museum into another realm. Their were yells and screams of afraid kalons gripping the walls, chairs, paintings, and really anything that they thought wouldn’t blow into the portal. Nothing though could fight the strength of the flaming portal.

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The air was silent once again and the grass was damp. Everyone sat their confused on how the portal had appeared and who this strange kalon that just jumped out of a painting was. She some how had the power to control fire enough to create a portal strong enough to suck in the population of an art gallery. Everyone slowly started to stand up and look around the area. It was filled with trees, rivers, and flowers. It looked like an untamed jungle that welcomed them into it. It was nothing like these city folk had seen. The mythical kalon in front of them though, looked like she belonged so well and most likely came from around here. Her scales glistened but she just stood there taking in all of the old sights.
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On My Way

Postby dolly » Tue Jan 24, 2017 3:39 am

wip with Athena coming through the trees and Aeryn following fighting. Aeryn talks about the crystal and Ama joins the fight to break it up and starts on the trail to it with some of the group. Others go for it themselves and others just sit there.
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A New Friend

Postby dolly » Tue Jan 24, 2017 3:40 am

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Arrival

Postby dolly » Tue Jan 24, 2017 3:40 am

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Return and Revival

Postby dolly » Tue Jan 24, 2017 3:41 am

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The Aftermath

Postby dolly » Tue Jan 24, 2017 3:43 am

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About em'

Postby dolly » Tue Jan 24, 2017 3:43 am

extra 1000 words and 4 art
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Postby dolly » Tue Jan 24, 2017 10:47 am

need anotheer psot wip
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