✧✧ 100 One-Shots [Flo's Challenge]

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✧✧ 100 One-Shots [Flo's Challenge]

Postby 200765 » Tue Jan 17, 2017 2:22 pm

Hello everyone! I have decided to try floki's challenge. Each post will be based off of one of these
100 prompts and will be at least 500 words long. Feel free to read what I post, though each one-shot will
probably have many mistakes in it. I'm totally open to constructive criticism so let me know if you catch
anything wrong or anything that doesn't make sense.

*NOTE: Characters in these one-shots exist in the same world unless otherwise stated.
Some characters may even interact with each other, though each one-shot may be
read as a stand-alone shot.*


One last thing before I start writing: please disable your signature if you post here to keep this thread neat.
Thank you!


50 shots wrote:1.// "Did you steal my Poptart?" ✓ [Lisa, Chase]
2.// "We could be hero's!" ✓ [Luke, Joshua, Krista]
3.// "We should be lovers..." ✓ [Tyler, Michelle, Chase]
4.// "SNAAAAAAAAAAKE!" ✓ [Michelle, Krista, April, Josh, Luke]
5.// "What do you mean, NO?!" ✓ [Tyler, Michelle, Chase]
6.// "THIS IS JUST BUSINESS!"
7.// "Maybe, just one more slice."
8.// "You can't leave! You'll die..."
9.// "I was a fool to believe..."
10.// "It all ends, today."
11.// "You must..."
12.// "You're just a silly girl!"
13.// "The show must go on..."
14.// "Just one more day, please..."
15.// "You can't just kill people!"
16.// "Seriously, who ate my Poptart?!"
17.// "I only speak the truth."
18.// "Don't let go Jack! Wait... you already did... rats." XXXXX
19.// "I did not want this!"
20.// "What do you mean he's dead?!"
21.// "I haven't eaten in three days!"
22.// "Who am I? Not Jean Valjean..."
23.// "Did you just..."
24.// "Do. Not. Touch. That."
25.// "YOU JUST TOUCHED IT!"
26.// "I would never say that to you."
27.// "My receding hair line has been kissed..."
28.// "You have Elvis Presley eyes... I would know."
29.// "Dude, chocolates are bomb."
30.// "Could you... stay with me tonight?"
31.// "I can't loose you!"
32.// "Please... marry me."
33.// "I can't hug you..."
34.// "You call that a kiss?"
35.// "Since when did I ask for it to snow?"
36.// "I'M BATMAN" "No... no you are not."
37.// "NEVER SAY THAT WORD!"
38.// "I HAVE TB!" "No you have a cold!"
39.// "Can you not?!"
40.// "Tis only a flesh wound!"
41.// "Could you stop jumping for one minute?!'
42.// "Please repeat that, I wasn't listening."
43.// "You love me?"
44.// "Never do that again."
45.// "I dare you to lick that..."
46.// "What do you think of children?"
47.// "I like, like you."
48.// "BY GODS..."
49.// "I just wanted you..."
50.// "Damn it! I died again!"
50 more shots wrote:51.// "I'm a mess."
52.// "Hey! Little ears are around!"
53.// "Please, don't cry..."
54.// "YOU PLAGIARIZING PIG!"
55.// "Since when did Disney add this?!
56.// "It only get's worse"
57.// "Oh crap..."
58.// "Please tell me that is not what I think it is."
59.// "What did you think I was doing?"
60.// "ALL HAIL ...!"
61.// "Now why did you do that?"
62.// "You have beautiful eyes."
63.// "Let's travel the world!"
64.// "I DON'T SPEAK FRENCH!"
65.// "Whatever happened to Joel?"
66.// "No way in, no way out."
67.// ""I will have my vengeance."
68.// "Grow up!"
69.// "I found the ring!"
70.// "We should run... like now!"
71.// "Can you please shut up?" "No."
72.// "I found that cliff..."
73.// "Are you sure that is safe to eat?"
74.// "I TOLD YOU TO GOOGLE MAP IT!"
75.// "Who died and made you queen?!"
76.// "Ich Sprechen Deustch"
77.// "Now wait a second, buster."
78.// "I would kill for you."
79.// "The greatest thing, is you."
80.// "I am a literary vampire."
81.// "A stake through the heart would kill anybody..." XXXXX
82.// "Bon Jovi is my jam!"
83.// "Kiss me.. now."
84.// "I seem to have lost my contact."
85.// "TURN THE LIGHTS BACK ON!"
86.// "DON'T SHOOT!"
87.// "Oh no... he has a sword too."
88.// "Are you sure it's dead?"
89.// "Ummmmm..."
90.// "I can't write anything good."
91.// "We aren't in Hogwarts!"
92.// "Please, stay with me."
93.// "He's not breathing!"
94.// "I...love...yo-"
95.// "She's gone."
96.// "Sir, where are your pants?"
97.// "I can't even."
98.// "I believe in you."
99.// "What can I say... you're welcome."
100.// "The sea... it calls me."






































Code: Select all
Name : Age • Hair Color/Length/Style • Eye Color • Other [optional] • Like/Love

♀ Characters wrote:Lisa Thomas: 25 • Pale Blonde, Chest Length • Hazel Eyes • ??
Krista Mendel: 9 • Dark Brown, Bob Cut • Brown Eyes • Luke
Michelle Link: 28 • Brown Hair, Hip Length • Brown Eyes • ??
April Farrel: 8 • Orange, Chest Length • Green Eyes • ??
♂ Characters wrote:Chase Montgomery: 27 • Golden Blonde • Green Eyes • Michelle
Luke "Ice Master" Walker: 9 • Light Brown • Hazel Eyes • ??
Joshua "Flame Boy" Lane: 9 • Dirty Blonde • Blue Eyes • April
Tyler Icarus: 29 • Dark Brown • Brown Eyes • Tan • Michelle
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✧✧ [001] "Did you steal my Poptart?"

Postby 200765 » Tue Jan 17, 2017 3:26 pm

    BAM! BAM! BAM!

    Startled, Lisa almost dropped the plate she was washing. Who on earth is at my door at...3:04 in the morning? she wondered, glancing at the clock on the oven. Placing the soapy plate into the sink, she rinsed off her hands and dried them. She slowly walked towards the door, moving lazily as she had just woken up and eaten her breakfast.

    BAM! BAM! BAM!

    "I'm coming, I'm coming! Hold your horses!" Lisa called as she picked up her pace. Unlocking the door, she swung it open. Looking at the man in front of her, she frowned. He seemed vaguely familiar, though she couldn't recall where she had seen him before. "How can I hel–"

    "Did you steal my Poptart?"

    "Ashp, pfwp, excuse me?" Lisa spluttered.

    The man crossed his muscled arms over his chest. "You're excused. I asked, 'Did you steal my Poptart?'"

    Lisa threw her arms up in the air, sighing exasperatedly. "What on earth are you talking about?!"

    The man groaned, running his fingers through his tousled, blonde hair. "I'm looking... for my Poptart," he said slowly. "It's a rectangular pastry... in a little foil package... and–"

    "I know what a Poptart is." It irked Lisa to hear him speak in such a patronizing voice. "But why on earth are you asking me? And who are you?"

    "Oh. My apologies, ma'am, it seems like I forgot to introduce myself." A smirk appeared on the man's face, one corner of his lips tilting up higher than the other. "I am Chase. Chase Ryans. And I'm looking for my Poptart."

    "Chase Ryans, hm?" Lisa asked. “What makes you think that I have your Poptart?”

    Chase laughed sheepishly, running his fingers through his hair yet again. It seemed like a habit of his, something he would do to subconsciously express embarrassment or frustration. "Well... the Poptart wasn't mine in the first place. I had some cravings for a Poptart but couldn't find any in the house. You know, being a new neighbor and all, I don't have a lot of food in the fridge. I was kinda hoping that you'd have one that you are willing to share...?" he trailed off into a hopeful tone.

    Scoffing, Lisa shook her head. "If you think I'm going to share my strawberry Poptarts with someone like you, you're mistaken!" With that, she slammed the door shut so hard some plates in the sink rattled.

    "Hey, what do you mean 'someone like you'? I'm amazing!" Chase said from outside. He sighed, shaking his head. Then he raised his fist to the door and hit it, three times hard.

    BAM! BAM! BAM!

    Lisa groaned but ignored the slams against her door. She would have continued to ignore it but Chase increased the volume and hit even faster. "Oh my goodness, what do you want?!" she yelled, opening the door.

    Chase smiled down at Lisa, taking a few strands of her blonde hair and twirling them between his fingers. "Exactly what I wanted before. Poptart?"

    Ignoring the fluttery feelings inside her chest, Lisa pulled away from Chase and closed the door in his face again. "Go ask someone else."

    Laughing, Chase leaned against the door. "Ask who? No one else is up at three o'clock in the morning."

    "It's 3:15 now," Lisa said, voice muffled but audible through the wood.

    "Ahh, how time flies when you're doing something fun."

    "What will it take for you to go away, Chase?"

    "Why only one foil packet of Poptart, Lisa."

    "I could call the police, you know."

    "You won't. You're secretly enjoying this too."

    Lisa sighed before moving into her kitchen. She opened her cabinets, looking for the cardboard box of Poptarts. "Here they are," she murmured to herself. She walked to the door, a Poptart packet in hand. "Fine. You win." She threw open her door only for Chase to tumble inside, crashing into Lisa and pinning her to the floor.

    "Ouch. Darn, that hurt."

    "Get off me, Chase!"

    The man turned so he was facing her, hovering above her. "What's the magic word?"

    "Please get off me, you jerk."

    Chase clicked his tongue and shook his head, faking disappointment. "Now, now, Lisa. I don't think that's the right way for you to ask something of someone."

    "Okay, fine. Please get off me, Chase."

    "I will. On one condition."

    "What now?"

    "Can I have your number? Because I think you owe me more than just a Poptart now."

    "Chase!"

✧✧ And there you go! One short, unrealistic, randomly put-together one-shot! Let me know what you think of it, okay? I'd love to hear your opinions and comments. One down, 99 more to go!
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Re: ✧✧ 100 One-Shots [Flo's Challenge]

Postby Ranger of the North » Tue Jan 17, 2017 6:15 pm

Hehehe. Tbh I really enjoyed it cx
Chase's attitude is amazing, and I think Lisa handled everything pretty well, given the situation :lol: XD
I hope to see more of these two; they're great :D
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Re: ✧✧ 100 One-Shots [Flo's Challenge]

Postby 200765 » Wed Jan 18, 2017 9:31 am

@Ranger : Thank you, that makes me really happy! I do plan on using Lisa and Chase again, most definitely for prompt #16 and possibly for #21. I'll have to see what I decide on when the time comes.
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✧✧ [002] "We could be heroes!"

Postby 200765 » Wed Jan 18, 2017 3:53 pm

    "Hey, Luke! Let me play!" Joshua shouted, waving as he raced over to his best friend across the school playground. His feet pounded against the floor, causing mulch to fly from the impact.

    Luke looked up from the Superman and Spiderman action figures he was holding in his hands. Grinning, he nodded at Joshua who had now reached Luke and was panting slightly, hand outstretched for an action figure. "Okay, you can be Spiderman." Luke handed the Spiderman toy to his nine year old friend who took it and began to cackle.

    "Mwahaha! I am the amazing Spiderman, and I will defeat you, Superman! You have been my enemies for many years but today is the day I take you out once and for all." Josh struck a pose, arms up and flexed his practically non-existent muscles. (Being nine years old, he hadn't developed much muscles yet.)

    Luke shot up to his feet too and pointed a finger at Josh. "Uh-uh. No way are you going to defeat me. Superman is much better than Spiderman!"

    "Oh yeah?" Josh asked, blue eyes challenging Luke.

    "Yeah!" Luke replied.

    ✧✧•✧✧

    "Take that!" Spiderman shot a large mass of sticky spiderwebs at Superman, causing the latter hero to get tangled up in the strands. Superman could still fly though and rapidly gained on Spiderman, who was swinging away on spiderwebs.

    Superman sped up even faster. As he went, he muttered, "You're not getting away from me just yet, Spiderman." With a loud roar, Superman slammed into Spiderman, both of their bodies tumbling to the ground.

    ✧✧•✧✧

    SNAP!

    "Aw, darn!"

    "You broke him!"

    "I didn't know these things were so easy to break," Joshua said. He looked down at his shoes and fiddled with his fingers, dirty blonde hair falling to cover his eyes. "I'm sorry, Luke. It was an accident."

    Luke looked to his friend. "...It's okay, I guess. I mean, it's only an arm. I can ask my dad if he can fix it. He's a great mech-mecha. Um... He's a great toy fixer!"

    Josh was glad that his friend didn't stay mad at him for long. "But now that Superman and Spiderman are broken, what can we do for the rest of recess?”

    “Hm…” Luke thought for a few moments before his brown eyes lit up as he thought of an idea. "I got it! We could be heroes! We can pretend we are the heroes of the whole universe with amazing powers. No bad guy can defeat us!"

    "Gosh, that's a great idea! I wish I thought of that." Climbing onto a platform, Joshua struck a post and flexed his non-existent muscles again. "I am the amazing Flame Boy! No one can defeat me or my best superhero friend! Fwsh, whoosh." At the end of his introduction, Josh shot imaginary flames out of the palms of his hands before jumping off the platform and onto the ground.

    Luke flipped Josh a 'thumbs up' sign before climbing onto the platform. "I am the fantastic Ice Master! With Flame Boy, we are invi-invisi-invincible!" Luke jumped off the platform and pretended to freeze a path of ice across the playground.

    "Are you ready to defeat the evil Shadow Girl?" Josh asked.

    Luke nodded. "I was born ready!"

    "LUUKEEE! JOSSHHH! STOP!!" Krista screamed, running away from the two boys who were chasing her with fistfuls of mulch.

    "Take that!"

    "Ha!"

    As Krista ran into the school building, Luke and Josh slowed to a stop before looking at each other.

    "Nice work, partner."

    "You did well too."


✧✧ I thought that "We could be hero's!" was incorrect grammar so I changed it to "heroes". Apologies if I got anything about the superheroes wrong! I haven't watched many Marvel or DC comics superhero movies but I do planning to watch more soon at least that's what I keep telling myself. Let me know if you see any mistakes and I'll fix it! Also, what do you think of how I wrote Luke and Joshua? I feel like they might have been too mature or too immature for their age, especially in actions and vocabulary. It has been a while since I wrote about characters so young.
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Re: ✧✧ 100 One-Shots [Flo's Challenge]

Postby Ranger of the North » Wed Jan 18, 2017 7:06 pm

N'awww they're so cuute cx
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Re: ✧✧ 100 One-Shots [Flo's Challenge]

Postby 200765 » Thu Jan 19, 2017 12:03 am

@Ranger : Thank you! >.<
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✧✧ [003] "We should be lovers..."

Postby 200765 » Fri Jan 20, 2017 9:37 am

    It was late (or really early), about one o'clock in the morning. Shutting the door of the apartment behind him, Tyler sighed and placed his backpack on the floor. He had just returned from work. Normally, he arrived at the apartment at seven or eight, but today he had worked overtime and had fallen asleep at his desk. Nobody had woken him up and it took a half hour to drive back home.

    As Tyler undid his tie and walked down the hallway, he noticed a faint light streaming through the crack in his roommate's door.

    Roommate.

    Best friend.

    The girl he had fallen in love with.

    Entering Michelle's bedroom, a small, adoring smile appeared on his face as he gazed at the brunette who was asleep, slumped over some papers. Tyler moved closer to Michelle and noticed the slight creases on her forehead. She must be uncomfortable, sleeping like that. She'll probably get neck cramps in the morning. With those thoughts, Tyler gently pulled Michelle's chair out from the desk and used one arm to keep her from falling forward. Then he picked her up, one arm under her knees and another supporting her back. She stirred, but did not wake up. He carried her to her bed and softly placed her down on her lavender covers.

    Tyler sat on the edge of Michelle's bed, looking down at her. Picking up a few strands of her hair between his fingers, he let out a quiet sigh as his eyes shone with the feelings he had for her.

    Bzzz. Bzzz.

    Michelle’s cell phone vibrated on the desk as the buzzing sound filled the quiet room. The name ‘Chase’ flashed on the screen.

    A sudden shifting caused Tyler to look down at Michelle, who had moved a bit at the sound of her phone. He did not want her to wake up so he picked up the cell and hit the green ‘answer’ button.

    “Michelle?” A deep and smooth voice asked.

    “Sorry, Chase, this is Tyler. Michelle’s asleep.” Tyler kept his voice quiet so that he wouldn’t disturb Michelle.

    “Ah, all right. It is rather late.”

    “Can I help you with anything?”

    “I wanted to talk to Michelle about something. But I have something to tell you too.”

    Tyler heard Chase’s serious tone. He stiffened and shifted the phone to his other ear before playing with Michelle’s hair again. “Go ahead.”

    Chase took a deep breath, the sound audible from Tyler’s side of the phone. “I… I plan on asking Michelle to marry me. And I would like to receive your blessing as Michelle’s best friend.”

    Something caught in Tyler’s throat as he felt an ache in his chest. “You–” his voice cracked and he cleared his throat before starting again. “You really love her?”

    Chase did not hesitate for a single moment. “I do.”

    Tyler recalled all the days he had spent together with Michelle. From sophomore year in high school, to graduation day in college, and to two years ago when Michelle came home, ecstatic that she had been asked out by Chase, a coworker that she had liked for a long while. He remembered the day Michelle had prepared to go on a date with Chase, humming to herself as she braided her long, silky, brown hair. Because of Chase, he witnessed emotions and expressions Michelle had never shown when she was with him.

    With a heavy heart, he felt that he could never make her as happy as Chase did.

    His brown eyes started to get wet as tears welled in his eyes, though he refused to let them fall. “I know you will take care of Michelle.” That was true. Tyler had seen Chase get sick instead of letting Michelle get wet. He had seen Chase go to the store at midnight to buy Michelle painkillers when she needed them.

    “I...I give you my blessing.”

    “Thank you,” Chase whispered, voice full of emotion.

    “Good night, Chase.”

    “Good night, Tyler. Again, thank you so much.”

    Tyler hung up the phone and placed it back on Michelle’s desk. He let the strands of hair he had been holding slip out from between his fingers. His head dropped down, chin touching his chest in defeat. “We should be lovers…”

    He got up and left Michelle’s bedroom. As he whispered “Good night,” he felt that he was saying “Goodbye.” He went into his own bedroom, feeling numb and wishing that he had confessed his feelings for her years ago before Chase came into the picture.

    But it was too late.

    She would never be his.

    For she belonged to someone else.

✧✧ Aww, poor Tyler. But don't worry, there may be hope for him yet! *Chisa and Tychelle might will be a thing.*

Apologies for the wait! It was harder for me to write something like this, especially from a man's point of view. In case it wasn't clear, the Chase in this one-shot is the Chase in one-shot #1. I have decided that characters will all exist during the same time and that some of them may even interact with each other such as in this one-shot.
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Re: ✧✧ 100 One-Shots [Flo's Challenge]

Postby Pyjaks » Fri Jan 20, 2017 9:43 am

I love your writing style, its so fun to read! and poor Tyler :(
I can't wait for more :)
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Re: ✧✧ 100 One-Shots [Flo's Challenge]

Postby 200765 » Fri Jan 20, 2017 9:59 am

@Pyjaks : I'm glad you enjoyed reading. Ahh, it means a lot to hear that you like my writing!
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