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Vengeance ➴➴

Postby floki, » Sun Aug 21, 2016 11:24 am

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" AND SHE NAMED THEM VENGEANCE "
a short, fantasy, story.

Edit: I FINALLY HAVE A PLOT FIGURED OUT. yaa.

okay so it is going along the lines of a young girl who is forced into marriage with
a man who is the captain of a pirate ship. but when she is forced to work as
the ships cook, she begins learning things. both the good, and bad. there is going
to be a major feud between two pirate captains, and a revenge against the other.
yaaay.
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table of contents ➴➴

Postby floki, » Sun Aug 21, 2016 11:45 am

the king and his men
━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ took the queen from her bed ━━
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//: one : posted 9/1 || updates : n/a
//: two : posted 11/8 || updates : n/a
//: three : posted 12/14 || updates : n/a
//: four : posted 2/20 || updates n/a
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reserved ➴➴

Postby floki, » Sun Aug 21, 2016 12:30 pm

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now as one ➴➴

Postby floki, » Fri Sep 02, 2016 9:09 am

One.

My knees were already turning grotesque shades of purple and green. Kneeling before Goddesses
alter, I prayed the evening away, pleading for guidance to be granted upon me. With every prayer
spoken, my hands shook vigorously. The very thought of the idea had made my stomach turn
inside out. I was terrified. At the young age of seventeen, my life had already been planned out
before me. For three gold coins and a couple turnips, my father sold me off to a nameless man.

"He is an agreeable man," he spoke coldly to me before turning his back.

It was no secret that Father never wanted a girl. I was incapable to work in the fields, or carry
the family name. In his eyes, I was merely a pestering insect that fed off his bread. Upon the
night of my birth, Mother grew terribly ill and died within hours. Father had lost all chances
for a male and was now stuck with me.

"Ye will work for yer bed, your food. And if your work is then deemed good enough, shall
ye sleep and feast. But ye will not dine with me."


For seventeen years I worked as Fathers cook and personal worker in the fields. Though I could
not till the soil long, I did help seed the earth with Turnips and fresh greens.

Shifting from the uncomfortable position on the floor, I took to my feet. With wobbling knees,
I stepped out of the small alter room, and made my way up the creaking steps that led to the
main floor of our small cottage. Peering at the top of the steps, I observed Father, who sat in
one of the chairs in the corner. A pipe hung low from his mouth puffing great white clouds of
smoke. His dark eyes squinted towards me, before he slowly rose from his seat.

"Ye better be done with those damn prayers," he spat. "There is a dinner to be cooked."



Father and I waited at the steps of the poorly built Chapel. Standing under the arch of the
Goddesses open arms, I watched carefully for the names less man to appear from the shadows
of the night. I had thought it odd that the man I was to wed, were to request to be married
under the cover of night, but I did not dare to question father.

The soft tapping of heels came. Turning my head towards the sound, I made out the distant
figure of a man approach. The tightly wrapped cloak made it impossible to see his face, or
any part of his body.

"Do not say a word, Diana," father hissed in my ear as the strange man approached. His
hand gripped my arm tightly to where his nails buried themselves in my dark skin. "Yer late."

The man stopped bellow us, and slowly gave a nod.

"Is she for yer liking?" Father sneered as he pushed me in front of him.

Clad in a simple white cotton gown, I was not bride worthy, but yet the cloaked man nodded.

"Then shall we go on with this damn ceremony. Me bones ache in this cold night."

The chapel was very plain. There were only five rows of cushions and small tables. At the
front was the two alters. One for the God, and the other for the Goddess. A moons adorned
the Goddesses while the sun splattered across the Gods. Quickly spitting out a quick pray,
I made my way up towards the front of the chapel. Clenching my fists, I knelt before the
Goddesses alter while my husband to me did the same to the Gods.

For an hour, we sat together in prayer. His head bowed as well as mine. I dared not sneak
a peek of his features from underneath the cloak.

"I pray for courage. I pray for guidance," the words tumbled out of my mouth in
squeaks.

He said nothing, simply nodded his head. Father on the other hand strode from the back
of the room towards the alters. Producing a dagger from his boot, he grabbed a handful
of my hair.

"Ye hair be gone. For the rest of yer days, ye shall walk as a shadow behind this man.
Yer hair shall not be needed, for it will only attract the attention of unwanted demons.
Ye shall be faithful, or Gods condemn you to hell."


Placing the tip of the blade to my dark brown curls, he slowly began slicing away pieces
of hair. Within minutes my long hair that once hung bellow my butt, was now at my
shoulders. Father stepped back once it was done, allowing me to run my fingers through
the lack of hair I now had. Sniffling softly, I bowed my head once again and gave one
last silent prayer.

"And now, the unity."

I turned to face the cloaked man. Quickly he grasped my hands, and tightly gripped them,
his thumbs brushing up against my palms.

"Gods be the witness, yer married." Father glared over at me, before turning
swiftly and exiting the church. I was no longer his problem.
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Re: Vengeance ➴➴

Postby Ranger of the North » Fri Sep 02, 2016 9:40 am

Hhhhhhh
I've been waiting for ages for you to begin XD
And now you have!
And aahh!!
Ah!
No!
I must. Have. More. Now.
Please?
AH!!

I love it! :D
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Re: Vengeance ➴➴

Postby floki, » Sat Sep 03, 2016 11:32 am

      oh my goodness 0.0 hello. i am so sorry it took so long.
      this first chapter literally gave me a head ache to write.
      it was so hard to find the words to begin this story. XD
      i have this grand idea, and i couldn't even figure out how
      to start it. haha.

      i am planning on posting the next chapter here soon.
      i mean like days to a week. ^-^ yay!!!
━━━━━━━━━━━ "Dulcius Ex Asperis"
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Re: Vengeance ➴➴

Postby Ranger of the North » Sun Sep 04, 2016 10:07 am

floki, wrote:
      oh my goodness 0.0 hello. i am so sorry it took so long.
      this first chapter literally gave me a head ache to write.
      it was so hard to find the words to begin this story. XD
      i have this grand idea, and i couldn't even figure out how
      to start it. haha.

      i am planning on posting the next chapter here soon.
      i mean like days to a week. ^-^ yay!!!

Hi XD

Ah, yes, I can relate to that
can't squeeze the durn story out -_-
what a pain

well, I'm glad you managed it! :D

Oo yay! As long as you update sometime I'll be happy waiting in my little corner XD *opens a packet of chips*
...want some?
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Re: Vengeance ➴➴

Postby floki, » Fri Sep 09, 2016 9:50 am

    i am glad we can relate to this. XD

    thank you!

    i am trying to squeeze a few chapters in here soon, yay!
    and yes i would love some! *grabs a chip and nibbles*
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something here ➴➴

Postby floki, » Wed Nov 09, 2016 1:22 am

Two.

"We are married," My own words tasted foul in my mouth. This man and are to be together
till our days end, and yet I know nothing of him. My mind had already begun racing about who he
was. One in particular sent chills down my spine. A barbarian from the East. Father had hated me,
but the thought of marrying his daughter off towards the people that raid our villages every year
was ridiculous. Though his heart was cold, it wasn't that cold.

The cloaked figure remained silent as he walked beside me. His hands hidden among the dark
rippling fabric. His hands! It had only occurred to me that his hands were not a shade of color I
had seen before. I froze in my spot, staring directly at the cloaked man. "You are a Northerner."

For the last two hundred years our great big land had been divided up into the Northreners, Southerners, and Easters. I had
heard rumors of the people of the north and their white complexions, bright eyes, and wild hair
colors. They wore thick fur pelts to protect them from cold weather and the white stuff that spits
from the sky. They were wild, and very temperamental. I had always thought they were unsuited to
be down here in the hot desert land. I would have thought he would be fried by now.

"How could a person of the cold survive out here in the heat?!" I gasped as I glanced him over.
"You should be-"

His swift movements caught me off guard as he turned and grabbed me by the arm. There, I could see
his glowing green eyes from under his hood. A single strand of red hair curled from underneath.

"Silence." his voice was deep, rich and coaxing.

Turning back to the road, his fingers still wrapped around my small arm, leading me down the path.
From far ahead, I could make out the silhouettes of horses, and another man. Biting my lower lip,
I began to fully understand what was going on.

"You are going to take me back up to the North." I shuddered at my own words, fearing of
the cold.


[[ so sorry it is so short guys. :C i will make the next one longer i promise!
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Re: Vengeance ➴➴

Postby Ranger of the North » Wed Nov 09, 2016 5:55 pm

Oohohoho the situation just took a twist for sure! This is so good though! :D <3
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