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爱 Ghost #400 [kalon]

Postby finch. » Sun Jul 31, 2016 6:44 am

THEME SONG
Elegy of a Living Ghost
made!! by my awesome friend


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warning; i suck at ferals B)
so everything's a bit jumbled feral/furry/human wise
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爱 ref evolution [400]

Postby finch. » Fri Aug 05, 2016 5:03 am

REFERENCE

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f̲e̳r̦a̺l̠ ͖r̪e̮f͉

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h̼u̜m̲ąn̼ ̳r͚eͅf̡

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爱 ref notes [400]

Postby finch. » Fri Aug 05, 2016 5:04 am

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notable edits
- 9 snake tails
- some scales
- 8 eyes
- 4 horns
- snake tongue
- can unhinge jaw like a snake
- fades off into smokey stuff
- the shine is the character '爱' on his
- chest over where his heart would be
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powers
- invisibility
- on/off tangibility
- floating and levitating
- doesn't exactly glow, but shadows just don't affect them
- pretty much typical ghost stuff










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standard | teeth edit
common | hair edit, longer fur (front and back leg tufts)
uncommon | custom pupil, ears, and tongue
rare | horns, extra eyes, no shine
legendary | 9 tails, supernatural abilities, shine elsewhere on body
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爱 story [400]

Postby finch. » Fri Aug 05, 2016 5:05 am

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STORY
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Music: Elegy of a Living Ghost
MADE BY MY FRIEND BEACUSE THEYRE COOL


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when he was alive, he hated everyone
not a single shard of love to give, only loving himself
selfish and taking

when he was alive, he was cursed at daily
death threats and stones thrown
and an eye he did not blink
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he terrorized back
proved his menace
now they speak quietly, behind his back

flinching at his gaze
they cowered
and he smiled at the smell of fear








now he's dead
killed in the middle of the night
vengeance for a life he took for show
for glory

tears of tormenting revenge laid his death bed


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and the gods heard the overflowing curses and prayers
and the gods heard the pleas and the cries of the broken
the frightened and beaten
for something to change

now he's cursed

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love, a word unknown to him
now he is to love any one thing he sees


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and the gods smiled in satisfaction
that should do it
he shall learn

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he didn't
they had made a mistake
and the gods released a terror

a monster that loves
a terrible terrible love


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his first love was a snake
he loved it so much he didn't want to part with it
ever
never
forever
and so he swallowed it whole

and one he became with it
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his second love was a spider
he loved it so much he didn't want to part with it
ever
never
forever
and so he swallowed it whole

and one he became with it
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his third love was a person
he loved them so much he didn't want to part with them
ever
never
forever

so he stole them away in the middle of the night
to cherish them
forever and ever
only his
forever


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he is a jealous lover
gaurded like a secret
he killed all who even glanced at them
the forest was stained with red and tears
their screams at the discovery of—all they loved
where did they go?
because they were only allowed to love him
he is a selfish lover

and they died with tears and misery


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and it repeats
and repeats
and the cries
and the sorrow
and the horror of the gods as a monster they'd mistakenly created
devoured
his name forgotten even to himself, too full of lovelovelovelovel̸o̸v̵e̷l̷o̵v̵e̵l̷o̵v̷e̷l̶͙̪͎̞ͅo̫͚̖̟̞̻͕v͎̪̺̘̱͕͓e̻͇͉͓̣̖lo̷̰v͡e̢͙̥͖̰̘

and he now stares at you
eyes full of L̵̴̴̷̷̴̸̶̵̷̶̴̴̷̶̵̷̸̶̷̷̷̵̴̶̶̸̶̸̨͎̪͉̼͚̲̭̪̩̲̤͓͇͔̼̥̩̻̘̗̩̺͚̹̙͖̗̩̮͉̪̜̝̰̃̐̂̒̋̔́͂͐͑́͗̈́̈̍͋̊̃̔̉̏̓͑ͥ̍̈́͑͒͗̀̎͊̐̑̐̾̑͆̅̊̚̚͘͟͜͝͝Ơ̸̶̵̸̶̶̷̵̷̶̵̶̶̸̷̸̸̵̸̶̷̧̡̢̛͇͙͎̯̰͓̯̭̩̺̼̙̭̝͖͉̝͉͇̻̐ͯ̆̈̀ͣ̔͒̄́͌̋ͨ̓͊̒̋̈̆͑̂̒̎̑̈́̏͘̚͜͜͞͠ͅV̴̶̷̸̸̴̷̸̶̵͉̳̝͍͓̞̟̣̫͉̔ͫ͌̓̍ͧ̿̌̃ͯ̃ͭ̎́̿̽̚͝͡҉̶̴̷̷̵̵̸̶̴̷̶̷̵̴̸̸̷̸̡̧̛̥̜͖͎͎̻̯̘̭͚̟̜̫̘̬̻͎̼͓͔̱͍͔͉̦̖͚̱͔̩̝͇̈̓̌̌̿̊͂̾̇̔̄̇̿̑̇͆̕ͅĘ̵̴̴̸̷̴̶̴̷̵̵̷̶̴̴̴̸̷̸̸̸̴̶̸̷̶̶̴̴̷̴̵̴̶̨̪̦̞̩̖͙̰͙̗̰̹̗͇̜͓͕͇͉̘̹͖͓͔̬̙̞̦̞͇͎͉̮̬̙̭̯̺̼̮̙͎͑̅̈̒̐̿̈́̋̑ͯ͐ͣ̀͑̑ͧ͂͐̀ͭ̾̈́͊ͭ̅ͨ̏ͥ͑̽͐ͨ̄͂̉̀̈́̒̅̒̀͛̿̾̉̔͘̕͢͡͝͝ͅͅ





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tl;dr wrote: he was greedy, selfish, and narcissistic when he was alive
didnt feel love or warmth or attachment and all of those good stuffs
so the villagers obviously hated him
talking bad about him, cursing him, throwing stones at him, etc

he got ticked off by the stone throwing so he killed some people to set an example
so now no one talks about him when he can hear
there of course is still back talking and cursing him though

one night he was killed for revenge
and the gods heard all of the prayers to change him from the villigers, so they did
they assumed if he could feel love, it would change him
so then he felt love, but uhh... he was kind of... clingy?

he still was extremely greedy, and so he just...
yeah...
yandere in simple terms
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爱 alive [400]

Postby finch. » Fri Aug 05, 2016 5:13 am

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His breathing was torn in pants and intakes, haggard as
he ran. He finally got out. He’s free.

He walked down the street, his face contorted into som-
ething that resembled as if you smelled a pile of rotting
flesh. A woman off to the side stared at him balefully,
whispered, yet obviously loud enough for him to hear.
“What a terrible young man. This village was off without
that menace,” she had said into her friend’s ear. He
barely spared her a glance, somewhere in his mind he
filed that he had spat on her food once. Told her it was
disgusting.
He continued walking. Today was a particularly tiring
one, and he wanted to hurry up and lock himself up at his
house again. It was a mistake to even come out here, he
frowned. He was a newcomer, just moved in a few weeks
ago, and yet his name was set deep into everyone’s mind.
They had taken nicely to newcomers. He didn’t take
nicely to them. Selfish, greedy, narcissistic, misanthropic,
not a single thing others could take to. And he was gen-
erally happy with that, he wanted nothing to do with
them either, but after escaping confinement he had to


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go somewhere. His face darkened as he approached
a man, standing obviously in the path to block him. He
vaguely registered that when this guy came up to greet
him for the first time, he growled at him to shut his
mouth. He sighed angrily through his nose, ready for loud
and annoying bombardments of curses.

Finally with all distractions dealt with, he stood in front
of his house. And he was quiet eager to stay in there for
as long as possible, that feeling vanished quickly.

He sneered, there stood his house, vandalized; eggs thrown
at it with piles of ox manure. A painful impact hit the
back of his head, a rock. He twisted his head around, eye
bags feeling ten times heavier as he glared at the source.
Three impudent brats stared up at him with scowls. The
center one, leader he presumed, opened up his mouth—and
with a voice that grated his ears shouted, “Get out you
stupid!”, arms trembling with rage. What a kid.
He finally found a place cut off enough from the main city.
He wasn’t moving anytime soon. The next village would
be, how many kilometers away? He weighed his options.


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Something seemed to click in his mind as he smiled, the
kids now looking uncertain. This place was quite cut off,
wasn’t it?
And like that, the three kids were gone.

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He walked with a bounce to his step after that; a gleeful
smirk on his face as he peered at the horrified faces
through the corner of his eyes. Now, he came out more
frequently, enjoying the way they’d swiftly turn away
and pretend to return to business when he looked in their
direction. It was always eerily quiet went he went out now.
Amazing how far a few examples went. Everything ran so
much more smoothly now.

He returned to his house, falling asleep to the moon rising.


But he didn’t wake up, tears and red laid on his bed. At this
point, he didn’t even know who had done it. There were
too many that would.

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爱 dead [400]

Postby finch. » Fri Aug 05, 2016 5:15 am

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It was dark. Well, what did he expect really. In his mind, he wondered vaguely if he was going to go there—it’d be fitting. It wasn’t like he was going to end up someplace nice, with what he’s done.

It sort of felt like he was floating.

Until it didn’t.

He felt a cool sensation on where his back would be… grass tickling at his face. A breeze. His eyes shot open instantly, wide with shock. He laid there frozen, not knowing what. He sat up slowly, feeling his body? work. He slouched over, staring at the hypnotically swaying grass, frozen frozen frozen. He could feel an empty ache in his heart, a longing.
For what? he thought incredulously. He clutched his chest, not knowing what what whatwhat, why? He felt the illusion of his heart beating fast in his ears, ringing. And he sat there.

A snake slithered in front of him. His eyes locked onto it instantly, longing growing and growing and growing…?grow-w… it was a beautiful creature. He stared at it as it glided along. It’s pale white scales seeming to glow. It was beautiful. His heart sped up.

It woul̟d̖n̠’͜t̮ ̢e̘s̪c̴̸̗͚̹a̴̷̧̘̥p̸̶̥̻͖e̶̷͎̣̫.



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It was so painful. Yet it felt so right.

His body grew scales and his eyes to slits. Shifting parts and gears in an imaginary flesh bag. He heaved deeply. They were now together, never apart. His heart swelled and a smile broke out on his face, feeling out of place and strange. Like a tear in a blank canvas.

The newly scaled tail flailed wildly behind him, new life breathed into it. It wriggled wildly, as if knowing that it shouldn’t be there. Taken from its master and blended into a new being. Maybe he could feel the snake protesting and wriggling inside his stomach. Or maybe that was an illusion. He didn’t know. He didn’t know much at all. This new sense and feeling made everything seem so exhilarating.

The eyes were a funny sensation.

It sort of felt like and itch at first. Terribly itchy. And then suddenly there were new sights and reach added to his vision. Those eyes could look there, and these eyes could look here. He gave a breathless giggle.

Too bad he couldn’t literally have eyes on the back of his head. The hair would probably block its vision.

Everything felt so nice.


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He heard footsteps, crunching through the leaves. He was curious. Peeking through the trees, he spotted someone. They resembled him—in the way they had the same number of limbs. Same number of eyes. Or at least used to. His eight eyes blinked at them curiously, snake tail whipping side to side soundlessly.

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He lovingly stared into their eyes. The others were wide with… fear? Ah. Of course not. That would be impossible. There was no threat from him. He loved them so much.

He must be mistaken.

They whispered quietly—strained. “What happened to them…?”

The tears created kaleidoscopes in their eyes. It was beautiful. They were so beautiful.

He felt something ugly curl in his chest. But why would they want to know? They didn’t need those others. They only needed him. Did they plan to cheat on him? Why would they want others.

Jealousy. Jealousy Jealously JealouslyJealouslyjealously.
He breathed out deeply through his nose, his newly red hair fanning around him. Dyed red with the— His tails encompassed them both. Tightening and closing in further.

Their shining beautiful eyes widened even further. They repeated a mantra of no’s, slowly increasing with volume and desperation.
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爱 extra art + refs [400]

Postby finch. » Fri Aug 05, 2016 5:16 am

EXTRA ART


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EXTRA REFERENCES
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furry ref dead (current)
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爱 count + authors notes [400]

Postby finch. » Wed Aug 10, 2016 7:03 am

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AUTHOR'S NOTES
heavy sigh. i think i've shortened my lifespan with this. why did i think gifs were a good idea.
when i counted up everything i was actually shocked at wow. i must have a lot of free time.
57 separate pieces drawn?? 14 of them animated??? what was i even thinking LMAO.
regardless i hope you enjoyed this! i did not! JKJK (at least the making part of it)
ahahah i actually did have fun writing up the stories and etc though, so it wasn't all torture.
but i have to admit. MY CODING LOOKS HIDEOUS LOLOLOL////
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WORD COUNT (stories only)
    1,684

ART COUNT

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ART
► 1 [feral][naked][hair][clothes] ref
► 2 [human ref]
► 3 [ref notes 1]
► 4 [ref notes 2]
► 5 [story 1]
► 6 [story 2]
► 7 [snake 1]
► 8 [snake 2]
► 9 [spider 1]
► 10 [spider 2]
► 11 [alive header]
► 12 [alive 1]
► 13 [alive 2]
► 14 [alive 3]
► 15 [alive footer]
► 16 [dead 1]
► 17 [dead 2]
► 18 [extra 1]
► 19 [extra 2]
► 20 [extra 3]
► 21 [extra 4]
► 22 [extra 5]
► 23 [extra 6]
► 24 [extra 7]
► 25 [extra 8]
► 26 [extra 9]
► 27 [extra 10]
► 28 [furry ref alive]
► 29 [hair down] [hair up]
► 30 [furry dead ref]
► 31 [furry snake ref]
► 32 [furry spider ref]
► 33 [furry dead current ref]
► 34 [dead 3]
► 35 [dead 4]
► 36 dead [header][footer]
► 37 [elegy of a living ghost]
► ...
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GIFS
► 1 [main thread link]
► 2 [curse 1]
► 3 [curse 2]
► 4 [curse 3]
► 5 [curse 4]
► 6 [snake 1]
► 7 [snake 2]
► 8 [spider 1]
► 9 [spider 2]
► 10 [header thread]
► 11 [header border 1]
► 12 [header border 2]
► 13 [person border 1]
► 14 [person border 2]
► ...
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BORDERS
► 1 [header border 1]
► 2 [header border 2]
► 3 [ref border 1]
► 4 [ref border 2]
► 5 [story border 1]
► 6 [story border 2]
► 7 [snake border]
► 8 [spider border]
► 9 [person border 1]
► 10 [person border 2]
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TOTAL ART (not counting duplicates)
    57

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