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by J-Hope » Mon Jul 18, 2016 10:06 am
Tryout for this kiamara qt,
I am a non owner yes ; o ;
I now co own 1 Kia with tharrot
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[ Hyo || Male || River emperor ]
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HyoSuke is a smol river emperor.
Despite having this title, HyoSuke
never really talks about it all too much.
Instead, he enjoys watching fireflies
& drinking tea in small Japanese
gardens.
He was born on the night of the
"coldest days", where a disastrous
blizzard had struck his small village.
Surprisingly enough, the river did
not freeze up & was still warm &
swarming with small fish.
When HyoSuke was born, he was
warm & filled with life, thus
giving him the nickname "River prince." ║
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by J-Hope » Mon Jul 18, 2016 10:41 am
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── WHAT WAS ──

♞ M I N E ♞
───IS ───

我 很 想 你
【 I really miss you 】xxxxxxxxxxxx
Like a typical cheesy fairytale, Hyosuke was taken away as a baby & grew up not knowing who he was. But this fairytale, sadly, does not have a happy ending. HyoSuke was taken away by rebels who were raiding the corrupt kingdom that he was born in. Although they did not want to spare him given the fact that he held the royal bloodline to the kingdom, they still did not have the heart to end his precious life. Instead, they gave him to an old kiamara villager to raise him. The female kiamara raised him like he was her own son & loved him very much. Growing up, Hyo was very loud & energetic, & was always pulling pranks on local villagers. His favorite spot was the river near his home, & every night he would sit there by himself & sing songs. Hyo was also very rebellious, & the only person he would listen to was his mother. His favorite thing was watching the floating lanterns at night during new years.
Unfortunately, nothing good lasts forever. Especially not for Hyo. On a cold winter night 16 years after the raid, the kingdom attacked the small village in search of the lost prince. They seize a very confused & unwilling Hyo & burn down the rest of the village, leaving him in oblivion. They take Hyo back, & his biological parents reveal to Hyo the truth. Along with this, Hyo's biological father also revealed that he was dying of a mysterious disease & needed Hyo to take the crown. Despite being given the fact that he had the power to rule, Hyo still wanted to go back. Surprised by this, his parents hold him captive & they throw him into a confined stone jail. They planned to keep him there until Hyo gave in. Hyo soon gave in, & he was given 4 years of training to become an emperor. During the time, Hyo was not allowed to leave the kingdom nor talk to anyone, which watered down Hyo's rebellious personality into a shy kiamara. When his biological father died Hyo took the crown & ruled as an emperor, although he was extremely unhappy, he still obliged.
After a few years of ruling, Hyo's kingdom is once again, raided by rebels who are in search of equality & peace. Hyo, tired of everything, gives up his crown to the rebel & suddenly leaves. After years of wandering, Hyo stumbles across a strange modern city & is suddenly hired as an alchemist by a kia. Hyo then takes a few years of training as an alchemist & falls in love with the city. The city causes Hyo's personality to open up again & he has once again become the excited young kiamara he was, just not as rebellious. Hyo spends his days writing, sitting in tea shops, & painting. So far, he has kept his past a secret.


[ Rain || Save Me || Why || I ]
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by J-Hope » Mon Jul 18, 2016 10:53 am

THEN I DRAW OUT

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I was at a loss for words. This was my life. This is what has become of my life. Fear gripped my throat.
I should be happy....But why wasn't I?
This wasn't my life. I was not destined to rule. I wanted to roam free, I wanted to run. But that wasn't going to
happen. My past is gone now, swallowed by the dark shadows that hid behind the corner of every room. My dreams
were shattered like a broken mirror. What I saw of myself was broken. It was in pieces. This is who I am now. I'm
not Hyo or Hyosuke anymore. I am now Emperor Hyosuke. I wanted to scream, to cry.
Please, you guys must have the wrong person. That prince is not me. That was one thing I knew for sure.
I stared at the dark wall in front of me. The room had a gross musty smell to it. Tears welled up inside my eyes. What
happened to mother? Is she okay? Did she escape? Sadness gripped my heart. I knew the answer. But I was too afraid
to face it. There was no way to escape this dungeon. They locked me up here. I rest my head hopelessly on the ground.
What had once been my everything was now a sad, sad, nothing.
"Your food is here." A sudden voice startled me, causing me to jump. My eyes drifted to a small slot in the wall, but I
still couldn't see anything. Before I could react, an object slid from under the door & hit my paw softly. The savory
smell of food touched me & I was tempted to wolf everything down. But I stopped myself. I refused to do it.
"I won't eat it." I simply stated. But the person behind the door didn't care, he just
slammed the slot opening on me. Anger suddenly boiled inside of me. Why were they treating me like this?
I didn't deserve this. Not at all.
I grabbed the plate & threw it against the wall. It hit the wall with a simple bang before clattering to the ground,
leaving bits of warm food everywhere. I didn't have to eat. They can't have a dead emperor to rule.
The anger boiling inside of me suddenly exploded into a bright, hot ball of fire. I wanted to be let out. I ran to the wall
& started banging on the stone wall. It hurt me more than it hurt the wall, but I continued anyways. I continued until
my hands bled & stung with pain. With one last strike I pushed myself away from the wall. It was so hopeless. I didn't
want this doomed royalty. But instead, they forced it onto me. They destroyed my home. My everything.
Tears stung my eyes & not long after I started sobbing like a 5 year old at a supermarket. I knew that no one could
hear me, & even if they did, they wouldn't care. But I continued crying. There was so much pent up emotions
bottled up inside of me. They spilled out of me like water out of a tipped cup. What will happen next?
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I felt a wave of relief wash over me as I watched the kingdom disappear behind me. I knew that it was in good hands. He
had a fiery spirit but a pure heart. Just like the me I lost years ago. It was over. It was finally over. I wanted to cry of
joy. My most painful years was now over. I was free, & I wasn't going to let anyone take that from me ever again.
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Lights lit up my weary soul. The city shined like fireflies against the dark night. I was tired, but the very heart of the city
seemed to keep me awake. It was pulsing with energy, it ran inside the neon signs & electric lights. The city that never
slept. "Hey you." Someone called. Were they talking to me? There were so many people,
surely they must've been calling out to a friend. "Yeah you. Blue hair. I'm talking to you." I
turned around to see a tall kia. The kia grinned at me as he ran up to me. "You up for a crazy job?
Hope you've payed attention in chemistry class!" Job? Chemistry? Sigh, another mistake. I opened my mouth
to clarify to him, but before I could, he grabbed me & dragged me into a large white building. "This is
the lab," he beamed as we arrived in a small white room. I gasped, everything was white like the ground after
a blizzard. It was beautiful. The tall kia saw the look on my face & raised a brow. "Soooo... You look
interested. So are you in?" I nodded, "Y-Yes, I'm in." The kia smiled. "&
just out of curiosity, but how old are you?"
"Twenty-three."
"Great. We'll start training tomorrow."
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Okay, so training wasn't as bad as I thought it would be. But it was pretty scary I'd have to admit. I mean, all these glass
tools & weird substances that have strange names like acid, bases, chemicals... Ugh, it was pretty hard to remember
all of the names, but I'm starting to really like it. The kia also offered me a place to stay as long as I was working for him.
It was a strange feeling, having everything suddenly work out by chance. But I'm not going to take it for granted. I'll work
as hard as I can to be able to finally call this strange city my home.

( Art by Bloodssoul )
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by J-Hope » Mon Jul 18, 2016 11:30 am
YOU ARE A GIFT TO THE WORLD
Strange city;;
What a strange city you are, indeed.
Your neon lights seem to illuminate
the sky. Bright yellow & pink dashes
against the purple canvas. Built,
like glimmering water. Glimmering gold.
You are a strange, strange city, indeed.
So tell me, strange city. How does
your essence lighten up my eyes.
How does it lighten up my soul?
Indeed, you are a strange city.
Painting;;
Colors were splattered on the now dirty
canvas. Flecks of gold, red, & yellow.
I would claim that it is a mess. A
chaotic abundance of spattered paint.
But I cannot, for it is not. The result
is rather spetacular. It is beautiful.
How is it that, such a tangle of exotic
colors can make something so beautiful?
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by J-Hope » Sat Jul 23, 2016 9:29 am

( Art above By Dalgony )


( Shey belongs to TheArcaneKitsune - big thanks for letting me use her <3333 )Shey;; Shey is an adorable shy mess, & Hyo really likes that about her. Hyo usually likes
to bring Shey out on nature walks, or just simply drink tea with her. Although words are
rarely exchanged between them, they make quite a good pair of friends. Hyo believes that
talking is rather tiring, which is the main reason he really enjoys Shey's company.

Jin;; The pairing between Hyo & Jin is rather odd, given the fact that they are
different species. Although, just like Shey, the 3 eyed kalon doesn't talk much either,
making Hyo & Jin great buddies to go watch fireflies together at night with. Although
the pair are not close, they do hang out with each other when they bump into one another.
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by J-Hope » Tue Jul 26, 2016 8:54 am
More like Chemystery

Notes;; BAKING SODA & VINEGAR DO NOT MIX!!! Jeez, why did no one bother to tell me that?
Not only did it scare the crap out of me, but now I have a huge mess to clean up! Ugh, never doing that again.
Other than that, everything is great! We're doing reactions with fire & all that. I should pay attention during
training more, but I've got this... Right?
Update: Never mind, I do not have this. Someone save me... Please

Notes of the day;; MENTOS & SODA DO NOT MIX!!! Why won't anyone tell me stuff like this??? Seems like
everything explodes when mixed together. Despite that, the mentos & soda do make a tasty treat (I heard that it
is not healthy, I wouldn't be surprised. It feels weird on my mouth, it fizzes. Back in the small village we chewed on
sugar canes for sweets & drank tea.) Strange place here isn't it? These "substances" will be the death of me.
I was afraid that I was going to die from the spilled explosion, so I checked in with the professor earlier & he just
laughed & said that it was just soda foam. The hell is that? Never mind that, as long as I am going to live. I guess
my job is pretty fun except for the dying part.
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A note to zuppe : OMF I DID NOT KNOW WHERE WAS GOING WITH THIS I AM SO SORRY FOR THE MESS ; v ; if I ever do win this bab, I'll probs be changing his history a little bit but I promise I'll keep writing & drawing him bc hes such a babe???
Anyways, thank you so much for hosting this contest oml ; o ; best of luck to everyone & thank you again! ❤
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