i need a hero! [♛]

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i need a hero! [♛]

Postby moriarty, » Wed Jan 13, 2016 4:21 pm

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hey everyone who happened to pass by
this is mostly a "storage" for my sort
of novel thing. i'm doing both the 100
scene
challenge and the 100 prompt
challenge! nervous, but excited.
c; i will be basing both of these off m
y charries, oc's if you will. i seriously
have all the free time in the world, so
these will get done. i won't slack!
i would seriously adore you forever
if you read and commented (prefer-
ably pm??) on these! i'm hoping to be
come an other, butttt i get so embarr
ased about my works! plus, no motiv
ation?? idk, making excuses i guess.
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─── ( wxhxexnxxix'xmxxaxrxaxixdx! ) ───
to FALL
"i have died every day waiting for you, you!
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Re: i need a hero! [♛] charries;

Postby moriarty, » Wed Jan 13, 2016 5:17 pm

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maximillion holmes / 20 / superman
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Re: i need a hero! [♛] prompts;

Postby moriarty, » Wed Jan 13, 2016 5:40 pm

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    injury | sinking | father | exploit | boredom |art of conversation | take your best shot | creativity | flash
    | puzzling words | ill | skeleton | nothing | servitude | possibilities | weightless | just say it | last words
    | immature | blazing | help | presence | because | forced | reversed | cast away | emotions | questions
    | wishing | crackling | curl up | together | look again | brief | space | special | jinx | stop fussing | cosy
    | breaking | either or | tell me a story | waiting | willpower | who am i? | idol | unseen | just try | for me?
    | your choice | useful | treasure | ceremony | lightning | protection | stay with me | mint | rescue |
    dominant | thief | deserter | stolen | sarcasm | darling | how much is too much | over | try again | hidden |
    forgotten | the first time | ageing | soldiers | justice | tread carefully | one false step | connection | mess |
    it can't be | in due time | awake | delicious | fallen | trickery | around the bend | well travelled | choices |
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    “Little by little, day by day, okay?” | “Get. Off. Right now.” | “... That’s it.” | “So, uh, we should… probably
    run now.” | “You’re insane! I love it.” | “Hey, I offered to help you.” | “Who’s laughing now?” | “Would you please
    just be quiet?” | “Whoa, buttercup, whoa.” | "I can’t believe you talked me into this." | “Marry me?” | “Hey! I was
    gonna drink that!” | “You did all of this for me?” | “This isn’t over.” | “If you die, I’m gonna kill you.” | “Well, this
    is awkward.” | “It was you who was standing there.” | “That is the stupidest idea you’ve ever had. Of course I’m in.”
    | “Hey, I’m with you, okay? Always.” | “Uh, she’s gunna punch you, man.” | “BAHAHAHA- ahem.” | “I think I am
    concussed.” | “You have got to be kidding me.” | “This ain’t that kind of movie.” | “Is it… dead?” | “I’ll just sit here
    and wait for you to be finished.” | “You wound me.” | “Trust you? PAH.” | “I don’t know who you are.” | “It’s okay.
    I promise. I’m here.” | “Oh, this is going to be good.” | “Well, I finally got your attention.” | “Like a hole in the
    head.” | “I'm... okay.” | “Well, are you coming?” | “Where are your pants!?” | “Help me push it.” | “It’s almost
    midnight, no way!” | “Positively smashing.” | “Don’t let go, okay?” | “You can’t leave me like this.” | “Say that
    to my mother.” | “Sing me a lullaby, please?” | “This hurts worse than I thought it would.” | “Hah! - oh, wait,
    you’re serious?” | “As much as I’d enjoy that…” | -gasp- “The plague!” “No!” “YES.” | “I won’t let you do this.” |
    “I’ve still got it.” | “I can’t do it. I just can’t.” | "Don’t you ever do that again!" | “I thought I lost you.” | "Teach
    me?" | "Don’t you dare throw that snowball-" | "It could be worse." | "We’re in the middle of a thunderstorm and you
    wanna stop and feel the rain?" | "I’ve seen the way you look at me when you think I don’t notice." | “What are you so
    afraid of?” | “How did you get that scar?” | “You said WHAT?” | “Can you stop bringing that up?” | “Wait for
    me!” | “We’ll be dead by morning.” | “STOP TALKING.” | “I do.” | “I don’t want to.” | “What did I ever do to you?!”
    | “Follow me.” | -SIGH- “I can’t reach it.” | “What are you waiting for?” | “WAIT NO THAT’S NOT WHAT I MEANT-”
    | “I don’t need you.” | “You deserve better.” | “If you love something, let it go.” | “Why do I have to wear this?” |
    “Here goes nothing.” | “Where the heck were you?!” | “I don’t need help.” | “We’re gonna be parents…” | “I
    didn’t think you knew.” | “I thought those were poisonous.” | “Don’t make me go alone.” | “I’m sorry… I didn’t
    know.” | “I’d be lost without you.” | “Just leave me!” | “I dare you to…” | “Run!” | “How did you manage that?”
    | “Liar!” | “I don’t even want to be here.” | “Oh crap, we fell asleep!” | “Is this the life you wanted?” | “GIVE ME
    THAT.” | “Get back here!” | “Let go of me!” | “I’ll just follow you.” | “YOU DON’T SAY.” | “And yet, you love me
    anyway.” | “I just thought I’d have a swim.” | “Don’t cry.”
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Re: i need a hero! [♛] prompt #1 ; 1006 words

Postby moriarty, » Mon Jan 18, 2016 2:14 pm

    the red suit that jaelyne's best friend made her was ripping. it was subtle, you could
    barely see it, but her enhanced senses told her otherwise. it was a horrible mistake, slipping out of her dorm
    when she wasn't even supposed to. her eyes burned with hot tears, biting her lip to make sure they
    didn't escape by accident. her ribs ached, she was sure a few were broken. spiderman was right; she was not
    even close to being ready to take down his nemesis. the hobgoblin was nowhere to be seen, and that gave her
    enough time to check on herself. jaelyne took off her mask, long blond hair dropping to her shoulders. fresh
    air entered her lungs, but it barely calmed her jittery nerves. her hands and legs shook uncontrollably, and it
    wasn't even because she stood at the top of the empire state building. jay checked her stomach, and confirmed her
    suspicions. a broken rib, and more injuries she couldn't even look for because of the suit. she assumed her body
    would be covered in purple and dark blue bruises by tomorrow and dark shadows underneath her brown eyes.
    questions would arise, and surely a punishment would be given for her disobedience of the rules. even though
    the thought would kill her a few months earlier, it just fueled on her bitterness now. it was all his fault for
    dying! stupid peter parker, stupid responsibilities! this time, she couldn't help the tears roll down her cheeks,
    shame flooding through her system. by now, the hobgoblin probably left. or was watching from a distance. jaelyne
    slowly slid down so she was sitting, and continued the hectic sobbing, wheezing out curses.

    slowly, very slowly, she calmed down, her cheeks wet with tears. she couldn't stand up, nausea making her head
    split into two and stomach heave with every gasping breath. with nothing to but sit there, exhaustion swept made
    it's own way into her body, and she fell asleep after murmuring gibberish under her breath.

    the light of dawn pierced through her dreams, waking her up. over the night, she had forgotten about the battle
    and where she slept. thinking she was on her bed, jaelyne rolled, and nearly had a heart attack. her arm flashed out to
    grab the edge of the building so she didn't fall to her ultimate death. jay was sure she probably would have recovered
    in enough time to shoot a web at a nearby building, but this would do. she groaned as breathtaking pain erupted in her
    side. oh, right. broken rib. fantastic. choking on many curses, unable to squeeze them out due to her fear of falling
    and the pain. she was grateful for the self-healing powers. they might not be as fast as her mentor's once were, but at
    least she knew she didn't have to go to the hospital.

    now knowing that pulling herself up was not even possible, she was left with only one other option:
    swing to a nearby building (or fall, but she really didn't want to suffer through that). it was too bad that every
    nearby building was so... far down. gulping, she let go of the building with her left hand, right gripping
    the edge with all of the strength she could muster. jaelyne first shot a web to get her mask, and with some struggle,
    she managed to put it on with on hand. almost at once, a sense of warmth was brought upon her. she
    took a deep breath, feeling a bit more confident than before. closing her eyes so she didn't have to see the
    great distance, jay shot the web, its sticky substance freeing from her wrist. it hissed as it went through the cold
    air. a vibration shook through the strand, telling her it connected to something. and so she let go.

    at first, it was merely a fall. jaeylne's eyes snapped open, watching everything happen. it was so quick, the
    things around her a blur as she headed towards the pavement. it seemed like she was wrong, maybe the web
    hadn't connected to anything. just when she thought it was over, the strand straightened out, and
    she was carried through the air. adrenaline coursed through her veins, blocking out the pain
    of her rib and aching arms. she quickly swung through the air, shooting webs left and right, swinging
    to and fro. once the headquarters came into sight, jay let go of the piece she held in her hands, flying above
    numerous other architectures, landing on the rooftop -- well, more like fell. she held out her hands so she didn't
    hit her face, blood now dripping from scraped-up palms.

    the nineteen year old groaned, and crawled to the door that led downstairs. her suit caught on many things on the
    way there, holes torn and increasing in width as she kept moving. it was a long process, needing to take a
    break every few seconds. finally, she laid in front of it. weakly knocking and hoping someone would hear, hopefully
    a medic of some kind, jay rolled over to her side without the broken rib, holding herself.

    if crawling took a while, then the wait was even longer. she guessed by the way the sun was set, it was the
    afternoon. 12 hours of being out, and time increased as she waited. after her millionth knock, she heard feet
    thud on the stairs. the door was pushed open by none other, liam jameston. her heart cried with joy, but all
    she could do was watch him utterly freak out over her, his hands all over, touching bruises and examining
    her poor stomach.

    "jay, you idiot, you gotta stop doing this!" he hissed at her, but his eyes showed compassion and pity for her.
    but he didn't know the pain of losing someone close to you, at least not yet. feeling safer than she had in a long time,
    jaelyne passed out.

    too bad this wasn't going to be the last time she ended up like this.
The CHARACTERS
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mr. liam jameston
and ms. jaelyne hasley

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